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Story written on January 29, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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(89 votes, average: 4.16 out of 5)
great chapter.. can’t wait to see where this goes.. keep up the good work
Thank you for hearing a poor couch potato’s prayers!
Thanks so much for this chapter. Loved the last line.. That’s just so Bette.
As always, looking forward to more.
Hmmm…Tina, Leslie, Tina, Leslie. Bette’s so lucky, well except for the ankle thingy. Good one.
Tinas mom is like everyone mom.trying to protect her children. Thanks
these are so cool, can’t believe i got such a big shaken hit of writing all in one go woo hoo. nice dialogues.
BRAVO! Love it…love the storyline…love the pace….keep it up…can’t wait for the next chapter…DONT STOP!
Olives as always, you rock! Anxiously awaiting the next 11 chapters! :-)
Damn you, Olives! Now you have me hooked on 3 stories!
ExO, anything you write, I’ll be grateful to read. Thanks
Welecome back I’ve loved this story and missed it when it was gone. It’s such a great story line and extremely well written. I’m wondering what Michelle was about to say about Bette and I’m curious to see how Bette handles the Tina vs Leslie issue. GREAT story we’re patiently waiting for more. Thanks
hey i was just looking at sand games and i am glad you wrote another chapter. keep going with this story i love it.
i loved this story…so glad you are back…please continue
So glad you came back. Please continue this wonderful story. Love a story with athletes in them, especially ones with Bette and Tina. Post soon, please!!!
Just found your story. really really fun and well written. looking forward to the next update.
I think this story is so cute please keep em coming
Great chapter, ok now this is fun wich one Bette is have feeling, Leslie-Tina, or Tina-Leslie, oh well let see what next. Please post soon, thank you!
ah loved it as always.. c’mon practice, practice!
What’s a matter Tina…got a bit of the love bug in your tummy…let it burn baby…hooked!
I’m hoping you keep this going. I love the way you write. I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!Bette and Tina are my fviorite couple
Olive, baby, you’re killing. I’m loving this story, and I would love to see you finish it off. Your fics are fab-ulous!