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    Le Marais – (Chapter: Could this be scarier.)

    Story written on January 24, 2007 by clomle44.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=13254
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    BEST FOR ME SEQUEL

     

    Then it occurred to her that they were probably feeling much as she was on the inside, and just suppressing it. Then she realized that she was doing a pretty good job of holding it in too. And how much worse could it be for Paula, who probably knew exactly what could be going on.

     

    Ashley got along with Mrs. Carlin surprisingly well. In fact, everyone was shocked at how well Paula had accepted Spencer’s major life shift and choices. Despite her church upbringing she’d pretty much gotten over it all straight away and was now at them to give her more grandchildren. Ashley didn’t know who’d been more shocked at that, Spencer or herself. Not that Ashley and Paula were that close, but they got along ok.

     

    And now, here, Ashley felt more like family than ever before. The three of them, just waiting to hear Spencer’s fate; their fate.

     

    It was interminable. Seconds became minute, minutes stretched to hours, and the hours became lengths of time so unimaginable that Ashley felt like she was being slowly desiccated, stretched and broken. Anytime someone spoke to Paula it seemed like the same deal: no news yet.

     

    Arthur kept saying that no news was good news, but Ashley felt like she wasn’t willing to settle for that. They’d give her good news goddamit. Mostly because anything else was unthinkable, unacceptable.

     

    When finally she thought it was too much, that she was going to break out of her skin, the doors opened again. Ashley watched as Paula was motioned over, and she went through them. She half rose to follow but Arthur’s hand on her arm was restrictive.

     

    “Let her go. She’ll explain it better to us,” he said, his face grim.

     

    They watched her through the thick plastic of the doors, the distorted pair of doctors discussing Spencer while they waited anxiously. Paula was nodding, her face invisible through the plastic, but at least she hadn’t collapsed wailing. That had to be a good sign right. She also wasn’t hugging the man with grateful joy and grinning. That had to be a bad sign. Right?

     

    Paula came back out, shaking her head and looking pale. Neither her husband or Ashley said anything till she sat down, took a steadying breath, and began to talk.

     

    “She’s stable, for now.”

     

    Arthur let out a jet of air.

     

    “Stable?” Ashley asked with a choke in her voice.

     

    “That’s a good thing,” Paula reassured. “It means she’s not in any danger. She had a lot of bleeding, and they had to take her to theatre to stop some of it. She’s got a punctured lung, a broken right knee and ankle, and…” she broke off, starting to cry. Arthur pulled her into his arms held her, rocking. Ashley felt the contents of her stomach begin to churn…

     

    “She…” Paula was still sobbing. Ashley swallowed convulsively. “She has pretty bad head trauma.”

     

    “Head trauma?” Ashley whispered.

     

    “She’s unconscious. Probably in a coma. She fractured her skull so at least there’s no pressure there but they won’t know how much damage she has until the blood clears.” The tears were flowing freely now, down both Paula and Ashley’s faces.

     

    “But she’ll be ok right,” Ashley said urgently, “She’ll be ok when the bleeding stops.”

     

    “The bleeding has stopped,” Paula said, putting a soft hand on Ashley’s arm. “They can’t know how much damage has been done until what’s there has been cleared. And until she wakes up. If…”

     

    “No,” Ashley said… “No if’s,”

     

    “Ashley,” Paula said urgently. “She might not wake up.”

     

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    It was dark, horribly, horribly dark. Then Spencer’s eyes slammed open, and she fell over.

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    2. GREAT UPDATE!! i want to throw some of my chairs around too! though i must say u are still cruel to put spencer in a coma, i am glad ashley and paula got along well enough to prevent more heart breaks. But please! please! i beg u to wake spencer up! PLEASE~~update soon~~

    3. ” calm as chickens on Prozac.” that was funny as fuck. and as for the rest of it. i loved it. yay kids and ashley. buh spencer in a coma. but i have faith in you :]

    4. Oh my god! I am so freaking anxious after reading this update. Please let Spencer be okay. Ashley, Elly, and Alex really need her. Okay, I don’t want to get picky here but here’s a list of things I don’t want to happen: please don’t let Spencer lose her memory and forget Ashley, please don’t let Spencer be paralyzed or lose a limb, and please don’t let anyone try to take away the kids from Ashley if, god forbid, something happens to Spencer. Anyway, that’s just my wish list. I am already addicted to this story and it’s only the second update. Please don’t keep us hanging and make Spencer okay. PMS!

    6. I feel so privileged that you’ve decided to continue with tbhis. And how you’ve really started off with a bang. I’m very curious to see where you’ll go with this. But any route you do decide to take, I will definitely be along for the ride. And theatre? Is that an Aussie saying, ’cause I was like, “Whhhaaaaa??” But you captured Ashley’s emotions so perfectly! You’re the best! And thanks for getting back to your usual speed demon updating self!!! =D

    10. GREAT UPDATE!! i want to throw some of my chairs around too! though i must say u are still cruel to put spencer in a coma, i am glad ashley and paula got along well enough to prevent more heart breaks. But please! please! i beg u to wake spencer up! PLEASE~~update soon~~

    11. ” calm as chickens on Prozac.” that was funny as fuck. and as for the rest of it. i loved it. yay kids and ashley. buh spencer in a coma. but i have faith in you :]

    12. Oh my god! I am so freaking anxious after reading this update. Please let Spencer be okay. Ashley, Elly, and Alex really need her. Okay, I don’t want to get picky here but here’s a list of things I don’t want to happen: please don’t let Spencer lose her memory and forget Ashley, please don’t let Spencer be paralyzed or lose a limb, and please don’t let anyone try to take away the kids from Ashley if, god forbid, something happens to Spencer. Anyway, that’s just my wish list. I am already addicted to this story and it’s only the second update. Please don’t keep us hanging and make Spencer okay. PMS!

    14. I feel so privileged that you’ve decided to continue with tbhis. And how you’ve really started off with a bang. I’m very curious to see where you’ll go with this. But any route you do decide to take, I will definitely be along for the ride. And theatre? Is that an Aussie saying, ’cause I was like, “Whhhaaaaa??” But you captured Ashley’s emotions so perfectly! You’re the best! And thanks for getting back to your usual speed demon updating self!!! =D

    17. wow, i don’t know what we all did to deserve 2 NEW posts (especially when they’re both for BFM!!!!!)….i love you and tis story is amazing. great job with continuing with these characters because there was no wasting time with getting us to fall in love with them. we loved them right from the start. great post!PMS!!!!!!!!!

    18. wow, i don’t know what we all did to deserve 2 NEW posts (especially when they’re both for BFM!!!!!)….i love you and tis story is amazing. great job with continuing with these characters because there was no wasting time with getting us to fall in love with them. we loved them right from the start. great post!PMS!!!!!!!!!

    19. arghhhhh. i’ve got goosebumps reading when arthur called ashley to tell her of the accident. and thru it all my eyes were glued to the screen. you really build up the tension well. oh god. this is almost to scary to read. almost. :)

    20. arghhhhh. i’ve got goosebumps reading when arthur called ashley to tell her of the accident. and thru it all my eyes were glued to the screen. you really build up the tension well. oh god. this is almost to scary to read. almost. :)

    21. Great chapter! I’m already soo hooked on this story! I’m dieing to know what’s gonna happen! Please update soon! (and let spencer live lol) =]

    22. Great chapter! I’m already soo hooked on this story! I’m dieing to know what’s gonna happen! Please update soon! (and let spencer live lol) =]

    23. I’m so glad you posted again. You know, I actually thought about this story when morning while I was getting ready for work. And this little light bulb came on in my head…is Spencer going to lose her memory? Because that’s scarey…I wonder if she’ll wake up thinking she’s married to Gray. That’d really confuse and upset Alex and Elly. That’s so heart breaking. Poor Ashley. I hope Spencer doesn’t freak out and I hope she wakes up. Thank you though for letting her keep her arms and legs…and especially her fingers because we, I mean she (and Ashley) needs those. I love your Paula, too. PMS please

    24. I’m so glad you posted again. You know, I actually thought about this story when morning while I was getting ready for work. And this little light bulb came on in my head…is Spencer going to lose her memory? Because that’s scarey…I wonder if she’ll wake up thinking she’s married to Gray. That’d really confuse and upset Alex and Elly. That’s so heart breaking. Poor Ashley. I hope Spencer doesn’t freak out and I hope she wakes up. Thank you though for letting her keep her arms and legs…and especially her fingers because we, I mean she (and Ashley) needs those. I love your Paula, too. PMS please

    25. why oh why would you do that to us clomle…i can’t handle this! make spencer wake up right now and be happy and healthy and oooh – it could all be a dream…or ashley could suddenly see the future and this could be a premonition…yeah. you know that would fit well into this story because spencer would be fine and dandy. please update soon – and make it a happy one!

    26. why oh why would you do that to us clomle…i can’t handle this! make spencer wake up right now and be happy and healthy and oooh – it could all be a dream…or ashley could suddenly see the future and this could be a premonition…yeah. you know that would fit well into this story because spencer would be fine and dandy. please update soon – and make it a happy one!

    29. she fell over? what? was this all a dream?! WHAT?! WHAT?! AHH! WHAT?! WHATS GOING ON?! CLOMLE! THE CLIFFYS ARE KILLING ME! GAH! hahaha GEEZ! amazing. you are A.MAY.ZING! loves it.

    30. she fell over? what? was this all a dream?! WHAT?! WHAT?! AHH! WHAT?! WHATS GOING ON?! CLOMLE! THE CLIFFYS ARE KILLING ME! GAH! hahaha GEEZ! amazing. you are A.MAY.ZING! loves it.

    31. You’re cruel you know that??? You want us all to beg don’t you??? Well I’m not going to *looks defiant* update now… update in week, all the same to me… well actually I’m leaving for a few days with no net access, so that’s not fair at all to the rest of your readers! LOL Head trauma eh? I say she’s either going to lose her memory or end up blind… the last would be really weird seeing has how her child is deaf.. so maybe not…. Loving the story and update up soon.. PLEASE! *damn I’m begging anyway*

    32. You’re cruel you know that??? You want us all to beg don’t you??? Well I’m not going to *looks defiant* update now… update in week, all the same to me… well actually I’m leaving for a few days with no net access, so that’s not fair at all to the rest of your readers! LOL Head trauma eh? I say she’s either going to lose her memory or end up blind… the last would be really weird seeing has how her child is deaf.. so maybe not…. Loving the story and update up soon.. PLEASE! *damn I’m begging anyway*

    33. WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY WOULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT? You are killing me here… PLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEE PMS!!!! OR Actaully not soon… NOW!!! LOL and really really good… Just pms please!! SHE CAN’T DIE! :( :( :( sad face

    34. WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY WOULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT? You are killing me here… PLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEE PMS!!!! OR Actaully not soon… NOW!!! LOL and really really good… Just pms please!! SHE CAN’T DIE! :( :( :( sad face

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