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    1. LOL, loved the banter between Mari & Bette & Tina… so fun! It’s surprising that Bette never been a bum all day in her PJs at the same time it’s conceivable. Good job as always! Waiting for the next one.

    2. Another excellent chapter Olives…what angst these two share…but also a lot of love…please keep helping them move forward and enjoy their love for each other.

    3. Well Olives, you know the old saying…”writing is re-writing.” Hey, didn’t Marina tell Jenny that? Anyway, if your chapter sucked before, it shows no signs of that suckage now. I loved Bette’s little crack-up! Great job.

    4. It was a nice welcome to read this chapter with this on going story. I enjoyed reading Bette opening up to Tina, telling her insecurities and allowing to lean on Tina for strenght. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for this excellent story.

    5. Great chapter as always. I too, always get a smile on my face when I see a new chapter from you. Please don’t let us wait too long for the next one. Can we have some TiBette loving now? It’s time ;-) Thanks again for writing Olives. Please continue soon…

    6. Thanks for another chapter.But, frankly, I think this chapter is a bit empty…I mean the content. and well, it’s long enough for the topic about opening up..something more practical should be processed,IMHO. Huh, I don’t mean to crab, really no offence here…just some of my thought.Hope you don’t mind.

    7. I know i’ve said this before, but you are amazing. I always get a smile on my face when I see a new chapter from you. I know that you have a life but it would be great to see you take “Umbrella” all the way up to the beginnig of “chase” to see your take on how they got to this point and not just what we saw on the show. Again thanks for taking the time to do this.

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