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Bringing it Home – (Chapter: Loose Ends)
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Shortly after I heard Austin and Maggie returning.
‘I have to let go now but I’m right here baby, OK?’ I knew she couldn’t hear me but how was I going to explain it to the others if she started crashing when I let go of her hand?
I gently released her hand and sat back, away from the bed. Everything stayed calm and the girls entered the room. The nurse had filled them in on the near miss and we stayed most of the night as well.
‘Austin, we ought to get back,’ Maggie quietly suggested. The nurse had just informed us that Ashley had turned the corner and had a good chance of making it.
‘Spencer, you want a lift.’ I shook my head. I wanted to stay.
‘I’ll get Glen to pick me up,’ Maggie nodded, too tired to argue.
‘Bye then,’ she gave me a deep kiss, which I returned. Maggie went ahead, as she left Austin studied me carefully and gave me a soft smile.
‘I’ll text you when were on our way in, you want some clothes?’ She knew I wasn’t going anywhere.
‘Thanks, yeah that would be good,’ I smiled back, she was the best friend I could hope for.
I stayed until the next morning, dozing on the chair next to her bed. When Austin gave me a heads up they were heading over I made my excuses to Ashley.
‘Hey there, I have to go for a little while but I’m gonna be back soon OK sweetie?’ I jumped as I thought I felt her squeeze my hand. No, it had been so weak I must have imagined it. ‘Austin and Maggie are coming over to look after you, OK?’ I reluctantly left her side. I didn’t want to lie to Maggie but my obsession would require some explaining.
I hung around the hospital until Austin let me know they’d left. I found a bag of clean clothes stashed under the bed and I quickly changed. God that felt better. I settled myself back in the chair next to the bed and reached for her hand.
‘Hi sweetie I’m back,’ This time there was no mistaking the squeeze she gave me. I kissed her on the cheek and was rewarded with another gentle squeeze. Oh wow, I was in heaven. The tiny recognition continued for several days as her body healed.
I visited every day and stayed as long as I could. One day I went in and saw that she was breathing on her own and they had removed a lot of the tubes. Taking up my usual position I was disappointed when she didn’t give her usual sign of recognition. I felt a sob get caught in my throat as the tears came.
‘I…..I’ve missed you,’ What? The words were hoarse and almost unintelligible. I looked up into the brown eyes I had missed so much. She gave me a weak smile before her eyes closed again. After I left that day I didn’t see her again. Now she was off the critical list her mother moved her to a private facility.
Well, I didn’t see her again until yesterday. So you can see why I’m upset, right? Then to see her kissing Austin when she knows full well how I feel about Ashley was just another punch in the gut. The eyes I had seen yesterday hadn’t been welcoming, they had been cold and it was killing me.
I still hadn’t heard from Maggie either and that was breaking me too. I was in pieces and just didn’t know what to do so I did what I do best and went for a run. My route took me to Kate’s house.
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I watched through the window as the two figures made out, waist deep in the pool. Who was Maggie with? I couldn’t make out her features, just that she was blonde and all over Maggie. I was transfixed as I stared out into the dark. I saw a bikini top go flying across the deck, Maggie’s. The blonde’s black top soon followed as Maggie reached around and untied it. My view was blocked but I could imagine their breasts pressing together.
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OOOO first commenttt!!!PMSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
omg so much is going on and i can see why spencer is so upset especially with the way ashley had responded to her words and touch at the hospital only to have her basically tell her to fuck off when she saw her again and than have her ‘kissing’ her friend. Spencer is in a hole and her friends need to help her i hope maggie can forgive her because i think spence is going to have a harder time forgiving her self…and sex will probably not be the same if she has it at all without feeling guilty pms
UMMMM INTENSE !!!! but who’s to blame hmmm… But seriously INTENSE !!!!!!!
the hospital scene was amazing. Im so excited for the next chapter! post soon please :)
what emmelts said. PMS
dude…u’ve rendered me speechless with this one…i wonder if ash realized it was spence that was there n not maggie…i also wonder what ash gona do once she realizes its spencer that raped maggie…im like hooked on this story…pms!!!!!
man I knew I shouldn’t have checked to see if there were any updates because as soon as I saw you’d posted I decided to forgo studying and read the chapter instead… so if I fail my chem test tmrw I blame you and your amazing story!!! but for real, this was sooo awesome. I can’t wait to find out what happens next! pms!!
Ok, wow. Everyone pretty much said everything I wanted to say but not Are Kyla and Ashley sisters in this? is that Why Mads was staring at her like that? Who does Ash think Spencer is? Uh, one more thing, Love triangle is SUCH and understatement of what all Spencer’s got going on. It’s more like she’s a spider and each girl has her own line of web and sometimes they get tangled together. LolPost more soon, everyone secretly goes through withdrawl waiting.
okay, lemmie just say this: there is a 95% chance of maggie getting screwed over BIg time at the end of this if she loves spencer/ashley equally (half each). and i’ve come to realize that this whole thing is just one huge shit about to hit the fan, drama infested, love polygon story. AND I LUVS IT! haha. I contimplated being thirty minutes late to my first period class cuz i was reading this in school when i started haha. I love this so much because i feel like im a part of the action, like MY junkie friend just came back or something– writing like that (like how you write) takes talent and skill :) I hope one day I can write like that!
First, let me start off by saying that my time has not been my own lately. I usually do all my ff reading when I’m at work, but your last couple of updates were at a time when I hadn’t been at work. Well…can I just say that today was a really, really good day a work. I got to sit here (Clearly not doing work) and just read several chapters. It was AAAA mazing. Especially this chapter, not to say the others weren’t great as well, but I was really interested in seeing the whole Ash in the hospital thing and the wait soooo paid off. It’s so awesome to see how intense their connection is! I’m so excited for the next update, well, I’m always excited for the next update, but I’m getting manic about it now, so unless you don’t want to see me go insane and therefore unable to do any activities (such as the ones you yourself did this weekend- subsequently pissing off A LOT of ‘friends’ of mine) update asafp!
I know Spencer did a bad thing, but poor Spencer. I hope Maggie forgives her, cause I actually like them together. PMS please!!!
it made my day just to see this posted :-)
There’s so much shit going on but I love it and want more of it! Great, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, spectacular, stupendous, and every other word that’s a synonym for great, update! Can’t wait to read more!!
wow how do you keep track of all this? wait I know.. it’s because you’re freaking brilliant! holy shit I can’t believe everything that went down in the hospital. no wonder spence is so upset, after all of that and then ash being a complete bitch to her?! and wow if and when ash finds out it was spence who hurt maggie… oh man shit’s gonna fly then. yea I can definitely see this being a long VERY bumpy road to spashley! but I’m loving it. and so hmmm where do maggie and spence stand.. is that them together in the teaser… there’s going to be some major tension there that needs to be worked out. anyway rambled enough here.. pms please!
Damn didnt see that coming