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All in a Day (Chap 4)
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Previously …
"Ha, I guess not” smiled Bette as she leant in to give her wife another kiss “I love you Tina Kennard.”
“I love you too Bette Porter. Now don’t you think we should get ready to head out?”
“Yes, I guess you are right. Can you believe this will probably be the last time we sit here together just as Tina and Bette?”
“It’s pretty out there, isn’t it?” Tina said as she attempted to ease herself off the couch. “But I’ll be honest with you; I’m looking forward to getting him out of me.”
Bette quickly jumped up to help her wife up. “You really have a way with words” she chuckled.
“OH you still love me” smiled Tina.
“Without a doubt.”
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It was almost 10 am and Alice and Dana sat in the waiting room waiting for the arrival of the new addition.
“It truly is an art” Alice said with a shrug of her shoulders.
“What is?” Dana mumbled from behind her magazine.
“How Shane does that” Alice said as a matter of fact.
“Does what?” Dana asked looking away from her magazine.
“That” Alice said pointing towards Shane at the nurses’ station.
Dana turned to see Shane chatting up the nurses as they continued to work, each one laughing at yet another of Shane’s witty comments.
“That’s pretty impressive” Dana said nonchalantly before returning to her magazine.
“I bet I could do it” Alice said as a mater of fact.
“Excuse me?” Dana practically coughed out, “and what about your wonderful girlfriend?” she said eyeing Alice.
Alice quickly swung around in her chair to face Dana, “No baby, I still love you, I just think I could pick up a nurse too if I really wanted to” she finished turning to look back at the nurses’ station.
“Gee, I am feeling so loved” Dana said flipping to the next page in her magazine rather aggressively.
“Seriously baby, you are the one for me; I just want to give Shane a run for her money. She can’t be thinking she’s the only one with talent.”
“Fine, do your little game” said Dana without looking up. “Just don’t be surprised if you are sleeping by yourself tonight.”
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I hope you have an other chapter on your PC ,just need to hit the send button. You are so wrong to do that to us. unless she had more than two cough up another chapter. You are bad . thaks Love this Dana
NO FAIR :¬( PPS
Kanaf, You are bad !! You are a bad bad person for leaving us hanging like that !! LOL !!! No, but seriously, sometimes I just hate cliffhangers ! Grrrr !! But, in my infinite wisdom, I’ve decided to forgive you for you once again wrote an hilarious chapter. How bad is Alice at hitting on girls ?!! Hahhaha ! She’s crazy that one. In fact, it’s a wonder the men in white didn’t take her away in a straitjacket. I liked Dana’s tactics though. Very smooth. I’m not surprised the nurses fell for that. LOL ! Anyway, I’m wondering how B and T are going to name their precious little one… I think.. ahem… Ulrich ( cough cough ) sounds nice… ( wink ! ). Great chapter Kanaf. You never disappoint us.
I am really enjoying the Alice/Dana interaction in this story. Very cute! I am hoping that all is well with the baby. Thank you for the great story! PPS!!
Ok I am worried, but I am hoping it is completely dramatic for a spectacular reason. I love how Dana turned the tables on Alice and then was so very sweet.
i agree……NO FAIR!!
Is that baby putting up a fight and not wanting to come out, or did that baby boy come out a girl instead? Alice trying to pick up those nurses was a hoot. Dana’s idea was much better and of course Dana being so sweet to Alice. That was clasic Alice at her best.
That was so wrong to leave it like that. Nothing better be wrong other than they had triplets instead.
Can’t believe u leave us like that, you such a tease my friend lol. The game Alice and Dana play are so funny. Ok now please don’t let anything happen to Tina and the baby. I think they having a twins right, hope so lol. Please post more, thanks!
so not fair; leaving me scared for them. baby and tina better b a-o-k. pps
oh come on!! you couldn’t have stopped it there :( please keep’em coming! this is a great story, and love the dana/alice… and of course the bette/tina part!
Um….Kanaf? Where’s the rest? It is somewhere on your computer right? I mean…it didn’t just stop there did it????? Putting the cliffy aside, you had me laughing at a few places in this story!!! Gotta love Alice and Dana. More when you can!
Hey that was not nice, how could you build us up only to let us drop off a high cliff? I’m sure I speak with the majority when I say another chapter needs to be forthcoming and soon.