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Growing Up – (Chapter: Longing)
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“Lucky me!” We laugh together. I look around her room and my heart drops. All of her pictures are off the walls and her little mementos are packed away. Her closet is almost bare and she has most of the contents of her dresser on her bed.
“I can’t believe you are leaving.”
“Me either.” She sits back on the bed and resumes the folding I had interrupted. I walk over and sit next to her.
“Do you need any help?” I really don’t want to have anything to do with her departure, but I think I owe it to her to ask.
“Yeah right! I’ve seen how you fold clothes. I don’t want to have to iron everything when I get there.”
“Hey, at least I tried.” We sit in a comfortable silence for a while just listening to the soothing sounds of the stereo playing The Fray CD I had burned for her. I lay back on her bed, legs hanging off the edge as she continues her task on my left. I let out a sigh and she turns her head to look down at me.
“Hey.” She pokes me in the stomach and I giggle at her playfulness. “I’ll be back for Christmas.”
“I know.” I put my hands behind my head. “It’s still gonna be hard, you know. Not having you here.”
“You will probably be too wasted all the time to even notice I’m gone. You’ll be having so much fun that at the end of four months you’ll have forgotten all about me.” I am in shock that she would even say that.
“Why would you even joke about that?”
“I’m sorry. I just don’t want you to feel bad. This is hard on me too.” She turns and grabs the last garment to be folded and puts it in the suitcase at her feet.
“I know. It just hurts that you would even think that I could forget you.” She pulls a leg up on the bed so she can lean back on her hand and turns herself towards me.
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ohhhhh….messed up…sooooo messed up, goodness grief! what do i have to do around here to not get so much drama of the “beating around the bush” types lol, but yea im lovin how its going so post more soon!!!!!!!!!
Oooooo….that’s so wrong case..but knew that you would. I still luv ya…it’s awesome please post soon. Ashely better stay…Shoot, thas her womyn…Cheers!!
Ashley needs to start telling how she feels before its too late. put it out on the table. She is leaving anyways. post more soon.
you’re amazing and i love you.
“I can’t” Two worst words, ever!! She SO can. Hehe, but lovely lovely writing, as usual
ohhhhh….messed up…sooooo messed up, goodness grief! what do i have to do around here to not get so much drama of the “beating around the bush” types lol, but yea im lovin how its going so post more soon!!!!!!!!!
Oooooo….that’s so wrong case..but knew that you would. I still luv ya…it’s awesome please post soon. Ashely better stay…Shoot, thas her womyn…Cheers!!
Ashley needs to start telling how she feels before its too late. put it out on the table. She is leaving anyways. post more soon.
you’re amazing and i love you.
“I can’t” Two worst words, ever!! She SO can. Hehe, but lovely lovely writing, as usual
I love your writting so much!!! It’s soooo good. However you cannot leave us hanging for long pleaaaasssseeee……………seriously please.Love it.
I love your writting so much!!! It’s soooo good. However you cannot leave us hanging for long pleaaaasssseeee……………seriously please.Love it.
AWESOME!!…hehe…loved the tickling scene, so cute.
AWESOME!!…hehe…loved the tickling scene, so cute.
you’re good. being able to rile everyone up like this. lol. anyways, you had me going there for a minute, with the whole “i’ve got to tell her how i feel!” moment. I was like oh man, here comes the melodrama. Those cliche moments only come second to last min..or rather, last second airport chases, catching the love of their lives with one foot in the departure gate and then spouting their undying, all encompassing, i love you even when never refill the toilet paper and never wash the dishes kind of love. but whew. you recovered in the believability section when spence was like uh nope, still leaving, and that kiss was a mistake. hah. anyways, still loved it. enough babbling. bring on the next post!
you’re good. being able to rile everyone up like this. lol. anyways, you had me going there for a minute, with the whole “i’ve got to tell her how i feel!” moment. I was like oh man, here comes the melodrama. Those cliche moments only come second to last min..or rather, last second airport chases, catching the love of their lives with one foot in the departure gate and then spouting their undying, all encompassing, i love you even when never refill the toilet paper and never wash the dishes kind of love. but whew. you recovered in the believability section when spence was like uh nope, still leaving, and that kiss was a mistake. hah. anyways, still loved it. enough babbling. bring on the next post!
I really like this new story. Things I don’t like…heart attacks from brutal cliffhangers. Update in the next five minutes or else.
I really like this new story. Things I don’t like…heart attacks from brutal cliffhangers. Update in the next five minutes or else.
“I can’t.†Yes you can, Ash.. if you can get straight As, then you can STAY THE NIGHT!!! Lovely writing, as usual!
“I can’t.†Yes you can, Ash.. if you can get straight As, then you can STAY THE NIGHT!!! Lovely writing, as usual!