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A Good Investment- 25
“I’m sorry…” Bette sheepishly said, “After the argument with your mother it seemed funny” She tried to excuse.
Tina took a deep breath, “I don’t care” She said, “I don’t care” She said again trying to convince herself. Bette just looked at her like she’s about to crack. “I… don’t… care…” She repeated. “You know why?”
Bette shook her head, looking scared.
“Because when my mother comes, you’ll deal with her, you’ll explain everything. Are we clear?”
Bette nodded.
“Good, now lets have fun. I’m going to the bathroom.”
“NO!” Bette yelled scared.
Tina closed her eyes, “Bette…” She gritted, “What am I going to find in the bathroom?”
“Toilet paper?”
“And?”
“Soap?”
“And?”
“And maybe… you know… coincidentally of course… they’ll smell like toffee.”
“And?”
“And maybe there’s a big toffee fountain on your way out with” Bette blurted.
“BETTE!” Tina said shocked.
“Too much?” Bette asked.
Tina took another deep breath, “I don’t care” She said to herself.
“You’re not going to hit me, are you?” Bette asked scared.
Tina looked at her, “I’m going to drown you in the toffee fountain!”
Bette cringed “You’re not saying that in a good way right?”
“Good way?”
“Yeah, like, I’m going to rub toffee all over you and lick it off”
Tina lifted her eyebrow.
“No. Got you.” Bette nodded. “You want me to leave you alone?”
“NO! You’re staying here I’m not handling my mother alone.” Tina said pulling Bette close, Bette immediately put her arms around Tina.
“God Bette what happened to the cakes?” Tina said banging her head on Bette’s shoulder.
“There, there” Bette said caressing Tina’s back kissing her head, “There are cakes, not to worry babe.”
“God” Tina groaned banging her head hard on Bette’s shoulder.
“Owww babe, that kind of… hurt.”
“Shut up” Tina mumbled.
“Ok.”
“Dance?” Bette asked after awhile.
“Fine” Tina sighed.
“Hard task?” Bette smiled.
“But someone has to do it.” Tina smiled back going to the dance floor. “You want to do the toffee dance?” Bette teased.
“The toffee dance? There’s a toffee dance?” Tina asked.
“No.” Bette smiled pulling Tina close. “Too bad there’s no upbeat songs here” She smiled, “Wouldn’t mind a little grinding and bumping.”
Tina caressed Bette’s back, Bette’s hand went to Tina’s thing, coming up she passed Tina’s breasts going to her neck caressing it. Tina’s hand was on Bette’s ass they looked at each other, their lips drawing closer.
“May I speak to you” Came Katharine strained voice. Bette jumped back, “Ha?”
“May I speak to you” Katharine repeated. “Now” she hissed.
Bette and Tina followed her to a private room, Melvin sat there.
“Dad” Bette smiled.
“What are these?” Katharine asked showing a toffee to Tina.
“Tina had nothing to do with it, she can sit down I’m responsible for this.” Bette said.
Tina sat down next to Melvin shyly smiling.
“You think this is funny?? And the fountain?”
“It adds character.” Bette simply said.
“And the toffee drink you added?” Katharine accused.
“Yummy!” Bette licked her lips.
“The toffee chair? The one that says only kings will sit on?”
“It’s one chair!”
“The wallpaper made of toffee wraps in the bathroom??”
Tina put her hands on her face, getting a headache.
“I… yeah…forgot about that one…” Bette said.
“Care to explain what is toffee happy hour?”
“No… I’d rather it be a surprise?” Bette tried.
“The raffle numbers you gave? Win toffee underwear? Win toffee supply for life??? I mean… god! I don’t even want to know what you do in your little find to toffee game!”
“Fair enough” Bette nodded.
“What were you thinking?? I mean there are toffee hats on people’s tables!”
“You don’t like the toffee hat?” Bette wondered, “I think it will look good on you.”
Katharine closed her eyes, “Who do you think will eat sushi with toffee??”
“Ok, that was too much, I admit it, I went a little over board with that one.”
“Only with that??”
“Everything else is very useful.” Bette argued.
“Oh my god!! How did you… when did you… WHY??” Katharine said. Bette looked at Tina smiling.
“Shut up!” Tina grumbled.
“You’re lucky we need to make an impression!” Katharine said walking away.
“Wait until she sees the ‘I survived Katharine toffee’s party’ t-shirts I’ve made” Bette smiled.
Melvin shook his head. “Come on we need to get back to your little toffee party.”
Bette smiled at Tina, “Coming?”
“Toffee underwear?”
“Not to worry, I have one for us” She winked. “Ready to go back?”
“Why do I have a feeling the party is just getting started?”
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(61 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Wow, that’s a heavy duty toffee obsession that Bette has there. Very cute Bette and Tina banter, but I’m still wondering why Katherine wanted them together and then wanted Tina to break up with Bette. What did Katherine hope to gain by them being married?
I think I’m in a toffee nightmare! Bette has gone way overboard but it is way too funny! and yes the party has just begun! Please may Tina & Bette leave together:) PPS
This is a hoot…
First part, *THUD* has to take a cold shower, damn that ws HOT!!! Second part, ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!! Bette is a Hilarious!!! I love her wit and humor, and the bantor is priceless. Katherine deserves the toffee nightmare. Actually, I think it’s creative. Love the story, please post the second part tonight, please!!
hilarious!!! drive katharine nuts with toffee on!!!! tina should stop worrying about her mom and have fun with bette.
I may have to go get some toffee..
Bette really does seem to have a toffee obsession well and a need to annoy the living crapola outta Katherine, LOL! I am glad that Tina calmed down a bit about Bette’s being late and hope she can hold on for the toffee ride. :)
VEry funny!!!! I love that Bette is going after Tina’s mom with the toffee. Tina needs to chill out. Thanks PPS
Just plain funny! It’s toffee madness.
so fucking funnyyyyyyy lol great. and 13 pages????? pink u RULE
I think I’m in toffee heaven with this chapter. WOW! The bike and afternoon delight was a total toffee treat! More soon I hope!
ROFL at bette and her toffee, bring on the rest! :)PPS
Just hilarious!! I hope katherine drowns in toffee. She’s like that spider that eats its young. PPS
omg that was funny and love Bette with her tofee party ahhaha