Fan Fiction
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Her heart is breaking – Chapter 1
Story written on May 19, 2005 by DarknessDescends.
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(36 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
you write really well, i like it, please keep going :)
Really liking it so far…please continue!!
this story is brill. post agaon soon :)
hey thats really great. good job. i hope you´ll go on soon.
please continue . like shane and carmen and their feelings for each other.
hey I’m definitly interested in this please keep it up
Your English IS PERFECT! I really love this story ,please continue ,please,please!
CARMEN+SHANE-FOREVER!!!
I love it.Please post again soon :)
I need that to read again…..and your english ist very good, I would write my own fan fic if my english would be as good as yours. you are doing really good.
Don’t keep me hanging…I gotta know how things evolve!!!
This is great. please continue!:)
It was great!! i love the drama hehe Keep going! :D