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Love’s Calling (33): One Request
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Bette
(laughing as she moved so that she was partially lying on Tina) “Me too
baby! You know I have missed you a lot while you were away and we may
not get out of this bed for a while.”
Tina (smiling up at Bette): “Is that so? So then we will be working up an appetite?”
Bette (leaning down and kissing Tina’s neck): “Uh huh.”
Tina (moving her head which allowed Bette better access): “So should we order room service now or later?”
Bette (mumbling between kisses): “Later baby, I think we can wait just
a few more minutes. Right now I am only hungry for you. I need to taste
you. Is that okay with you?”
Tina (passion filling her voice): “God yes!”
Bette (moving down so she was positioned between Tina’s legs): “Hmmm you smell good.”
Bette had just leaned down and run her tongue along Tina’s ***** when
Todd knocked on Tina’s door. Neither Bette nor Tina heard the knock, as
they were lost in their own world. Neither Bette nor Tina
realized that the door hadn’t been completely closed when Todd knocked
and the door slowly began to open.
Todd stood there stock still for a moment, clutching a tray containing
two dinners. His persistent manner decided Tina would appreciate
the surprise and now his mind raced ‘*****…whom is surprising
whom?!’
Todd
was unable to move…until Bette and Tina became aware of him standing
there after they heard the sounds of items on the tray moving and the
door hit the wall.
Todd (his mouth and eyes remained wide open in shock as he barely managed to squeak out): “UhRoom Service?”
Bette moved frantically up the bed and grabbed at the bedspread to cover both herself and Tina.
Bette (angrily): “WHAT THE *****?!”
Todd (speechless): “Iuh”
Bette (roaring with rage at the undersized man holding a dinner tray): “Why the ***** are you doing opening the door?”
Todd (stammering for a moment): “IIThe door must not have been completed closed because when I knocked it just came open.’
Bette (her fury growing further): “Just came open my *****!”
Todd (getting upset and his voice rising): “It’s the truth. I was just bringing dinner for Tina and me…”
Bette (looking questioningly at Tina): “YouKNOW this guy?”
Todd just stood there listening and watching as Bette and Tina talked.
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love this story! you two never cease to amaze me with your wonderful chapters. Please continue soon and make sure Todd gets whats coming to him from eithe B or T. ;)
gooooooooooooooood chapter. girls
hey there ladies,I’m slowly catching up but fuck why is it taking so long. lol
what a jaw dropping day. Dude, gotta learn to take a “NO”. yeah… persistence can get you somewhere, but nowhere in some cases. excellent update… lovin this series for sure.
hi ladies – loved it. i mean you have a nekked bette bearing down you on you in a rage. run for the hills, baby, unless your stupid. i understand about being outted. not at work but at church a whole lotta fun. keep it coming.
He might out Tina but bet he still gets a ass kicking from Bette. A lot of women probable know TODD an d knows he is a stupid dog that can understand NO. Thanks
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooosoooooooooooooooooooooooooogooooooooodddddddddddddddddbring me more bring me more…poor Tod, Lucky T
OMG this is great, that Todd is a fucking moron and really want to see Bette kick his fucking ass so bad. Anyway now let see hot stuff coming, post soon please, thanks!
Hey girls, that was great! But you should have let Bette kick Todd’s dwarf ass!! More please..
Todd’s a jerk! I’m glad Bette didn’t go after him.
god..could you imagine..a naked Bette coming at you angry…could be a fantasy. : ) Thanks for the wonderful chapter and you two are simply amazing. albeez…want to go out again?
OK so Todd got an eyefull,and what a sight…lol but the guy is a little weasel…and really needs to be ignored…but that would make for a boreing story so on with the drama…lol lovin it!
aww.so nice to see so many differrent sides of Bette all at once the protector…the lover …so cute
Hey H&S!! Sorry that I’ve been MIA but my computer’s been on the fritz for the past three weeks and I had numerous urges to chuck it out the window. I finally had to get rid of it and purchase a new one. But everything’s good now. :) You have no idea how ecstatic I am to be able to read again!!! Hehe I hope that both of you are doing well!I’m soo happy that Bette surprised Tina!!! *Happy sigh* Too bad that jerk Todd had to ruin everything. Hopefully Tina’s ready for the ramifications of being outed. I’m sure Bette will be there for her every step of the way.
would have loved to see bette kick todd’s ass… its too bad he got a look at bette… that dog… and his comment… if he starts talking… tina could also say he ran out of there with his tail between his legs… scared bette was going to kick his dwarf ass… love this…please continue
Todd, what a dog. The fact that he got a look at them then at Bette…he deserved to get this dwarf ass kicked. I’m quite sure Tina is going to be outted by that idiot, but like AmandaMG stated “tina could also say he ran out of there with his tail between his legs… scared bette was going to kick his dwarf ass.” Really do love your story, please do continue.
You know I’ve always though of Bette as the ‘lion’ and not the lioness. Words like ‘Predatory’ ‘Possessive’ ‘Protective’ ‘Passionate’ always come to mind when I think of her. She has a confidence, dare I say swagger (not literally) about her…she has a very tough exterior. She definitely has a ‘top of the food chain’ disposition. I can actually imagine her saying,”I am Bette Porter here me roar!” She’s powerful and commanding, more so when she has her hair down in that unruly manner – very much like the lion’s mane. I think if Tina wasn’t there, Todd would’ve been too embarrassed to explain how he got 2 black eyes, 1 broken finger, lost his 2 fronth teeth and multiple scratches! Bette would’ve ripped him a new one! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Bette is ever the protector and she will definitely do all in her power to keep her Tina safe from any for of harm.I’m loving the story but I want some angst to help deepend the bond between the two!
I think they had to make sure that the door was locked before they got back to business.. ;) I Heart this story..
the wrath of beete porter todd has not felt it but he will she will do more than kick is ass she will kill him if he hurts tina make the post longer
Ok, here goes nothing. lol. I have been a silent reader since June and I promised I would start commenting so this is the first one. I love this story. You two are great writers. Thanks for sharing your talents.
nice…Todd needed some ass kicked..hes a pig..great as always girls..thanks TEASEheart&soul..do i have to say why????..lol..
It never ceases to amaze me that some people just don’t understand ‘no.’ That you’re just trying to be courteous and some take that as a come on. Am enjoying your dual-writing.
H & S, ladies, you’re tops. I’ve told you I love this story and I do. Wish you had let Bette clean the floor with him but that would have served no purpose except to open his mouth and talk. Maybe Bette can persuade him not to talk later. Love it. post soon please. Thanks.AMANDA, I love the way you think. Hahahahaha.
OMG! I just got to stop reading after Todd enter the room I just scared to read a moment LOL! but your really write really good after that OMG! Whoa! I’m still on shock too OMG! Oh! huh! LOL! Whoa! Thanks this is getting intense Please continue Thanks for update!!!
Great chapter… please MORE soon.Thank you!!!
Another great post….can’t wait for the next :o))
kick ass..!! LOL~ this is great. Bette is juz so sweet..
yep, if not for tina there, todd would be definately be missing several parts of his body…wonderful update, and good to see tina not being completely freak out about being “outed”…they are so great together