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Bringing it Home – (Chapter: 32 Crime and Punishment)
‘Yeah, I heard,’ I growled. ‘Good sex was no excuse to keep me up though.’ She just sat there and smiled at me while she squeezed the syrup all over her breakfast.
‘Jealous Ashey washey?’ Maggie teased as she chewed on her breakfast. ‘Want some?’ She pushed the plate towards me in apology but I shook my head.
‘I’m good thanks, just tired,’ I replied as I sat opposite her, facing the door.
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‘So, good night then?’ Ashley asked me, she was trying to hide her interest under the mask of indifference she now seemed to wear almost constantly.
I knew this was for her protection but this morning the old Ashley was making a guest appearance. It had been normal for us to compare notes and discuss potential hook up’s. I wonder how much of this morning’s interest stemmed from her encounter with Spencer yesterday? Ah, but then she said she’d heard me, us last night. Oh, well! I wonder if she was ready to get back on the horse?
‘If you’re interested I could fix you up?’ Those beautiful, warm brown eyes fixed on mine and she seemed at a loss for words.
‘Um,’ a cute frown appeared, she seemed confused. I noticed her breathing increase and she looked anxious.
‘I know a girl I think you’ll like,’ I said softly. ‘She’s the real deal and won’t screw you over.’ I paused and watched her absorb my words. Panic had been replaced by interest so I continued. ‘She’s not into drugs and won’t give a fuck who your parents are.’ I paused again and she nodded for me to continue.
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‘If she’s so great why aren’t you with her?’ It was a valid question. I mean why hadn’t Maggie snapped her up?
‘Oh, I am Ash. I am,’ she held my gaze as her words sunk in and the implied invitation was processed.
‘Ash, I’d trust her with my life and the sex is the best I’ve had.’ She paused again but before I could take offence she continued, ‘Apart from you of course.’ I gave her a small smile so she carried on, ‘But I’ve let her do things to me that we never did.’
I sat back and studied her. A quick raise of her eyebrow confirmed my suspicions, I mean what else was there? We locked in a comfortable stare while I mulled over her words. Our old familiarity had returned very quickly .
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ha first!!yay! that was amazing..u really are the best. PMS soon!!! cant wait for more spashley moments..;)
i’m glad that maggie and spencer were able to get over what had happened as terrible as it was for the both of them.The fact that they were able to move on is great.great update.pms!!
hooooot as always babe! i really hope that maggie finds someone though! ash was all sorts of cute with spencer! i love how much of a smitten kitten she is and you can so feel their intensity! please don’t keep me waiting too long, cause that’s just mean!
O_O uh… how… I spire… hotuh?
First of all, lemmie just say that I’ll strangle the motherfucker who gave you four stars. This has been one of the best updates so far. In fact, I think I can say that this has been THE BEST so far :) The slow build up was excrutiating but oh so rewarding. And then the little SC/AD exchange at the end was a perfect way to end the chapter. I mean, how long have you been writing? This is better than some published books that I’ve read! *cough cough* Twilight *cough* BRAVO!! Btw, my email is crazycrave95@yahoo.com and Aim is crazycrave95
i’m glad you updated, i think i was starting to go through withdrawal! so good, PMS!
OMG, first off i want to say im so glad you posted cuz i was dying to know what happened, and second i think your stories are the hottest and most interesting storie i have ever read! Its amazinggggggggggggggggggggg
Oh well worth the wait . Absolutly one of the best updates I’ve read. Can’t wait for the next.
Man that was hot. I didn’t even notice that I started bitting my nails xD. I was waitiing for this update so bad! PMS!
wow i don’t know how spencer held back damn she is mentally stronger than she thinks and i’m proud of her for it…still can’t believe ashley hasn’t figured it out but with what she has been through i’ll give her a break haha j/k…glad austin finally has someone even if they haven’t had sex yet pms
That was soooooooooo HOTT! jeez, i love that this was so long. Please keep to your promise and post soon, i love this story so much.
omg that wait nearly killed me!! but it was well worth it! that was an amaaaaaazing chapter! so much sex! my minds on overdrive right now. I’m really really looking forward to ashleys reaction when she finds out spencer is maggies lover. it’s gunna be so good! I can’t wait for the next chapter so pleeaase pms!!
omg hotness…pms!!!
hey, i know i’ve already commented, but i just noticed that a few of your chapters were rated four stars. frankly this pisses me off. I want you to know that you really are an amazing writer and a superb story telling. the only reason you’re getting four stars is bc of the lack of spashley sex with is ridic cause you’re sex scenes are so hot. Your characters are amazing and the progression is perfect. i really hope you’re not discouraged bc you’re so talented. there are a lot of readers that just go for the nc17, not having read the story, just for the sex. these are prob the people not giving five star ratings bc of the lack of spashley. not that there is anything wrong with just reading for the sex…do it myself sometimes, but anyone that has read your story knows how awesome it is. whatever, i’m sure you know how great you are…just wanted to let ya know. keep up the great work babe.
ok first of all:the reason it took me so long this time is im grounded…no phone computer mp3 player or tv but i snagged just enough time to get on here fuck school lol second:im glad someone told you to email it to yourself…altho i wish these ppl would give credit lol i was the one who started doing that and telling ppl to do that so they dont lose everything…but its fine lol thirdly:if you want i might be able to help you sepending on what system you have just email me anytime and tell me who it is otherwise i might ignore it lol “jazzie1994_18@hotmail.com” its also my im so you can add it if you want fourthly:i have started making up words fithly:i loved this update cant wait to see how ashley takes the news about spencer and maggie and when everyone is not all in the dark about something sithly:thats going to be one HOT threesome!!seventhly:im no longer conffused…i think lol :P and eithly: these numbers are so fake sorry if it bugs you lol but its kinda funny too :P
I SO CALLED IT! I knew ash was going to start to realize something with the “I’ve missed you” line. so called it!! anyway I think the pacing was fine. I can only imagine how hard it was for spencer to comply to the terms but at the same time I think maggie should get a few more nights of being in control just so things are squared away. I also think spence could have told maggie a little more but I understand why she didn’t. I’m just glad that maggie is seeing what’s already there between the two. and I’m still a bit nervous about ash finding out about what went down with spence and maggie and I think they need to get that all situated very soon before it leads to bad things happening. anyway it was fantastic, and you already know that I’m glad that my crash helped you out a bit lol and thanks for the little shoutout, made my day =)
*blink* *blink blink*ok, the ones that KNOW me know that I don’t usually say this kind of stuff but I’m going to… OMFG!!!!!!!!!Nothing wrong with the pacing. If u would throw another 30 spashley-less chapters I’d be down for it anyways ehehe. So… there’s gonna be spashley in the next chapter, huh?! bring it on! ^^
every post just blows me out of the water
That was freaking amazing. The interactions between Spencer and Ashley are so cute and hot. Then the make up sex with Maggie and the collar was just wow. Thank for the little dedication thing. It was very nice. And this did make me feel better. Once again that was awesome. And I can not wait for more.
hell yea i totally agree with what stix said above me here =)