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Bringing it Home – (Chapter: 35 Is it the beginning or the end?)
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‘Hey babe,’ I came up behind her and wrapped my arms around her neck. She turned her head and I placed the expected kiss on her cheek before releasing her and taking the seat next to my friend.
I gave her audience a once over, cute, hot, bitch. I assessed them before taking a sip of the beer Bella had ordered for me
‘Who’s your friend?’ the bitch asked and Bella smiled at the barely veiled animosity in her voice.
‘Maggie, pleased to meet you.’ I turned on the charm, she may be a bitch but was likely to be pouring my drinks all night.
‘What can I get ya Maggie?’ The ‘hot’ girl spoke, taking advantage of the situation.
‘What’s on offer?’ I blatantly flirted, I liked this one.
‘Whatever you want,’ the invitation was followed by a wink and I smiled back.
‘How about a beer for now and a dance later?’ She nodded and smiled. It gave me the choice of taking it further later or leaving it at a dance, I’d see how I felt.
‘It’s gonna be a long night,’ she purred as she lent much further over the bar than was required to deliver my beer. The move was designed to give me a good look at the ‘goods’ on offer.
‘Great tits,’ I complimented her as I slipped my fingers into the neck of her top and caressed the top curve of her breast. Her eyes darkened and she licked her lips.
‘Thanks,’ she held my eyes until I pulled my hand back.
‘We’ll be over there,’ I nodded to a secluded seating area, ‘keep ‘em coming?’ She smiled and I nudged Bella who just smirked at me before we ambled away from the bar swinging our hips as we went.
’We sooo bad,’ my friend joked as we settled down, I just snorted and swigged my beer
‘Well, I met Spencer,’ Bella sat back in the low couch and eyed me over our drinks.
I just kept stum and waited to hear what she had to say. I valued her opinion on all matters but I was also curious to see how she’d pass off the little ‘interaction’ between the two of them.
‘She seems nice,’ I watched my friend, she was of Creole descent which explained the dark skin coupled with blue eyes, it was unexpected and added to her striking good looks.
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Wow! soo soo good. I really really like Maggie and Spencer together but I’m excited for the possibility of Spencer and Ashley. I really hope you post more soon.
Hello there. Okay, you big frigging tease, I better see some sandwiches being made in the next few chapters or else there will be hell to pay (and by hell I mean the silent treatment for ten seconds. Gah! I loved Transformers *swoon*) Haha, anyway, yeah, sandwich! Like deluxe tuna melt from steak and shake sandwich. Fuck it, PBnJ even! Give us (and by us I mean me) something. Please, I beg you. I mean, one last time for old time’s sake right? Maggie is kinda getting the short end here. Everyone keeps leaving her. First Ashley left her, Then Kate, then Ashley (again) and Spencer. I guess third times a charm for love? And 3 is a magic number… like three for a sandwich?? hint hint wink wink. XD Crazy
i’m so glad you said transformers 2 was good cuz i really want to see it and your the first i heard say it is good. now for the story…uh oh ashley found out I hope things stay okay and don’t get to complicated. i felt sorry for maggie when she realized spencer was truly in love with ash, kind of like getting her heart broke but not at the same time. pms
kick ass post as always. i apolagize cuz i don’t always leave a comment but i’m a dedicated reader so i’m gonna start tryin to be more devoted to ur story and start leaving comments cuz it really is amazing and i hope u realize that. can’t wait till the next post :)
oh and transformers 2 is a totally kick ass movie!! i suggest to anyone who hasnt saw it to see it cuz i’ve saw it twice and it was amazing both times i watched it. lol plus megan fox is a warrior goddess and sexy as hell. lol
Im gonna agree with crazy I’m in need of a sandwich too. Maybe Maggie and Thea who knows. Tranformers ROCKED.
i don’t think you understand how excited i was when i saw that you had updated!!! can’t wait for the next chapter, PMS pleaseeeee! =]
MORE!
wow shits gonna hit the fan
maaaan i thought we were bout to get a threeway..omg i adore Maggie and feel so bad.. :((( ..i love Spashley and am so excited about them but i’ve grown to love Maggie..can’t wait until she finds that same kinda Spashley love :))) ..and this story never ceases to amaze me.. :))) PMS..
yay, you updated, for some reason i thought i was gonna have to wait longer. lots for everybody to talk about, hopefully it goes well without too much pain! pms!
Great update. Made me want to cry though a little at the end. I love Spencer and Ashley, but I’ve grown to love Maggie. Either way, it’s a awesome way to end the 4th of July! Transformers 2 was awesome! Yeah!
dude! again! like what about 20 chapters ago I so said maggie would end up getting hurt in this!! damn I’m good. lmao j/k hun. I’m so sad that maggie’s taking it so hard right now! and it’s like.. I don’t even know how to explain it. once again the freaking emotions in this chapter had me going, and it’s just going to get even deeper huh? oh man I’m in for it. so now what’s gonna go down when spence and mags tell ash about everything? GRRRR edge of my seat here! can’t even deal! I really don’t want any of them to get hurt! man oh man ok now I’m rambling so I’ll shut the hell up now! anyway will be in touch soon, fantabulous update as always babe!
yay i’m so glad you updated! keep up the awesome wok and post more soon!!! :-P
that was good, as always. Keep em coming!
Wow. that was emotionaly intense. I kind of feel sad about Meggie. I never thought I would say that cuz I’m all about Spashley but I like this character. Maybe you will send her some nice girl as a replacement for Spencer and Ashley… PMS!!!
DAMN..!I feel bad for maggie!I grown to love her in this story!!I like her being protective to spencer..!Maybe you can make ashley,maggie and spencer!I LOVE MAGGIE!!
That was really good. Its like a emotional rollercoaster lol. But PMSSSSSSS
o boy let this not get too messy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awwwwww. That was a good chapter. This isn’t unexpected, when you have sex consistently with the same person, a person who you consider a friend and spend time with, feelings are bound to develop, especially with 2 women. And it’s gonna be the hardest for Maggie, because like she said she will be losing both of her loves. Ashley, who I think was her first love and best friend, and Spencer, her new love. So it’s gonna really be hard for Maggie. They have to come clean with Ashley now. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Can’t wait for the Spashley, and all the heartbroken girls that will be crying when they find out Spencer is off the market.
great it was just great i loved it you did a really good job i can’t wait for spencer and ashley to get together pms please
I freaking love this story but you already know that. I am sorry it takes so long for me to answer emails now. Stef keeps me occupied. Again sorry. But this chapter was awesome. I am glad you did it like this were Maggie has her own like story like to meet up with the others. Its all out now so I am excited to see where it goes.