Fan Fiction
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Story written on November 16, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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(66 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
Im with RN1 on this…you were my first…*enter girlish giggle*
I always look forward to your updates and your award was well deserved.
glad to see this story continue…congrats on fanfic award.
Gotta run to work will save the story for the AM. Just want to wish you a quick congrats for your Fanfic award. You were the first writer that lured me into the fanfic world, and dafinately deserve the award you have earned. Thanks for the great stories Olives!
Hit the refresh button, and here it is. Wonderfully SNS! I loved the flaws quote.
great to have you back!!
Thanks for updating this. This is one of my all time favorites and your writing is excellent. I absolutely love it.
Olives, olives, olives. You are simply amazing. :) 5 stars is really, really not enough. :D
This is so wonderful! I love the playfulness in this story and the new relationship jitters. Its just divinely lovely the way you write it. Congratulations Olives. :)
I just had to go back… Umbrella Chapter 2. This is what started it all:
Bette: Why are you here?
Tina: Because you asked me in.
Bette: And you know why?
Tina: I think I do.
Bette: And that’s okay with you?
Tina: Yeah. It’s okay with me.
Yes, you were my first as well, SNS. And it is still as good as those first chapters which drew me in so deep – such a fan fiction addict. I love this story so much. Your award is so well deserved. Congrats to you! 5 million stars! And thank you, thank you so much for writing!
really fantastic writing and chapter. you bring an element to this site that is unmatched. thanks for writing and going back to this story again. it was one of the first i read on this site. :D
I love your B&T’s banter.Thank you for updating this story.I always love your umbrella.
This particular story was the first story that got me hooked on fan fiction. it is absolutely my favorite followed closely by seahurst’s if it was meant to be–i hope you keep writing more to this story!
Congrats for the fan fic award by the way. I’ve always loved your stories since the beginning. Thanks for the update.
I love this story!!!! Please, please, please let Bette and Tina do it on the piano! ( a la “Pretty Woman,” only better….)
Oh, how I love this fic… Thanks so much and congrats on the award. You deserve it.
always a pleasure to read…congratulations!!!
Have loved this story (hell, all of your stories!)from the very first entry and it continues to deliver a home run every time. Congratulations on your well-deserved award! May it help to inspire you to write a million more chapters.
what a nice start to this day! a lovely chapter.
What wlse can i say another amazing chapter. I’m beggin ya, if you ever think about putting these stories in some kind of bound edition, i think i would pay almost anything. I paid a lot of money for a sctipt from this show and i enjoy your writing much better.Thanks so much.
Please don’t forget about this story ! I miss it!