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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 204
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“No.” Tina says and eases away. She bends down to Bette. “Hey, babe.” She says and kisses her softly on the lips.
“Hey. Did you sleep well?” Bette asks.
“Yeah. The boys slept in our bed. And Noah had a little accident this morning.” Tina says.
“What kind of accident?” Bette asks concerned.
“He cut himself on a knife.” Tina says.
“Is he okay?” She asks.
“He is, but it’s a bit deep. I want a doctor to look at it.” Tina says.
“Yeah. The doctor should be in here in a few minutes. He said he was coming by after you came. He wanted to talk to us.” Bette says.
“Oh okay.” Tina says. Andrea starts to cry again.
“Hey, why don’t we take her with us. Take her to the park. Get her mind off the accident.” Julia suggests.
“That would actually be great.” Tina says.
“Okay. Come here little girl.” Julia says and lifts her sister up.
“You be good with Jules okay?” Tina says and give Andrea a kiss.
She nods as she’s sucking her thumb.
“We’ll bring her back tonight. You’ll be home?” Julia asks.
“Yeah. We’ll be home.” Tina says and smiles.
“Okay. Say goodbye.” Julia says to Andrea. She give a little wave and then leans down on Julia’s shoulder. Julia bends down and give Bette and hug before she leaves.” Bye mom. See you soon.” She says.
“Bye. Thanks for stopping by.” She says and Julia, Jessie and Andrea leaves.
“Babe, has the doctor said anything?” Tina asks as she pulls the chair close and sits down.
“He said I was healing nicely.” Bette says and smiles
“He did? Good.” Tina says, she takes Bette’s hand in hers and brings it to her mouth and softly kisses it.
“Girls and boys, I’ll be leaving. Work awaits me.” Kit says.
“Okay, thanks for coming.” Tina says and give her another hug.
“Oh you’re welcome. Bye baby sis.” Kit says and give Bette a hug.
“Bye Kit. See you soon.” Bette says and smiles.
Kit leaves.
“How is the kids doing?” Bette asks silently. Tina looks over at the boys who is playing with a car they brought.
“They’re scared. Alice and Shane told me that Danny had cried after I left the house last night. He was scared I wouldn’t come back.” Tina says.
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1st..And WTF Tina flirting with that Josh wanker guy? WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don’t even know what to say. I think what sucks so much about it is that Bette is hurt and somewhat helpless at the moment. It reminds me of a wounded soldier coming home to find his wife is either on her way out the door or already gone.
W.T.F.? OKAY DRAMA QUEEN YOURE KILLING IT HERE DO WE HAVE ANOTHER I.C. ON OUR HANDS AND NOT F*KING KNOW?YOUR LUCKY WE CANT HUNT YOU DOWN AND HANG YOU FROM A ROPE!GET YOUR NET FIX SO WE CAN FIND YA! MY GOD WOMEN YOUR KILLING US HERE! A VERY SLOWLY DEATH AT THAT.
And the drama begins. Loved the long installment this time. Can’t wait for more.
WTF was that?! Come on, Tina is more gay than Bette… why now! And she did it infront of Bette, it’s so uncool. URGH!!! Damn you better fix it..Or I will … *taking a very long deep breath*. Man, you really killing me here.
You know it was ok the accidents and illness and other stuff but this flirting thing with a men when Bette is right there blind and scared it sucks big time..i really didnt like this twist…i think this family doesnt deserve that after all they have gone through. I hope they have better and happy days ahead!.
Okay…love the story, but is it going to be changed from Crush Meeting to “kick me when I am down?” How much more can Bette take? Tina’s timing sucked big time (even though no time would have been a good time), can’t wait to see what happens next.
WTF!!!!! I can not belive you did this to them. Please fix it soon. Great Chpater
Woo girl! You must love abuse!! Ha!! Good to see the Dr. had the cocaine cream. Good job.
seriously you are killing a perfectly good story with all the stupid storylines you come out with!1 you are as bad as the other fan fic author starting with “C” and ends with ‘i’ with equally nonsensecial storylines!!! you and the other author wins hands down for the longest shitty storylines and longest chapters!!!!
By all accounts Tina is more devoted to Bette than any real straight woman turned gay that I every seen in my life time. This story is just not believable why do you think people are upset with IC. It is not just because its a GAAAY show but because it is not believable that Tina would do this on the show. LH played that devoted wife character so well that no one believes that Tina would leave Bette for a man. I sorry but this just does not sit well with me. You have a great writing ability but I think if we wanted heterosexual we would just turn on the television this you can see night and day.
Oh no, don’t you take Bette and Tina down that path of doom, not after all they’ve been thru, it is neverending and Tina shoulda controlled herself; but hey flirting is just that, anyone can do it; but it doesn’t mean you have to act on it; unless you’ve got some crazy producer person insisting that you go that way and so_gay you haven’t so enuff already with the Tina and Josh, Tina and anyman thing!!!! hear me…otherwise I’m not reading anymore….
I’m sorry so_gay, my deepest apologies, I meant to say something wonderful about your latest post and tell lauren to ‘wakeup and smell the coffee’ cause I’m not reading her story anymore if Tina does the dastardly deed on Bette; certainly not after 200 fycking chapters…please so_gay accept my apologies and pleaseeeeee lauren get the friggin’ message!!!!!
I am a bit disapointed that after all this time that a great story has to be spoilt! I am a straight women of 37 and enjoy a number of stories, purely for the love factor. I do appreciate things change but please not in this story!!!!!!!!!!! Please don’t change the ideal………
How did Bette know it was Danny’s blue car? Could she see it? And Tina did not react to that, did she hear Bette clearly, at least it did not register to Tina or to Bette. Let her get over Josh quickly, please. Great story.
totally agree!!!! I mean, come on girl, you’re not doing this to us!!! Geez, I disappear for a week and I come back to the site and I find this madness…!!! I mean WTF!!! Ok, In a more objective approach, Tina didn’t or at least doesn’t want to act on her feelings, so it’s not as bad as Tina f***ing Henry in their house, and Bette totally hit the nail when she said it was T’s subconscious telling her that, you know in S3 Tina wanted the simplicity of a ‘normal life’, and this B&T have gone through hell with all the hospital visits… BUT that’s NO EXCUSE for Tina to flirt with this dude right in front of Bette… And poor boys, they really boke my heart… Anyway, I think we’re all waiting to see how you fix this PRONTO!
I haven’t commented in ages… but WOW!! What a chapter and update. Hits VERY close to home right now. Thank you for your wonderful writing. :)
Oh dear Lauren baby, you are evil and wound up a few people, I myself was abit WTF reading it, but I have faith in your wonderful writing to sort this mess out. Look forward to another long chapter. xxxxxx
a very long long and shocking chapter i hope Tina wont’ act about her feelings! and please let Bette see soon! i hope you are a B&T fan and you will fix this!
I love your story but I am a true Tibette fan and I just can’t read this if it continues along this same line. I will continue to read your other story but I may not read this one again.
Okay, here we go. It seems that you are giving Bette a chance to let Tina know how triffling tasteless it is for her to flirt in front of her (Which really throughs back to S2 when Tina was troughing Helena all up in Bette’s face. It is as if Bette is getting the chance to say “Yes, I cheated with Candace, but I didn’t do it in you face or have her in our home alla Henry). But this is worse because Bette is so physically helpless her. Just when I thought that you were going to use Bette’s temperary blindness as a chance for B&T to have some very sensual sex (You know when you just have to feel your way around since your eyes are not available.) and you caome with this twist, so much for reading your mind. Bette is right, if the kids found out about this, it could be devastating. And it is a bunch of CRAP that Josh didn’t know about B&T’s relationship. There is NO WAY that anyone associated with her case didn’t know that they are married. This is a hospital for christ sakes and I know that the word had to spread that they were married since Tina or Julia was there most of the time and B&T ofetn kissed in front of the hospital staff (Similarly, there is NO WAY that Candace didn’t know that Bette had a gf when she was introduced to her by her ex who had just asked about Tina. The b**ch knew and did’nt care). Not to mention how unprofessional Josh was to be flirtinh with Tina in front of her child. Please continue :o(
What the hell, damn my friend can’t believe you did this to them and damn drama keep coming to them, this is sad and hope you will let them work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Girls, girls, grils, are you all goin’ insane. This is Lauren’s story, she deals with it as she pleases, and it is her choice and here choice alone where this is heading. You can all have your comments, but please stay a little polite. If you think you can do the job better, please show me. Thanks Lauren for a very long and well written chapter, I’m looking forward how the story will develop, I’m with you all the way.
WTF!!!!! That it, I’m taking the next boat to Oslo and I don’t bring cookies….