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A helping hand and a push in the right direction
A helping hand and a push in the right direction BY Toribio
Eli Porter Kennard (Eli)
So, in my short life I’ve acted on a few crazy ideas but I usually level that out with being pretty responsible. But I have to tell you ever since I started to put my plan into motion I’m starting to think that I may have taken this too far. See initially I was just going to write a letter a couple of months ago to the woman who my aunt Sandy describes as "mom’s long lost love," except for the part where she’s lost apparently they all know where she is and after some digging around so do I (you can find almost anything on the internet). But I’ll explain all that some other time, anyway my uncle Bryce and aunt Sandy caught me writing the letter and somehow they thought that I was writing a letter to a girl I liked their advice was to talk to the girl in person, so after some serious planning I decided to go to L.A. and plead the case in person. So how does a kid my age manage a trip across the country without raising any red flags (I may be doing this for my mom but that doesn’t mean I want to scare her to death thus ending my life), it took a lot of planning and a lot more patience. But here I am, it’s 10am on a Saturday, and I’m standing in front of her house with my backpack (with everything you need to navigate/explore a city), a picture of this woman holding my mom in her arms, a gift I bought her in New York (my best friend Sara helped me pick it out), and dressed in my Sunday’s best (which caught a lot of people’s attention on the city bus). I’m sort of nervous but my aunt Grace always says "never let them see you sweat," so here I go. I press her door bell once but there’s no answer, I press it again but still no answer (her car is in the driveway so I know she’s here), I go back to the door and alternate between ringing the doorbell and knocking on the door (I know its not the most polite way to get someone to open the door or the best conditions to meet her for the first time but my window of time is shrinking and if I want to keep to my schedule I have to get her to open the door).
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(109 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
I’m hooked – I’d defintely come back for more of this story.
Great start, I like it! I alway welcome Tibette beginning. Can’t wait for more :)
This is really good and quite funny – do continue, please
any B&T beginnings or stories are all right in my book, especially when they lead to reconciliation…please continue
Good start. Post more.
TBC??? OF course! Why even ask.
Yes, you have to continue. I like it already and want to know what will happen next between Eli, Bette and Tina of course.
I really like this story. Eli is a quirky, funny little kid. Yea for TiBette!
Eli is quirky and delightful. Please continue.
Eli is great … we all need kid like this!!!! Please continue SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!
loving it-looking forward to the next post
Love Eli!!! He is so smart!! Please continue…thanks!
oh hell yea…….continue soon please…..this is an awesome beginning…….
Eli is something else, you have to continue.
of course you must! this is different i like it! let me see what will happen!
that was really really good, i look forward to the next chapter. Lets hope that tina is still in love with bette
This is good start and Eli is a mini Kennerd&Porter here. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I liked it a lot. I just wished that Eli would have introduced himself as Eli Porter Kennard. Please continue!!!!
Yes please continue! Eli sounds like a firecracker of a kid!
Great start! Please, continue. You’ve got a fan already! I await your next posting! =)
Eli sounds like a mini Tina, goes after what she want and nothing gets in her way. thanks
That is a fantastic start and I can’t wait for more. The die hard B & T fan that I am…you have made my day! post soon
Ohmigosh, this is GREAT. REALLY hope you decide to post more!
yes plz
Nice start. update again soon please.
very good read pls post you have another fan in me
great start!!!