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Now that I have her CH1 (continuation of I have to have her)
Now that I have her. CH1
The Planet almost 2 years to the day of Bette and Tina’s first date.
The Planet was crowded as Tina scanned the patrons for Dana, her best friend of 4 years now.
She saw the slender, vocalist sitting near the back of the restaurant, trying to be unobtrusive.
Unfortunately with Dana, that is almost an impossibility. She exudes sexuality, and charisma through every pore of her body, and every woman within sight picked up on her without even knowing they were doing it. That was why her career over the last two years has soared to gold record levels, and Grammy’s and the like. Dana had made it. And Tina had not had any doubt that she would . Tina sauntered back toward the table watching as Dana gently but firmly turned all of the propositions down without alienating any of the woman, and remained alone at the table waiting for her friend. As Tina approached the table, all eyes followed her, waiting to see her dismissed as they all were. There were quite a few open mouths hanging there as she went to sit down and gave Dana a kiss and a hug.
" Hey Dane. How you doing?" Tina asks.
" I’m better now you’re here, man this is quite the meat market in here lately." She chuckles.
" Not usually, just when you’re here. Then all the women, married or not are hot for your tail, or at least a piece of it in any case." laughed Tina. " It’s still like that when Bette walks in anywhere as well, so get used to it. I know I have had to." Tina expresses still chuckling.
" Wow, so your old lady still has them panting and wetting themselves huh? Good to know it’s still possible when you get up there in age." ducking the smack strategically sent her way, Dana laughs at Tina’s predicable response.
" Hey pal, don’t push it. She is only a few years older than us, and I still remember the drool dribbling down your chin when you first saw her." Tina challenges
" Well shit! TK, she was in a white bikini that left nothing to the imagination. On a body as lethal as hers is, it was torture not to be able to touch that. I was just lucky I realized that she was who she was before I went for a little stroll down mammary lane." Dana protested with a wide smile on her face.
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(44 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
yes, continue, your writing is very good and appreciated
keep going. Loved the humor.
It would b cute if the 4 of them ended up at the same house and loved it….
I saw you on the forums last night and wondered if maybe we’d get a chapter out of you. I had to go back and find the chapter where Tina farted. LMAO This is too sweet. I’m surprised they waited so long!
TBC? But of course. Great humor w/Alice and Dana. Snappy writing.
Ooh… I bet they’re both going to pick the same house! Oops. Did I let the cat out of the bag?
it’s been so long, i had to go back and re-read the first story…wonderful to see that they are still together and in love…and funny about alice, she’s crazy…so, B&T are going to see each other at the same house that they both like perhaps? continue of course
Great start! They would probably pick the same house… great minds think alike! Please post soon :)
I feel such like an idoit. I love this chapter. My mind has fallen on me and it can’t seem to start to work again. I think that I read some of yours but was a silent reader. So now that I am in the land of the living I wanted to say the I love your stories.
Please continue with this. I think its going to be funny if both show at the same house- but I’d rather talk to my partner before I went and put a down on a house; especially in SoCal. Update soon!
This is getting good and let them pick the same house and see the house at the same day. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Hey cdngrl – I’m ecstatic to see you’re back, I loved the old story and I love your writing, so you should definitely continue!!!!! It’s great how they both want to give the ‘perfect gift’ and have the same thing in mind, they’re really soul mates :o)) I hope you’ll post a lot of flashbacks, 2 years is a long time and a lot of NC-17 LOL. More please….
So glad you are back cdn. Can’t wait for more from you.
it was long time ago that your last post but is so nice see another one from you! =) of course you should continue