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A Thin Line – Chpt 28
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Previously
“We’ll do anything and everything you desire,” Helena replied. I could tell she was smiling. “And I have a surprise for you on Sunday, if you’re good,” she teased.
“Helena! That’s just bad!” I exclaimed.
“Whatever do you mean, Darling?” Helena asked coquettishly.
“A surprise! You tantalize me with a surprise that’s two days away! What a tease you are! That’s just mean!” I jested.
“You won’t think I’m so mean when you get it,” she replied persuasively.
Chapter 28
Helena had finally found the opportunity to display her culinary talents for me. And we dined alfresco that Friday evening next to the pool.
I cut a bite of swordfish that Helena had grilled and dipped it in the cilantro-lime butter sauce.
“And so then what happened?” I asked, urging Helena to continue the story of her first love. Or girl crush, as she called it.
It happened in the South of France where Helena had spent her summer holiday with her mother in a villa. Helena was seventeen. Peggy had hired a twenty-year old culinary student as a chef for the duration of their stay. Her name was Avril, and she and Helena became very close for those few months.
“I suppose those cooking lessons gave me a lifelong interest in the culinary arts,” Helena laughed. “We had a few sexual encounters, towards the end, before we each packed up and went back to school. Me, of course, to England. And Avril, to Paris. We exchanged addresses and promised to write, but after a few letters that practice fell to the wayside.”
“Did you ever see her again?” I inquired curiously, before taking another bite of Helena’s lovingly prepared swordfish.
“I did, as a matter of fact. Several years later. I was in Paris with Mummy. We were lunching at a sidewalk café. I looked up to a familiar voice that greeted us, and there she was. Of course, she had to tell Mummy and I who she was, because neither of us recognized her. Seems she had gained more than a few pounds, as well as married. And she had a few kids in tow.”
I picked up my glass of Pinot Gris. “I suppose that was a bit of a shock,” I commented as I swirled my wine.
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great updat zheese. Waw Helena and Bette have more and more in common and all this shows us how much they are made for each other. please don’t wait so long next time before you post again. Thx
Zheese! I’m sooo addicted to your writing. Its the whole flow.. I’m glad you’re bring their relationship into a higher level – something deeper than just sexual attraction. :D please continue!
Helena’s got more skills than we know. I can’t wait to see the surprise.Post soon. I need my nightly Belena fix
I knew Bette was passionate about art, but I didn’t think it was literal. Get out those brushes, Helena. And use them creatively!
wherever your writing takes you…let it…yet again, that was real good. looking forward to your next post. THANKS!
ahh…that’s it? That’s all you’re giving us? Well I guess I have to take! I love the fact that Helena paints and also how you added in there about Bette AND Peggy both stated they liked her stuff out of not wanting to embrass Helena. Can’t wait for more!
Zheese, It may have been awhile since your last post but it has been worth it as this chapter rocks! The counter balance between Helena’s and Bette’s thoughts and points of view are awesome. Can’t wait to find out Helena’s real surprise. Will this surpass her culinery talents and painting? Am sure that you have some real romance up your sleeve. Thank you so much for this afternoon delight. Your Loyal Fan.
Bette rubbed her nose against mine playfully. Then she took my lips with a passion I’d never known. ………. To say art really turns Bette on is an understatement. To say its art done by Helena which has stirred Bette’s sensual juices means the next chapter is going to sizzle. Hopefully it wont be too long before you post the next one and believe me, I enjoyed this one as well !! ^_^
Ah zheese. Thanks for another great update. Love your writing. Helena, an artist? wow!
Ooh, what a cute story with Avril and Helena…and how Peggy knowingly-without-saying had her confirmations about Helena’s little fling with the culinary student. I loved how Bette reacted to the paintings! And the fact that Helena had them at all. What a lovely chapter, yet again, can’t wait to read more. And let those characters keep on talking to you- they’re telling you great things!