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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 19
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Chapter 19
Tina leans back onto the lounge chair. She closes her eyes and let her body completely relax. Bette watches Tina a little while. She then leans back herself.
After several minutes of silence Tina breaks it.
Babe, thank you for bringing me here. She says and looks over at Bette and smiles, she reaches out her hand and Bette grabs it.
Its my pleasure Tee. Bette replies and smiles back.
After an hour Bette stood up and went inside and to the kitchen. She brought out the picnic basket and two large blankets.
Tee, its time for picnic. Bette says. Tina opens her eyes and smiles. Bette reaches out her hand to help Tina up. Tina put on the wrap around skirt and her tank top and follows Bette still holding her hand. Bette guides her down the stairs to the beach. They find a closed off area surrounded by big stones and very small cliffs.
Bette lay out the blanket and put down the basket on the side. Tina sits down on one side and Bette lay down on the other. They place the food in the middle. Bette starts to take out the food. She brought a bottle of wine too. Tina took care of that.
Later after the picnic they lay on the blankets to try and get some tan.
Tee? Bette asks after a little while looking over at Tina.
Yeah, babe? Tina replies with her eyes closed.
Do you have to work tomorrow? Bette asks.
Tina opens her eyes and looks over at Bette.
Why do you ask? Tina asks.
Well, its a long drive home, and I was hoping that I wouldnt have to. Bette says and smiles.
I dont have photo shoots until 3 tomorrow. So we could spend the night here. Tina replies. She rolls over to her side, so she gets closer to Bette. She places her hand on Bettes stomach and softly rubs it.
Good. Bette says and smiles. So what do you say we go for a swim? Bette asks.
Yeah, lets go. Tina says and jumps up. She reaches out her hand to help Bette up. Bette takes off her shorts and her tank top, Tina takes off her skirt and tank top. They run down to the ocean. They walk hand in hand into the water.
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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU, I AM SURE WE WERE ALL WAITING FOR SOME LOVING…YOUR ARE GREAT THANKS PLEASE POST SOON
FINALLY…! :) great update, post soon!!
Well done Lauren. It was sweet and endearing. Tina was patient and loving…I’m sure Bette will learn with Tina’s guidance. Please continue. I enjoy the pace of their relationship…thanks.
Thanks, Lauren! I can’t wait until it’s Tina’s turn and see how Bette will do. Please post soon
Love this story Lauren. Bette and Tina lovin bring it on.
Damn that is was awesome and hot, love it. And please keep bring some hot love scene more and we love it. Please post soon, thanks! Excellent chapter!
Wow! Have just discovered this story and read the first 19 Chapters without a break – can’t wait to read the others. I love the slow pace that it is all going at. Too often writers rush things and they seem false and/or fleeting but you’ve been very patient and I love it. Thanks.
all i have to say at this point is finally!!! i love this and u should keep on writing!! POST SOON PLEASE!!!
Tks, but so long getting to this point I felt sorry that this chapter wasn’t more detailed, longer…but you can make it up to us next time…..pls and tks…keep going with this story I really like it…
YESSS!!! Finally. That was awesome.
can’t wait till Bette reciprocates or learns how to reciprocate. : D lol
..hope u continue this story..really good!!!
hope u continue this story..it’s really good i was kinda left hanging there at the end..you’re an excellent writer..post soon..can’t wait for it
That was so sweet. I’m so glad they finally got to the point. I hope there is more to come thanks
OH yes that was worth waiting for…lol and im guessing there is more? cause someones gotta teach that oh so hot Bette the ropes lol i love that Bette isnt the alpha in this story just a nice change Thanks
first time is always dificult but i think Bette was ready and confortable now i wanna know if she is ready to make love to Tina…great chapter Lauren very sweet and kind i cant wait for the next chapter sooooon thanks
It’s About time WHOA! That was so Beautiful Awesome Story Thanks Lauren it’s price list wonderful Please continue.
What a lovely, so lovely first time…
Surrounded by all the usual amazing tenderness and sweetness you are so gifted to put everywhere – and above all in every little details and gestures.
That’s truly the biggest charm of your story – and no doubt you already know that I’m very fond about it. Keep it this way !!
What you show us so well is how much such a delicate shared love is one that will last for life. When things are too fast and too passionate from the beginning, one couldn’t be so sure about the same lasting quality.
Bravo, Lauren !!
hmm… a bit more detail and refinement would be good. overall, i enjoyed your chapter. looking forward to the next one.
It will be interesting to see where it goes from hwew. Will they talk more about Tina’s parents and her reaction to Lara’s information, causing Bette to reciprocate? Will Tina encourage Bette to reconnect with her mother?
Hey, Lauren how about “In sickness nd in love” will we hear anymore of that story? How Tina’s pregnacy? I would love to see them experience and share the pregancy since we didn’t get to see it in S2.
Woo-hoo!!!! Hope you ‘re not through yet! I love this story!! Thanks
Ok Bette…it’s time to step up to the tee and take your best shot.
That was worth the wait. Can’t wait till its Bette’s turn. Know you will keep it interesting.
Wauw, I just can´t tell you how much I really love your story. It´s sweet, romantic and they just seem perfect together. Besides it´s very nice to see Tina in control, in many of the other stories I have read, it´s mainly Bette who is in control. So I really like the way you describe Tina, but hopefully Bette will turn out to be very playful in some of the chapters to come. So please post soon, don´t let us wait in suspense too long.