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A Thin Line – Chpt 11
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Previously
"Helena?"
She turned her head to look at me while smoothing her long, slender fingers over my breasts.
"Yes, Bette," she answered.
I detected a note of eagerness in her voice.
"Will you see me again? Later this week?" I asked.
"Hmm. Do you mean a date?" Helena replied, trying to disguise a smile while feigning deliberation.
"Yes. A date." I laughed.
"Well, as it happens," she began, "I do have an important function to attend later this week at a new art gallery. I thought perhaps you might like to escort me. What do you think?"
"I think it would be my immense pleasure to peruse an art gallery with a work of art such as yourself by my side," I replied.
Helena ran her hand down my abdomen and between my legs. I raised my hips off the bed. She reached over and kissed me.
"Bette, let’s get one thing straight. You’ll be the most admired work of art on exhibit," she whispered. "Now, I’m simply famished." She gave me a knowing grin. "I’m in need of some breakfast."
Chapter 11
I lifted my head and turned to look at Helena’s bedside clock. It read 7:15.
I luxuriated in the sheets where we’d made love, slept, and awoke, only to make love again. Rolling over, I smelled Helena’s pillow and listened to the water stream from the shower in the master bath. I visualized Helena’s nude physique under the spray.
She’d invited me to join her. And while I’d longed to spend every second that I could with our naked bodies together, I’d only declined her offer out of consideration for our time constraints. If Helena was to make it to the studio on time, I knew I had to separate myself from the stark beauty of her unclothed form.
Smiling, I’d kissed her and explained that it was a sacrifice, but I’d take a rain check.
"Your thoughtful concern is admirable, Bette," she’d said, kissing me in return and smoothing her hand over my hair and down across my shoulders.
Neither of us had wanted to disentangle from the other’s embrace.
"You’d better get moving, Helena," I whispered, but continued to hold her.
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Yes, I’m first! Off to read now. Bye!
God Tina don’t be so blonde
Love the development of the Belena relationship… can’t wait to see how Helena gets out of this thing with Tina, though I’d kinda just like to see her slap Tina and tell her to go back to her heterosexual life… I digress. Great post, looking forward to the next one!
Well if you hadn’t disabled the ratings I’d be able to give you 5 stars zheese. This chapetr was great. I still think Helena needs to explain to Bette what she was doing with Tina is she really had a thing for her from get. Ugh Tina, what drama is she bringing to Bette’s office today?? And hello, maybe she could knock once in a while!
I am loving this story and your writing.
Ha! You can’t stop here. I can’t wait to see how Helena will hide Bette from Tina while doing it not that successfully.
I love this story, Two beautiful ladies,would be hard to choose. Can I have both? guess not. How will Helena get over Tina listening and tell her a lie.that she doesnt know her. Did Tina ever know Bette and her moods. Let her live her life with a male that will alway have a doubt about her. thanks
well, that was one great chapter, zheese… i’m sure helena looks good under the spray in the shower and her and bette even better, hopefully we’ll get to see this in the nearest time.. anyway, i can’t wait for them to go out together and as for tina, well, just let helena tell her everything and slap her a couple of times just so she knows what she lost (and can’t get back, at least in this story ;). great chapter, love your writing, please post soon.
Great chapter. I am not a Belena fan but your writing makes me a believer. Looking forward to your next post.
damn….that was good. bette and helena are so good together…it seems all too real…great job, looking forward to the next post!!!
Z, the way you’re writing B&H, there’s definitely chemistry between them. Can’t wait to see when Tina finds out. Tell her, Helena!! LOL. Great job. Looking forward to the next post.
excellent chapter, you had me awww-ing all the way through, so sweet n cute! cannot believe you stopped where you did though. Love it! cant wait for the next installment. thank you!
Looking forward to where you take this story next. Thanks for writing! I hear you about how the characters lead you in a certain direction…
Ha! I almost want Helena to tell her, just so Tina can realize she lost not one, but two unbelievably gorgeous women and she has ZERO chance of getting them back. :D lol. Can’t wait for more
You write so well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You’re great!!!!!!!!! I love to read your stories!!!!
Great chapter, zheese. So love the interaction between the two gorgeous women ^_^ What’s Helena gonna tell Tina?
haha that Tina doesn’t have a clue!
oh please don’t leave us hanging too long, i’m not above begging!!!!