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The King High Killer – (Chapter: Chapter 9 Nine, Blood Will Flow Like Wine)
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“Is that Carmen Mendez?!” Came from the front seat, promptly throwing Ashley out of her thoughts. The brunette’s head spun to the sidewalk where she saw an obviously trashed Carmen stumbling beautifully with a bottle of something wrapped in a paper bag in her hands.
“My goodness, she’s drunk!” Marie nearly shouted as she slammed on her breaks. “Spencer and Ashley, get that girl in the car this instant! Skipping work to drink, my word!” Marie muttered as she fingered the cross around her neck. Ashley and Spencer hastily got out of the car and approached the disheveled girl who sounded like she was singing softly under her breath. When she caught sight of the blonde and brunette, however, she grinned hugely and opened her arms wide.
“Carlin! You came to cheer me up!” She exclaimed with a goofy expression on her face. Ashley sneered slightly as Spencer rolled her eyes.
“Come on, Carmen, we’re gonna take you home.”
“You’re talking me home, huh, Spence? That sounds mighty nice.” The Latina said seductively with a smug, lopsided smile.
“Ew. Just don’t puke in the car.” Spencer told her as she hoisted one of Carmen’s arms over her shoulder to help the drunken girl walk. Ashley did the same as she frowned with disgust.
“You’re real welcome, by the way,” Spencer said sarcastically as she and Ashley directed the girl towards the car. “Work was a hoot tonight.” The blonde grunted as she threw Carmen in the backseat. Ashley went to move beside Carmen when the darker-haired girl threw up her arms.
“I’m not going anywhere unless Carlin sits with me in the backseat!” She protested in a serious tone. Everyone else rolled their eyes.
“Just get in the damn backseat, Spencer, I’m in no mood for this.” Spencer shook her head in weariness and Ashley scoffed loudly as she moved to the front.
“Just where I wanted ya, Carlin.” Carmen said seductively as she moved an arm around the blonde’s shoulder.
“Are you going to let her get away with that?!” Ashley asked Marie indignantly as the car began to move.
“Carmen Mendez, keep your hands off my niece.” The older blonde chastised, looking at the drunken girl through the review mirror. The Latina threw up her hands in surrender.
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ok so you had me practically crying one minute with their declarations of love for each other, and then pissed off the next when spence didn’t jump in to tell ash that she meant what she said! arrgghhhh! anyway I digress. this whole chap was freaking awesome, ash climbing through vents, their fight that turned totally hot, even their little agreement about fooling around (although damn I wish they’d just tell each other they love each other and make the other realize they mean it!!), everything! so is carmen dead? guess we’ll find out soon enough. excellent update stix, very much worth the wait! pms please!!
Ok, I liked: 1. Spencer using “for sure” on Ashley, that was very telling. 2. Ninja Ashley ;) no further explanation needed for that. 3. The reference to “Murder, She Wrote.” 4. Declarations of love. 5. Making out while on the brink of certain death … hot. 6. the “fooling around” clause. I DID NOT like: 1. rat poop … eww 2. taking back the declarations of love 3. constant interruptions to the girls making out 4. Carmen. Oh and p.s LOVED the birthday greeting. Thanks sweetie.
De-lurking to say I love this story. PMS!!
This is a good story and I hope you can continue on with it. I like how they are mad one minute and then all heated up the next. Its hot to do that sometimes.
fuck. okay soooo one sec i’m like shittng bricks scared that they are about to die. then the next i’m pissed cuz theyre back to oh i hate you. and spencer seriously needs to fucking chill with the “i’m gonna be alone and deal with shit on my own” cuz isn’t that how her and ashley stopped being friends in the first place. i’m sorry but i would have left carmen walking by her damnself. and i don’t give a fuck what anyone says, i think the killer is(…) but seriously is carmen and lily dead cuz even though i don’t like carmen and lily is ok, it would suck if they’re dead and spence and ash missed it cuz they can’t keep their hands off each other. so that was an awesome chapter, i got super excited when i saw it there then i started yelling at the computer like they could really hear me, but anywho awesome chapter, can not wait for more cuz this story is hella badass. keep up the good work. pms
What an emotional roller coaster that was! freakin brilliant :) of course I knew they were going to be interrupted- but i was pleasantly surprised by how far they’d gotten. I’m not sure why neither one is capable of owning their confessions of love, but I do know that love makes you do and say stupid shit so I’ll chock it up to that for now :)
OMGGGGGG!!!!! Okay please PMS like NOW! This story is amazing I want more!