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The Greatest Love Story Ever Told
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LA 2029
Shane & Alice jumped excitedly of the sofa to greet Lizzie when she arrived at the Porter-Kinnard residence.
“Aunt Lizzie…” The twins squealed while leaping into her open arms.
“Hey you guys…you missed me huh” Lizzie said kneeling down giving her niece and nephew a long awaited hug.
“I missed you” said Shane and kissed his aunt on the cheek which was quickly reciprocated.
“Yeah…yeah….what did you bring us” Alice chipped in more eager for the expected gifts that inevitably followed a long absence.
Lizzie stood upright and ruffled Alice’s hair “Cheeky…in a minute ok” She made steps towards her moms, Tina rose from the sofa and met her daughter half way and took her in a hug. After the usual pleasantries were exchanged still hugging Lizzie sought some assurance from Tina before she approached her other mom
“Is she still mad with me” Lizzie whispered into Tina’s ear.
“I heard that….” Bette said as she joined them “I may be and I quote old and sentimental but I am not deaf”
Tina released her hold on Lizzie and stepped aside hesitantly.
“If I apologize for the old….do I get a hug” Lizzie offered which surprised both her mothers, Lizzie had a stubborn streak that more than matched Bette’s. They didn’t clash often but since Bette had handed over the reins to the Gallery chain to her daughter….. whether it was Bette’s reluctance to completely let go or Lizzie’s need to show she was more than capable filling her mothers impressive shoes their disagreements had increased both in quantity and ferocity…..culminating in the biggest of them all when Lizzie had called from Milan to inform them that she had asked Fabio not only the curator of the Milan gallery but a friend of Bette’s and Tina’s for over 20 years to retire. Bette had been livid and it had all of Tina’s persuasive techniques to stop Bette from flying out there and kicking their daughters scrawny ass.
“Your my daughter Lizzie and I love you… I would never deny you a hug” Bette said wrapping her in her arms.
Lizzie sighed with relief and hugged her mother tight however that bit of Tina that flowed through her genes came to the fore “I was right about the sentimental part”
Before Bette could respond Al who had missed Lizzie’s arrival came bursting out of the bathroom “Hey if it’s not Lizzie….schoosh Porter stop hounding the poor girl….it’s my turn for a hug” Al nudged Bette and uncharacteristically Bette relented without complaint much to the surprise of Tina and Lizzie.
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Love it!!! Thank you Great Update!!!
Oh, yes! Dreams come true. Super!!! :o)
Skimmer great chptr, but i do have to admit that it was very very funny when you hit the wall face frist still laughing. great work as always
nice update glad to see this one back…fist wall funny!!
Yah Skimmer you’re back. Have missed this story. Excellent update. Thank you :) Glad you’re son’s better and sporting an orange cast. Please post when you can. Love this story :)
That was great and funny too, love the way Tina handle Bette lol. Please post more, thanks!
Great chapter skimmer! I love your Tina – she’s fiery and just made of awesome :-) Sweet Bette will only be young once, that’s the time to follow her bliss and take risks that reap big rewards. Thanks and post again soon please
TY for the post, skimmer! Please make sure Al gets a good plastic surgeon…they are living in the right place! I like your feisty Tina keeping Bette in line!
What an awesome post. Love the flashback.
Ahh, nice one, skimmer. I don’t think I’ll listen to the song the same way ever again. Tell you what, that was so good I’ll have to maybe turn the machine off… or maybe I’ll just go cheap and not pay the electricity bill that keeps it running for a bit. Then I can invest the savings into… Something Else. (muah haha) Right, thanks for posting, skimmer. :)
Ahhh…the master has returned with this fabulous story. You have wet my appetite again with your humorous repetoire. Please post again soon…I miss this story.
Skimmer! I’ve missed this story. Great update can’t wait to read more your b and t are such equals I love it
heehee..I love your story skimmer! Thanks for this PPMVS! :) *p.s I hope it didn’t hurt you as bad as it sounded for Alice.*
Yippee!! Skimmer is in the house. So glad you gave us a brilliant and funny update.
I like how Tina handled Bette. And that the issue didn’t stay big and for a long time.
oh no not the bette porter gallery!!! funny tina is gorgeous and makes bette unboring and adorable. thx.
LOL. Would I be in your bad books if I agreed with Skimmers Jr. 1 and 2? Because really, running into the door frame when playing air guitar is… well, I’m sure they’ve said enough. Nice update! Tina’s outburst shocked me, but it was awesome. You rock, Skimmy!
Yay an update of my fav story:))brilliant as usual, now more PLease PPVS
Although I have been reading fan fic for a long long time and am a big Tibette fan, I have only recently started reading your stories. I could kick myself now for not getting there sooner cos it is soooooo GOOD. I am nornally a SR but you can bet your bottom dollar that I will be there catching up with every post. Please keep going even though the L Word is off the air Bette and Tina are still in our hearts. Can’t wait for the next update. Bet your son thinks he’s cool with an orange cast. glad he’s ok. xxx