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Bringing it Home – (Chapter: 11: New Friends)
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‘Listen,’ I began. ‘See you at lunch. We need to talk.’ She nodded in agreement.
‘Yeah, I’ll tell the others.’ We nearly alway ate lunch together but on the odd occasion one of us would have other plans. I had something important to discuss today.
‘See ya, Spence,’ she called as I began to walk away. Outside of school that would have been followed by a hug. Not in the current climate.
‘Later,’ I waved after her retreating form. I must be depressed. I didn’t even enjoy watching her fine bod from behind. I sighed, already counting the minutes to lunch and thinking back to the weekends events.
What the Fuck? Yeah I know. So what the hell happened?
Quick recap anyone? Ok, here we go.
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We all sat down to breakfast on Sunday morning.Well earned I think after all the sex we’d been having! Maggie could hardly walk and Kate was slightly disabled too. I think Kate got ‘punished’ for bragging to Maggie at the party. God knows what those two had been up to but I’d have killed to have been a fly on the wall. I admit I took a moment to imagine all the possible scenarios there.
However, we never got to enjoy breakfast as events unfolded. Kyla got a phone call just as we’d started eating. The caller informed her that a friend of hers, Patrick, had committed suicide. I had never met him. By all accounts he was a nice guy, quiet and kept to himself but Kyla had known him fairly well. Not as well as she thought though. It turns out he was gay, which she hadn’t known, and he had been bullied because of his sexuality. It had become too much and he’d ended his life.
This brought another set of events, concerning Addison, to the fore.
The Friday before the sleepover Addison found a note in her locker. It was typed out on a computer, it could have been from anyone. It basically said that ‘we’, as in whoever had attacked Addison, hadn’t finished with her and were going to take the opportunity to ‘straighten her out’. I had one thought in my mind when I read that and I know she did too.
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Honestly, as a writer myself, I think you need to do what you need to do. Yeah, you want to please your fans and all, but I think having faith in you as a writer is more important. If this is the story you need to tell to make the whole splashely thing more worth while, I say slow and steady wins the race. Don’t rush anything just so we can see Spashley. Cause if you do that than down the road you hit a plot block cause you didn’t do it your way. Take your time, we’ll be patient. Do your thang girl :)…Oh, I haven’t read the chapter yet…I’ll leave a comment when I do.
I agree with everything Stix said. You’re writing for you, comments and readers are just a bonus. I love how the stori is playing out already and I know that when the Spashley storyline beings its gunna be awesome! Seriously, you dont have to rush through its just to please people. Keep it how it is and I’ll keep reading everyday update. Btw, this chapters was HOT. Post more, like now!
Do whatever you think is right. Especially if it comes out like that!
k i read it, and it was hooot. personally im enjoying spencers journey, pms!
take it slow, that is how you planned the story and if it has any more scenes like this i’m alright waiting haha pms
Good things come to those who wait right? And you certainly don’t disappoint, your writing is fab!
omg i luv it, do the long way this rokz!
like the song my parent listens to “baby if you like take your time do it right”. So take it slow and let us enjoy the adventures of all of these young women. Ashley can still make an appearance just like she did at the party. Maybe next time she’ll be sober like Maggie asked. I like Spencer getting alittle manage from another and taken charge with it. oh I need a shower. Please update soon I’m greedy and I need more and more.
yeah, im really enjoying the whole dominant/sweet duplicity of spencer in this story and how she interacts differently with each character. shes got swagger to spare, but im assuming that as in life, if/when she falls in love, that confidence is bound to be shaken in the most dramatic and often humorous ways :)
aqmazinggg pmssss
take ur time. do ur thing. u’re the leader…I follow the leader ;)
this was another amazingly hot chapter. And I think you should definitely make this story as long as possible. I’d love to read more about the other girls lives and more on spencers journey. as long as you promise that the spashley will come, eventually!! Anyways awesome awesome post!!! Pms!!