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    A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 58

    Story written on September 5, 2005 by Lauren25.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=56440
    Author Notes:

    Well, where do I begin? Why don’t you just read it and make up your own summery?

    Chapter 58

     

    The nurse paged the doctor and ran for a glass of water. Bette stayed out in the hallway. She cried and cried. The nurse and the doctor went inside to Tina, but Bette couldn’t, not yet. A few minutes later, the nurse walks out. She sees Bette sitting on the floor leaning back to the wall. She kneels beside her.

    “She’s asking for you.” The nurse says.

    Bette looks up at the nurse. She wipes away a few tears then stand up. She doesn’t reply to the nurse, she just walks past her and into the room. The doctor is still there, doing tests. Bette sees that he’s about to check Tina’s legs. Bette hurriedly walks over to Tina and takes her hand and holds it tight. The doctor uncovers Tina’s legs. Bette sees the fear in Tina’s eyes. So she squeezes Tina’s hand a little tighter.

    The doctor uses his pen. He places it on Tina’s leg and moves it up and down. Tina’s eyes are watering up. She isn’t able to say anything. Bette leans down and gently kisses her forehead.

    “Do you feel this Ms. Kennard?” The doctor asks.

    Tina shakes her head slowly no, tears still streaming.

    “Okay, I’m going to schedule you for x-ray, to see how the swelling is.” The doctor says. After a few moments Tina finally speaks.

    “Am am I paralyzed?” She cries out weakly. Bette looks down on Tina and then over towards the doctor questioning.

    “Right now, you are, (Tina looks up at Bette with tears streaming.) But whether it’s permanent or not, we won’t know until the swelling goes down to reveal if there’s any damage to your spine.” The doctor replies. The doctor leaves, leaving Bette and Tina alone.

    Tina looks up at Bette with a heartbreaking look, a look of pure fear. Bette didn’t know what to say, so she just held her hand tightly to her chest, while wiping the tears with her free hand. There were a lot of tears, and many more to come.

    “Baby, I’m so sorry.” Bette finally says and looks at Tina. “I never wanted you to go, I just” Bette says, but is interrupted by Tina.

    “You kept something huge from me Bette, why?” Tina asks silently still crying a little.

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    5. I believe all the Mothers on the site will tell you the same thing Studt first Lets see so A’s and some B’s then you can make us happy by writing for us, It will be awhile but Bette and Tina will make it. Thanks for writing.

    7. I have two words to say…….temporary paralysis. Yes, I know you will have Tina walking by next chapter……(hint, hint)

      **mumblin** FF writers and their fuckin’ drama!!!!!!!!!! *_*

    8. i am so sad for Tina and i knew it Bette got out the room to cry but now she must to stay strong for both of them and Tina will need her love and suport more than ever that means no golf for a while but i have the same wish of snQQpy that Tina will walk by next chapter right??

    9. Ok, I just caught up. In the beginning, I was really upset with Tina’s reaction, but I guess we all have things that we don’t tell each other. Than again, how could she not notice? Don’t know why this would be such a big issue; you love the person. Anyway, glad that Tina is alive, you had me worried there for a second. I truly hope that she recovers fully. Are there things that Tina hasn’t told Bette??

    13. This was sad, but I hope that Tina will recover to full strenght. Maybe this is good for these two to realize that they cannot be seperated no matter what and that they will share everything with each other. Great chapter although a little sad. Kiitos!

    14. Heartbreaking, but glad they aren’t too proud to make things harder on each other. Glad that they are talking and supporting one another through their hurt. I’m hoping that Tina’s paralysis is only temporary. I really like this Dana. She’s not so goofy, and very supportive of her friend.

    17. you know when dificult times shows up is when we truly know who loves us and care about us..and for Tina this is a prove that Bette really loves her and care about her..love beyond words and hard times..Bette need to stop blame herself.. when things are write to happen noone could stop is destiny..i still have faith on you Lauren and know Tina will be able to walk again and realize all the plains Bette and her have made..ok amazing but sad chapter please post as soon as you can i know you need time to school..lol..

    19. Lauren..great chapter. It is sad, but Bette needs to stop blaming herself for what happened. I’m glad Bette & Tina are talking and not making it difficult for one another. Sometimes their prides get in the way. Thanks again for the chapter Lauren…I really don’t mind short chapters, because I really do love your story. What’s important is that you take care of yourself and do your homework. ;-)

    21. i know you won’t let us down… remember to study first and when you have the time… write… (i know it’s the mother in me… but school is life… and we will be here for you) so study hard…

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