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Bringing it Home – (Chapter: 33 The green eyed monster)
Instead of reaching for the towel I could see she’d left by the house, she took a detour to Spencer and Addy. Addison was still straddling Spencer but my blonde friend had propped herself up on her elbow to improve the view. Her eyes were tracking Ashley as she approached.
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Ah! That had Spencer’s attention. I walked over to the two girls and gave Addison a cool stare before kneeling next to Spencer’s sun bed.
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I felt the cool drops of water hit my skin as Ashley knelt next to me. She looked me directly in the eye before she slowly pushed the edge of my top down and examined the mark Maggie had left. Her finger gently ran over the injury, to say my skin burnt was to say that Hell is a bit warm. Her fingertips left a trail of fire across the sensitive skin and continued up over my chest and neck until they were caressing my lips. The sun was blocked as she lent over me.
‘Sorry baby,’ she purred in my ear before kissing me softly but with such heat that I was swept away.
The kiss lasted mere seconds before she pulled back and smiled softly. I lay there helplessly, my body out of control, heart pounding, chest heaving, clit throbbing, those deep, dark brown eyes gave me a cheeky wink before the brunette stood up. Ashley gave the frowning Addison a smug smirk and stalked into the house, dipping to grab her towel on the way.
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‘Spencer!’ I yelled at my best friend and she looked over with a frown, I raised my eyebrows in query. What the hell had she been up to? Surely she’d have told me if she had slept with Ashley. Surely? Fuck it, when girls got a whiff of those pheromones anything was possible.
‘What the fuck Spencer?’ Addy growled and jumped up, glaring at the blonde below her. Shit, Addy was pissed.
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I looked up at my friend. Her green eyes were angry and I could tell she was upset. We were the center off attention as the others stared at us as the drama unfolded. I gave them a glare and to their credit they tried to be less obvious.
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this was funny yet sweet n amazingly awesome!!!pms!!!!!!!!!!!
oh you all are very welcome and just so youu know….im still grounded…sshhhh dont tell ;) lol i told the cheerleader if she wanted me to do her she had to be quite….blonds what can you do? lol jk jk i have a gf who would kill the girl and me lol i loved this update im not conffused everyone seems good just hope the next chapter everything is out in the open with everyone being with someone(s) and that teaser you gave us…..im very intrested lol :P pms please!! *suries off to jump in the pool*
wow great update i kinda liked possesive addison.lol.This story gets better and better always makes my day when i see this story updated. greeeaaaat update!!! pms!!!!
Yeah I don’t know what to do with myself now…that was great. I love Madison and Kyla together, their so cute. And Addison is a pain, but I like her too =] PMS please!!!
Omfg!!! I love this story! Update soon please! Please!!
that was so great. and Ashley doing the show to piss Addison off was just a cherry on the top of this amazing chapter. PMS!!!
i love all of your updates, and this one was no different… great job, PMS pleeeeease!
Okay, haters. And that’s all I have on that note. Second, aww the ending was so cute. It felt like Austin was a little kid telling a secret they’re not supposed to tell. Awesome when Ashley took credit for the bite haha. Again, amazed at how you keep everything in order even though everything is so intricate. It just baffles me!
*content sigh* .. this story just makes me happy! I saw you’d posted but then I had to go to work and I kept thinking man i want to go home so I can finish reading this chapter! this really was a great one and I loved all the spashley!! I think I’m almost gunna be sad when they get together though because you’ve done such a great job at writing all these other characters that I’ve fallen just as much in love with them all! anyways this was such an amazing chapter and I can’t wait to find out what happens next!
addison needs to be reminded like, every day that she got a girl! where is kate, bring that chick back with a whip. ash is adorable and hooooot. i love that she’s rebuilding her life. Great update. it didn’t feel 24 pgs long at all
OK i have to start off by saying what a great job you did, and that is really an understatement. I’ve been really sick for the past week, and have been on bed rest. I was upset because the fever made me dizzy and i couldn’t check to see if you updated and i was SO not going to the hospital. There was some major pouting on my part. I’m feeling better and then i checked to see you updated and i got all excited, it was a great get well chapter for me. I LOVE THE LENGTH. I like them better when they’re long. I think that you could continue this story without Spencer and Ashley and there would still be a lot of us that would still read it, but Spencer does make the story. I like Addison, but she wasn’t my favorite in this chapter. I’m not saying it was bad, but her jealousy issues are not hot. Spencer correcting her though was. :D I love that Ashley finally took charge of something instead of just sitting back. She couldn’t have picked a better moment. I do hope that the next chapter Spencer and Maggie come clean with Ashley and explain all the ‘complications’. I would also like to see another chapter on The Room mates (Kate’s older sister and her friends) Maybe a house party is needed and all get invited. Sounds nice to me. I feel like Amy is going to get hurt by all of this. Kate does need to come back into the picture to help please Addy. I think there might be a Spashley moment coming up where it’s just the two girls having a heart to heart. Ok well this is getting long and i still have a lot running though my head since i’ve been doing nothing for about a week. I’ll end it with the norm, PMS Please and Keep em Coming. In all sense of the word
i love this story! PMSSSSSSSSSSs
wooooooow… :)))))))) ..Amazing..i haven’t gotten to comment in a while but i’ve been keeping up FOR SURE!!..seriously this story just gets better every update and i LOOOOOOVE it!!..i am getting so excited!..i feel like Spashley is within reach!!!!..and i’m also excited that Spencer is making plans with her girls along the way.. ;P :D :D :D ..PMS Lil D!!!..
all i can say is GAME ON .. and GULP oh boy seems like there are gonna be alot of girls fighting for Spencer and i aboslutely thought it was funny when all the ladies shifted to see Spencer get a rub down , and how Kyla grabbed Madison from her giving Spence the rub down lol ahah those two Crack me up seriously STILL HELLA AWESOME AND OMG COLD SHOWER!!! again ahhaha
Hey!! just read ALL the chaters in one sitting, have to say YOU ROCK! keep up the good work, cant wait for your next instalment!
So many A names that I sometimes get lost and I have to reread. >.< But I like the plushiness. Yes, the plushiness. Grrowl.
Ok first thank you very much for the thing about me being sick. I feel much better now…which you already know haha. I really really liked this update. Ashley is so slick and awesome. Then Spencer just knows how to work people its just cool to see her in action. Kyla and Madison are so sweet together I really like that. And as for just leaving it hanging like that you suck…jk you don’t you know your awesome lol. I can not wait for the next update…even though I kinda technically have to. Well again this was awesome. Good job.
holy hell spence is making plans with maggie & amy AND addy & kate! good lord the girl is busy. so lucky too. oh and I agree with what stix said about addy being reminded over and over because she was seriously pissing me off here! grr. fabulous once again, it’s all like the puzzle is coming together. and you know I’m so stoked about the next chapter because I’m dying for ash to have her ‘light bulb’ moment and remember just who spence is. oh and Pride was great! I’ll be telling you about it shortly. great job, pms!
i love your story i started reading it about a week ago and up todate can’t wait to see what happens with ash and Spencer pms
Awesome update! I love how long the chapter was. I think you are one of the best writer’s in like forever. Sorry about leaving a comment so many day after you posted but I did read it the day it was put up. Love it. PMS plz
I’m not sure if I already left feedback for this chapter or not, but whatever, hahaha. I love this fucking story. I am living off of this story and Marshall Daniel’s…on this site. I am getting anxious, because I feel we are getting closer to Spashley, and I kind of want some “Magley” or Ashgie, or something, hahaha. I hope to see an update again soon.
Oh fuck!!this chapter rocks!!damn its so HOT..!your awesome!..!pms.