Fan Fiction
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Story written on August 22, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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Sweet torture….
Come on you have to tell !!!!! Please continue I love this story.
Oh, you’re so wrong (not telling), but this was SO beautiful!
Dude! That totally sucks that no “secrets” were revealed! You’re a big tease! LOL! Still enjoyed the wonderful chapter, though. Please post again soon.
Quite a lovely little story there, Olives. I like the big tease–it’s actually sexier than spelling it out, know what I’m saying?
Beautiful Olives. I’m glad you didn’t tell.
Olives, this was beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I think it was perfect to leave it to the readers imagination. In my head it was lovely. Excellent writing, exquisite really.
Olives, you’re such a tease…beautiful writing as always. More please…
I love it! Don’t tell SNS, lead me and then let me use my imagination!
Beautiful as always,Olives. Your B&T lovely moment is very sexy.
Very sexy.. left me wanting to read more. I’m really enjoying this visit!
This chapter was so captivating. What a love affair you gave us. Only making love and showing your partner how much they mean to you do you use the terms that you used in your last sentence. Absolutely A Lady never tells. Thanks for this seduction with such elegance.
What everyone else said…simply beautiful.
I always enjoy Tina’s POV!!
Indeed (to your last line). Great chapter and it was wonderful. Your writing is really like watching those words dance in my mind.
Beautiful writing. Can’t wait to read your next chapter…
beautiful and oh so sexy…
This was great Olives I’m sure we can all use our imagination on what happened.
This is a fantastic chapter and one of my absolute favorite stories. Please keep the chapters coming!
never has a simple yet imaginative love scene been painted in such a way that I could actually see the characters/actors performing every action written. My mind followed Bette’s lips on the sensual journey down Tina’s back. I shivered as Tina felt the wet kisses left underneath Bette’s trailing locks of hair. Damn, you’re good!
Wonderful, sweet.. more, more…
Beautiful – and wow girl can you write!!!
sigh! What a beautiful chapter. Could feel the love shining through. You’ve done it again, Olives! Thanks
what everyone said.
love your writing style.
“I just want to give you what you want, not just what I want you to have.â€
Was there ever a more considerate lover?
absolutely wonderful….your writing talents are endless..you seem to amaze me more and more with each chapter..another soon?
OMG are you kidding me???? It’s been days since I’ve been able to read and here I am looking forward to a little BnT love via SNS and what do I get?
Okay, signing off, “Frustrated in Philly”
LOL. All kidding aside, this was simply beautiful!
mesmorising
My body is still quivering…I totally agree with wildtouch’s comment…simply amazing!!!