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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 15
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Bette starts but Tinas hair is in the way.
Let me go and get a band or a grip. Bette says and starts to get up.
I have a band here. Tina says and give Bette the hear band she had around her wrist.
You dont have your hair down a lot: Bette realize.
No, I guess not. I like it up. Dont you like it up? Tina asks.
Yes I do, very much. It makes your beautiful face more visible. Bette says and leans down and kiss Tinas forehead. She put Tinas hair up in a palm right on top.
Bette let out a little laugh.
Oh I bet I look ***** now, right? Tina says and looks up at Bette.
Yes you do. Bette replies. She then starts to massage Tinas hurting shoulders.
Tina closes her eyes as Bette works. She lets out a sigh whenever Bette hit a painful spot.
Tee? There is something I want to talk to you about. Bette says after a little while.
Tina opens her eyes and tense up a little, from the sound of Bettes voice, it was serious.
What babe? Tina asks.
My leg is getting better everyday, Im able to hit now, without feeling pain. Bette says.
Babe, thats wonderful, isnt it? Tina asks as she hears Bettes serious voice.
Tina turns around and put her hands on Bettes knees.
Babe, what is it? Tina asks.
I want to try and get back into the game, try to get on the tour again. Bette says looking at Tina. But I dont want to loose you, so if you wont be able to handle it, Im not going to try. Bette says and put her hand on top of Tinas. Tina thinks for a second.
Babe, I think its great that you want to try again. And youre not going to loose me. If this is what you want, Im gonna support you, and work with you. Tina says and smiles.
Lets say I do get in again, Im gonna be away a long time during the year. How will we survive that? Bette asks with a sad voice.
Bette, I know that you want this more than anything. And I am not going to stand in your way. If you do get in, well deal with it when the time comes. But Im sure well work it out. Tina says and smiles up at Bette. I love you. Tina says and smiles, then turns back around. Bette continues the massaging. Then the doorbell rings.
Oh, the food is here. Bette says as she gets up.
Im just going to the bathroom. Tina says and jumps up and walks out.
Bette pays for the food and then places it on the living room table. She gets some plates and the drinks. Water and soda.
Tina walks back into the living room. She had takes out the hair palm and put it in an ordinary ponytail.
Hey, didnt you like the palm, I think it was *****. Bette laughs.
Ha ha, very funny. Tina says and takes a seat next to Bette. She kisses her quick before digging in to the food.
It smells good. Tina says.
Yeah it does. Bette replies.
They sit in silence for a while enjoying the food.
Have you talked to your mother? Tina asks.
No, and Im not going to until she apologize to both you and me. Bette replies.
Dont you think youre being a little harsh on her? Tina asks softly.
Tina, how can you say that? You of all people, you have the same problem with your parents. Bette says surprised.
Im not saying you should forgive her, but fire her from her job? Tina says.
No, I know my mother, if she would have continued to be around me, I wouldve left. This isnt the first time shes been like this. Bette says.
Oh? Tina asks surprised.
Yeah, I had a girlfriend in high school. Tina raises her eyebrows. Not a girlfriend like you and me, but a friend who was a girl. Bette explains. Tina smiles.
So what happened? Tina asks.
She wasnt from a good enough family, and my mom told that to her face. I dont want to explain everything, but it hurt her and me lot. She left for college after high school and I havent seen her since. I didnt stand up to my mother back then. So I lost. Bette says.
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Lauren this story is so good. i love the way you are having them get to know each other first. And good for Bette for standing up for herself. please post again soon.
Love this story, as always. Keep em’ coming!
Great “spin” on this story, Lauren. Another golf technique I never mastered!
Just caught up from Thursday. So glad I finally had time. Love this story. So proud of Bette for standing up to her mom, as well as Tina for giving Bette the patience and understanding she needs. Can’t wait till your next posting. Hurry please
Good chapter. Are yo sure you want Bette to go back to play golf, well if you are, can’t wait to see what’s next. Please post soon, thanks!
Glad that this Bette stands up for her woman, and not let her mom disrespect Tina. I’m all for respecting our parents, but they have to show respect as well. Love to see Bette back in the swing of things, LPGA and all.
Great story Lauren. Love the way Tina will support Bette if she goes back to pro golf.
luv’n it!!! pls more chapters……..
first of all…i start to feel sorry for Alice i love her and Dana together…BUT…and second i love the way Tina support Bette to go back on tour she knows how much Bette loves golf i hope she can handle when the day comes..amazing chapter as always thanks
K
Great chapter. They are so sweet together. Can’t wait for more.
Wow I would so love for Bette to be on tour again. thanks for the chapter it was wonderful as always.
Good for you Bette, stand up for what you believe in! now isn’t it about time they got down to some mmmmmmmmm……….fun…….???
Great chapter, Lauren. post soon because I think we all are loving the story
Ooh, Bette’s mom is a real charmer, huh? ~lol~ I’m glad Bette is standing up to her this time! It’s great that Tina is supportive of Bette’s desire to go back on tour. I hope things keep looking up for them both. Thanks, Lauren, this story is really a pleasure to read!
You ask so gently for a comment, I can’t say no to a girl who make me dream, so here I go:
hu..hum…sorry for the english; what can I say the others haven’t already written: I’m so into your stories. I spend my days in front of my computer waiting for the next chapters, even at 2 am. I read all the chapters at least 3 times. I think I’m beginnig addicted.
Doctor, do you think my case is serious ?
WOW! This is getting Interesting Go Bette your not a 12 years old your a woman you’re MOM think she can tell you what to do! I know you love your MOM but you’re old enough to think whats right for you GO! Bette GO! Hey Lauren Thanks I’m just Love it Please post soon.
Good for you Bette, standing up to your mother this time. Lauren I´m just loving you story her, so keep going, you´re doing great
Great chapter…Glad Bette is standing up for them two.GREAT JOB THANKS
Good chapter, I like that Bette stood up to her mother and Tina is willing to support Bette and her dreams. Now, I think that it is about time to turn up the heat between them, or is it going to take some other woman trying to hit on Tina (maybe a Ms. Perkins or someone else at a club) for Bette to step up to the plate.
love this story! glad i started reading it!! post soon! can’t wait!!!
I am your creation and proud!!!!!!!!!!!
i feel bad for Bette’s friend in highschool
Gratulerer, Lauren !! (… thank you for the answer to my little question ! -lol-)
You know, I really, deeply enjoy your writing style : such a sweet slow pace and a lot of so tender details… I simply adore the delicacy and gentleness with which they express their increasing feelings for each other – well, would I be wrong thinking that Bette’s massage could be an ideal way to slowly begin a new step in their relationships ? I wonder ! (*wink*)
Thank you so much for this very waited update, Lauren, I’m melting more than ever !
if bette goes on tour… tina can be her personal photographer… see problem solved… can’t wait for the next chapter