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A Thin Line – Chpt 25
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Previously
“Helena, I love you.”
I looked back in her eyes. Astounded. “Bette?” I whispered.
“I do, Helena. I love you. I wanted to be the first to say it.”
I pulled her close and whispered in her ear, “And I love you.” I thought I might cry and burst from happiness as she held me tightly.
We kissed. And then we made love ‘til the wee hours of the morning.
Chapter 25
I awoke and heard the birds chirping outside before opening my eyes. Helena’s arm was wrapped around me as I lay on my side. I turned my head, looking up. Helena was propped up watching me. I smiled.
“What are you doing?” I said, rolling over to face her.
“Watching my sleeping beauty,” Helena answered with a grin, lying down on her side.
I kissed her tenderly, pulling her close.
“Good morning,” I said, rubbing my hand up and down the soft skin of her back.
“Good morning to you,” she replied.
We stared into one another’s eyes, smiling, and caressing the tresses from the other’s face. I ran my leg up and down hers and massaged her ass. I pecked tiny kisses all over and around her lips. When I drew back, Helena placed two fingers on my mouth and traced over it gently. I kissed and licked her fingers. Then I reached to remove them and to hold her hand.
Loosing those three words from my lips last night had created one of the most tender, passionate, and expressive lovemaking interludes of my life. To describe it in terms of art, it was as beautiful as the Sistine Chapel.
“Helena,” I spoke softly, gushing, “last night was one of the most wonderful nights of my life.”
“Mine too,” Helena replied, leaning in to kiss me again. She caressed my face with her thumb. “I love you so much, Bette.”
I kissed her. “I love you,” I whispered. And then I kissed her again. “I love you.” And again. “I love you.” And again.
I rolled over on my back and exhaled with a sigh. Helena placed her head on my chest and caressed my breast and nipple.
“What is it, Darling? Why the heavy sigh?” she asked.
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Well, Peggy DID have a point.
What a gathering. What a story. More please.
Fantastic!!!!!Don’t stop now you’ve got me hooked!!
Drama!! I love it.
Hahahahaha! I just LOVE Peggy! LMAO!
rotflmfao…that was so funny!!! you so have peggy down…she is priceless…and tina with the “i can tell she’s been f***”…and then alice’s comments about tina’s discomfort….oh man zheese, this was priceless and certainly worth the wait. looking forward to the next post…the “i f**** bette porter fan club” …priceless. thank you!
As soon as you had TIna join the the circle, I just knew something was coming out of Peggy’s mouth!! oh my god!! I laugh so hard, i almost peed!
Peggy’s a pistol! When you’ve got money and say something inappropriate you’re deemed eccentric or outspoken but when you’re of ordinary means then you thought of as trashy or low class. But very funny!
Yes Peggy is a pistol, but why rag on Bette here, and embarrass the woman to death!! I love your story, love Bette and Helena but I could live very comfortably NEVER hearing Alice go on about how Bette wronged her, broke her heart, ruined her life and so on, again!! they dated a few weeks…PERIOD! She has always had this bitterness and is why she is first in line to stand by Tina, no matter what tina does. Tina and alice make me nuts..and not in a good way. must calm down..I think I need another drink!! Gumby? Where are ya gumby!!
hahaha….I fucked Bette Porter club….you’re so bad….can I join this club??
ah zheese. I laughed out loud a few times with this chapter…don’t apologize for the snail’s pace – sometimes a slower pace is exactly what is required in order to tell a story properly. Well done.
zheese, another good one! I have been strangely busier than ever, which has prevented me from commenting and pm’g as I have in the past. Great chapter and the great story continues. I’m still thoroughly enjoying!
Peggy has such a way with words and Tina too “So what’s new?” Indeed. Fun chapter in every way.
Damn, I missed this post! I’m deeply sorry. Quite a hilarious chapter. I could feel how freaking AWKWARD that would be and this line certainly had me laughing: “My, God, what is this?” Peggy exclaimed in astonishment. “Isn’t this an Edouard Pince Gallery Opening? Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?”Hahaha! Great work, going to read the next.
Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?”Best line ever–and Peggy was dead on….LOL!
lol…I have been in exactly that situation, with my present gf, our (we had both been with her) ex and her exs…5 in all!!!!! it was harder for the Bette Porter in the group than us exs!!!
Haha Zheese this was hilarious. Peggy really doesn’t know when to quit does she. She’s so crazy but I love her. Please continue the good work girl.
rotflmfao LOL LOL LOLPeggy is always the best… I didn’t realize the Club fact until she said it LOL :D She is sooo funny and she can be so embarassing and Helena is so subject to her LOL My God, zheese, I laughed a lot at this chapter. Nice work :D Keep it up, I will ship these two and your story as long as it goes on.
Now could that have been any more uncomfortable?? Wow, nice choice of women to assemble. I guess they really could compare notes about Bette. OK, enough chatter, lets get these two love birds home.
Peggt is too much she had me rolln on the ground laughin. At the same time though she was right
Excellent! …. This line was the best! …” Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” You are a very clever writer. I am really enjoying this story. Thank you.
lol…that was funny…Peggy is like a 3 year old…you never know what’s coming out her mouth…I bet you could have heard a pen drop…even though the ladies probably could compare notes…love this story please continue.
lol, Leave it to Peggy to state what everyone else KNOWS they were thinking, lol. Great update. But I need to add…. I hate Tina. She hasn’t even DONE anything yet, but she’s going to offer false niceties or just be, and yeah.. grrr. lol. Great update though
“My, God, what is this?” …have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” OUCH – THAT WAS HARSH…love my Peggy P GREAT chapter!
Zheese, I love the sense of desire, heat and lust that you create in this story. The way in which Bette and Helena can’t physically keep their hands off each other is wonderful. I am sure the rest of the gals can smell the scent of longing on them. Ansd wasn’t Candace gracefully and restrained while perfect Peggy cam e up with an awesome line “Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” You had me rolling in the aisles with that one. It just seemed so true to Peggy’s character and volcabuary. You have such a talent for balance all of these characters and their dialouge that it genuinely astounds me. Can’t wait to see where it leads. Thank you for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.
That was to funny. Peggy and her way of getting right to the truth. Just Great!!! Please post soon
Ha ha! Love Peggy! That was fun. Thanks zheese ^_^