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    Go Ahead, I Don’t Need You _ Chapter Nine

    Story written on June 12, 2005 by Soseover.
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    Number of Comments: 25
    Words: 1458
    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=54670
    Author Notes:

    Bette running off….. (Don’t read the first page, it’s just my author’s note)

    Go Ahead, I Don’t Need You _ Chapter Nine

    (Previously)

    Bette : (looks in Tinas eyes, and in a solemn tone) I said… (as she inches, her lips closer to Tinas) Lets do it… (getting closer to Tinas lips) Lets get marry. (and place a soft kiss on Tinas lips)

    Tina : (giggles) Are you sure?

    Bette : (smiles) Yes.

    Tina : (grinning) All right. Lets do it then, lets do it tonight.

    Bette : (smiles) Lead the way.

    Tina : (smiles) Okay, but first… (draw Bette in, and whispered) Could you, maybe, put on some makeup or an ice pack, because you dont look so good. (as she laughs)

    Bette : (laughing) Shut up! Its your fault. (as she grabbed Tinas butt)

    Tina : (laughs) Yeah, I know. Im sorry. (as she sweeps her thumbs along Bettes cheek)

    Bette :(sighed) … So, are we going to…?

    Tina : (sighed, smiles) Im sorry, I forget that were in Hawaii, and not Las Vegas; theres no 24-hours drive thru chapel. (she laughs)

    Bette : (smiles) Ah ha, so, you were kidding?

    Tina : (sighs) …. No (takes Bettes hands) I do want to marry you….

    Bette : (smiled, whispers) I do too.

    Tina : (smiles) ….Bette, are you really sure about this?

    Bette : Yes. I am.

    Tina : (sighs) All right then, we can wait until tomorrow, cant we?

    Bette : (smiles) Then tomorrow it is. (as she leans in, placing a soft kiss on Tinas lips)

    Tina : (resting on Bettes shoulder) Bette….. I have to tell you something….. (twirling Bettes hair with her finger)

    Bette : Okay, what is it? ( with her hand gliding in and out of Tinas hair)

    Tina : (sighs) …… that… I knew, who you were…. before today…. I saw you at… (Bette interrupted)

    Bette : (smiles ) …. at the Exhibition in New York.

    Tina : (pulled back, looks at Bette) What?!

    Bette : (laughs) Yes, Ms Red dress, I remembered you, too. I may not have caught your name, but I remembered you. (chuckles) How could I not? You were staring at me the entire night…. You know, I had a big argument, that night, with my girlfriend… I mean, ex girlfriend, because of you…

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    1. Damm and let the drama began. I think I might know something but might not. So it was bette with laurel and tina with helena?? or am I just thinking this in my head. So now we need to know what happen at the exhibition. And when did Bette figure out that it was the girl in the red dress. Was it between slap 2 or 3. LOL anyways yes I love this story, for many reasons. Please post soon, I was starting to get worried that you weren’t coming back to the land of FF

    7. I’m so torn because I like Laurel; wondered why you don’t have a character name Jennifer. I am so curious – what happened in New York? Something between Tina and Laurel. Are they long lost twin sisters?

      Great story…..

      I went for a drive this morning/afternoon and I can so picture Bette and Tina exchanging vows at Haleiwa – Oahu’s North Shore.
      Thanks for sharing this story.

    15. OK, Imma be real, only because I luv ya, and this story. OK you know Im this stories biggest fan right? GOOD. I love that Tina is so violent…but…humm I didnt like how Bette just bolted and if thatb Bette running to Laurel’s rescue. But Im of course Imma stick with you and this story. And where have you been???It’s been WEEKS. I’ve been waiting. Thank you so much on the congradulations and yes it was fron high school. I’ll be waiting for the next post, hopefully I dont have to wait as long. PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE POST SOON.

    17. Well hello there, Queen of Piggy Back/FAST moped rides…you know, this sassy T of yours makes me laugh. Oh and that’s a good thing, I do LOVE to laugh. I wanted you to know I’m floating out here in cyber space reading your story…yes, even if I have to LOG IN and click on multiple pages (GRR!) ~ see how special you are? Anyway, as a writer, I know how important it is to know someone is out there reading and loving what you’re posting…so I say to Fan Fiction’s Longest Poster, I’m reading…loving…oh and waiting…(“TBC”…sigh…hate those letters even tho I use them myself…LOL)

    19. Holy cow Sose..the drame you entered into the story…..I´m a beliver of love at first sight, but marriage that is way to far girl. But hey it is your story so write what ever comes to your mind. Just loving your story here and I´m looking forward to the next post.

    22. ….. Looks like Tina’s gonna have to fight for Bette!!!!….. the exhibition??…what went down???…Im intregued!!!…….fabulous chapter!!!!

    23. Oh you are leaving us hanging…….damn girl….don’t make us wait too long. But i love the suspense. So glad I figured out to go to each page (wink)because i didn’t want to miss any of this great story. So get to writing and give us more soon.

    24. What do you mean by putting (YWPFT)on hiatus….now I know you´re certainly trying to kill me
      :-)..lol…the hiatus isn´t maybe short it has to be short…About the next chapter(YWPFT)..hmm..let me think “A quiet boring car ride home” or “hot sex in the car”…hmmm…OF COURSE “sex in the car” :-)
      Please post both stories soon again.
      Can´t wait for more.

    25. SAM!!! Hey babe. No I don’t write but yes I do now. LOL…. I do not post so much any more. Now that I am caught up it’s slow going. I have missed you and your story tho. It was a very nice surprise to see you. Wonderful Chapter. I can’t wait for the rest. TK

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