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Bringing it Home – (Chapter: 32 Crime and Punishment)
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‘I love you Spencer,’ I open my mouth to reply but a finger across my lips stops me. ‘Promise me, please,’ I inhaled sharply as her voice broke on the last word. She was holding back tears.
‘Maggie, I love you, with all my heart. I will never hurt you again.’ I solemnly pledged as I lay still, unmoving beneath her.
She seemed to immediately accept my words and dips to kiss me again. This time she takes control and parts my lips with her tongue then deepens the kiss by pressing the questing muscle into my mouth, she gently explored before pulling back.
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I sat back and looked down at the highly aroused blonde beneath me, as I kissed her one thought kept running through my mind.
How turned on had I been in the kitchen when she was manhandling Ashley? Seeing her with her hands all over the brunette, who was obviously loving it, had put all kinds of idea’s into my head. I’d bring it up with Spencer when I thought the time was right. I think I’d better talk to Ashley too. I know she’s always been up for hmmm, shall we just say ‘group sex’ with me in the past but I didn’t want her slipping back into her other old habits as well.
‘So now you’ve cleared up the misunderstanding with Ashley, what do you think?’ No time like the present! A cute little furrow appeared between her eyes.
‘About Ashley?’ I nodded. ‘Well she doesn’t remember me,’ she snorted and flopped back onto the grass.
‘No, but both times you’ve met before this week she’s been totally out of it Spence,’ I reminded the blonde girl. ‘But do you like her?’ I wiggled my eyebrows suggestively. ‘She was enjoying your demonstration earlier.’
She smiled at the memory and took a little too long to answer me as she got lost in her own little world.
‘Oi, perv much?’ I reached out to tickle her ribs and she giggled.
‘OK, OK!’ she screamed in protest. ‘Yes, I like her. I like her,’ she clarified with a soft smile.
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Should I tell her how much I liked Ashley? I got what she was getting at and to be honest the thought had me dripping. But should I admit my crush, sorry Love for the girl. No. Not yet, that might complicate things and put pressure on the situation. I know Ashley liked me, or at least found me attractive, that much had been obvious. I could only hope we could build something stronger over time.
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ha first!!yay! that was amazing..u really are the best. PMS soon!!! cant wait for more spashley moments..;)
i’m glad that maggie and spencer were able to get over what had happened as terrible as it was for the both of them.The fact that they were able to move on is great.great update.pms!!
hooooot as always babe! i really hope that maggie finds someone though! ash was all sorts of cute with spencer! i love how much of a smitten kitten she is and you can so feel their intensity! please don’t keep me waiting too long, cause that’s just mean!
O_O uh… how… I spire… hotuh?
First of all, lemmie just say that I’ll strangle the motherfucker who gave you four stars. This has been one of the best updates so far. In fact, I think I can say that this has been THE BEST so far :) The slow build up was excrutiating but oh so rewarding. And then the little SC/AD exchange at the end was a perfect way to end the chapter. I mean, how long have you been writing? This is better than some published books that I’ve read! *cough cough* Twilight *cough* BRAVO!! Btw, my email is crazycrave95@yahoo.com and Aim is crazycrave95
i’m glad you updated, i think i was starting to go through withdrawal! so good, PMS!
OMG, first off i want to say im so glad you posted cuz i was dying to know what happened, and second i think your stories are the hottest and most interesting storie i have ever read! Its amazinggggggggggggggggggggg
Oh well worth the wait . Absolutly one of the best updates I’ve read. Can’t wait for the next.
Man that was hot. I didn’t even notice that I started bitting my nails xD. I was waitiing for this update so bad! PMS!
wow i don’t know how spencer held back damn she is mentally stronger than she thinks and i’m proud of her for it…still can’t believe ashley hasn’t figured it out but with what she has been through i’ll give her a break haha j/k…glad austin finally has someone even if they haven’t had sex yet pms
That was soooooooooo HOTT! jeez, i love that this was so long. Please keep to your promise and post soon, i love this story so much.
omg that wait nearly killed me!! but it was well worth it! that was an amaaaaaazing chapter! so much sex! my minds on overdrive right now. I’m really really looking forward to ashleys reaction when she finds out spencer is maggies lover. it’s gunna be so good! I can’t wait for the next chapter so pleeaase pms!!
omg hotness…pms!!!
hey, i know i’ve already commented, but i just noticed that a few of your chapters were rated four stars. frankly this pisses me off. I want you to know that you really are an amazing writer and a superb story telling. the only reason you’re getting four stars is bc of the lack of spashley sex with is ridic cause you’re sex scenes are so hot. Your characters are amazing and the progression is perfect. i really hope you’re not discouraged bc you’re so talented. there are a lot of readers that just go for the nc17, not having read the story, just for the sex. these are prob the people not giving five star ratings bc of the lack of spashley. not that there is anything wrong with just reading for the sex…do it myself sometimes, but anyone that has read your story knows how awesome it is. whatever, i’m sure you know how great you are…just wanted to let ya know. keep up the great work babe.
ok first of all:the reason it took me so long this time is im grounded…no phone computer mp3 player or tv but i snagged just enough time to get on here fuck school lol second:im glad someone told you to email it to yourself…altho i wish these ppl would give credit lol i was the one who started doing that and telling ppl to do that so they dont lose everything…but its fine lol thirdly:if you want i might be able to help you sepending on what system you have just email me anytime and tell me who it is otherwise i might ignore it lol “jazzie1994_18@hotmail.com” its also my im so you can add it if you want fourthly:i have started making up words fithly:i loved this update cant wait to see how ashley takes the news about spencer and maggie and when everyone is not all in the dark about something sithly:thats going to be one HOT threesome!!seventhly:im no longer conffused…i think lol :P and eithly: these numbers are so fake sorry if it bugs you lol but its kinda funny too :P
I SO CALLED IT! I knew ash was going to start to realize something with the “I’ve missed you” line. so called it!! anyway I think the pacing was fine. I can only imagine how hard it was for spencer to comply to the terms but at the same time I think maggie should get a few more nights of being in control just so things are squared away. I also think spence could have told maggie a little more but I understand why she didn’t. I’m just glad that maggie is seeing what’s already there between the two. and I’m still a bit nervous about ash finding out about what went down with spence and maggie and I think they need to get that all situated very soon before it leads to bad things happening. anyway it was fantastic, and you already know that I’m glad that my crash helped you out a bit lol and thanks for the little shoutout, made my day =)
*blink* *blink blink*ok, the ones that KNOW me know that I don’t usually say this kind of stuff but I’m going to… OMFG!!!!!!!!!Nothing wrong with the pacing. If u would throw another 30 spashley-less chapters I’d be down for it anyways ehehe. So… there’s gonna be spashley in the next chapter, huh?! bring it on! ^^
every post just blows me out of the water
That was freaking amazing. The interactions between Spencer and Ashley are so cute and hot. Then the make up sex with Maggie and the collar was just wow. Thank for the little dedication thing. It was very nice. And this did make me feel better. Once again that was awesome. And I can not wait for more.
hell yea i totally agree with what stix said above me here =)