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    I’ll Keep Holding On – (Chapter: 2 – Carry This Picture)

    Story written on April 22, 2007 by Luvme4me84.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=14276
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    “Color the coast with your smile it’s the most genuine thing I’ve ever seen..I was so lost, but now I believe” – Carry this Picture by Dashboard Confessional

    A few minutes after she sat down she saw a few people getting on the stage. The loud music stopped and the people appeared to be setting up. There were two older black mean, one taking out some bongos, the other a guitar, and a younger black woman who was setting up near the microphone.

       "How are we all feeling today?" asked the woman into the microphone in a strong Jamaican accent.

    A bunch of people holding various drinks from the bar cheered in response, a few a little too loudly due to excessive amounts of margaritas. Spencer clapped and scanned the people in the crowd that was forming.

    The men started to play a mellow tune as the woman began to sing in a beautiful soulful voice, "Wise men say, only fools rush in….but I can’t help falling in love with you…"

    Spencer was impressed with the woman’s rendition of the Elvis classic so far.

    She glanced over to the doors next to the stage that led to the front pool deck and saw two teenage girls beginning to make their way through. The girl in the front was about 5’3, had medium length brown hair, and a light tan. She was wearing a light blue spaghetti strap tank top and short jean shorts. As the girl behind her came into view, Spencer couldn’t help but do a double-take.

    The second girl was a little taller than the first, but her appearance instantly struck Spencer. She had to be the most beautiful girl she had ever seen. The girl had a gorgeous tan, soft but bouncy brown curls that fell slightly past her shoulders, and an incredibly tone figure, but what caught really Spencer’s attention were the girl’s deep brown eyes. There was just something about them…they were almost magnetic. The brunette was wearing a short, light colored jean mini skirt and a tight-fitting Rolling Stones t-shirt.

    Although Spencer had only been peering at the young girl for a few seconds, she quickly turned away her gaze, fearing that the girl would notice that Spencer had been gawking at her for what seemed like hours to the blonde.

    Spencer pretended to focus on the performance but continued to watch the girls out of the corner of her eye. Thank the good Lord for peripheral vision! she thought.

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    3. wow…this is awsome. I like that you give alot of descriptions. besides, spencer and ashley on the same boat…that definitely sounds so romantic XD. and the stolen glances are so cute ! I really like how you write. keep going. can’t wait for the spashley cruise !!! =)

    5. Man, I wrote b4 that I went on a cruise that came out of Fl. too and on that ship I met this really beautiful girl, I was so shy I only would smile and look away at her; before the trip was over my owm mum had talked to the girl and she worked on the ship, which is why she didn’t talk to me first. I got her my space addy and were kool mates now. I know how those love Boat connections can be made. So, here’s to my gyrls. I doubt Paula would do what my mum did though. Too bad, maybe Arthur. Cheers.

    6. This fanfic is great. The description is amazing, it does place you in the story. I feel like a fly on the wall, a fruit fly perhaps.. XD Anyway, keep the updates coming! This is good stuff.

    9. wow…this is awsome. I like that you give alot of descriptions. besides, spencer and ashley on the same boat…that definitely sounds so romantic XD. and the stolen glances are so cute ! I really like how you write. keep going. can’t wait for the spashley cruise !!! =)

    11. Man, I wrote b4 that I went on a cruise that came out of Fl. too and on that ship I met this really beautiful girl, I was so shy I only would smile and look away at her; before the trip was over my owm mum had talked to the girl and she worked on the ship, which is why she didn’t talk to me first. I got her my space addy and were kool mates now. I know how those love Boat connections can be made. So, here’s to my gyrls. I doubt Paula would do what my mum did though. Too bad, maybe Arthur. Cheers.

    12. This fanfic is great. The description is amazing, it does place you in the story. I feel like a fly on the wall, a fruit fly perhaps.. XD Anyway, keep the updates coming! This is good stuff.

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