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A TiBette Love Story: After The Massage {24}
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“That…feels…incredible…” Tina managed to say between strokes.
“Mmmm, for me too Tee, for me too,” Bette replied as she did it again, but this time once she reached the top, instead of releasing her tongue off the corner of Tina’s mouth, she simply began flicking it with her tongue slowly. The simple act rendered both women into complete putty. Bette quickly released what she had been unconsciously doing. She had been worshipping Tina’s mouth, and from her angle, she was unwittingly kissing her mouth as if it was another part of her anatomy – a part she hoped to experience soon. She feared it might be wrong, too soon, too much for Tina, but she couldn’t control herself. She licked down the slightly parted lips again, only to drag her whole mouth, not just her tongue, back up…again flicking the top again, easily imagining an invisible nub there.
Both women were whimpering and Tina’s restless legs had begun shifting on the bed. She had never been so turned on in her life. And despite her lack of knowledge of lesbian sex, she completely understood what Bette was doing – so much so, that she thought she was going to pass out from the eroticism of the act, and the complete foreshadowing it offered. She couldn’t help but picture their first time together and she knew just from this kissing that Bette was going to be an unbelievable lover.
Just when she was about to say something, Bette abruptly stopped, rolling off Tina and onto the side of the bed. “I’m so sorry Tee….I just got lost in the feel of you….I didn’t mean to cross a line.”
Tina sat up in the bed and replied quietly, “Who said you crossed a line Bette? If I didn’t want you to do that to me, I would have stopped you.”
“Are you sure? Because I don’t want to do anything to jeopardize what we are building together here. I just got completely lost in the moment. Our meal, the incredible massage, the starscape you built for us, falling asleep in your arms and then waking up to your scent….what can I say? I have fallen so hard for you Tee that I have trouble holding back I guess.”
“Hey I am the one that said this was now technically our third date, so I think you are being allâ€together too hard on yourself….ok?”
Bette let out a sigh of relief and fell back on the bed, with her face now below Tina’s.
Tina looked down at her eyes, offering her a warm smile. Her thumb then touched the corner of Bette’s mouth as she said, “Now, I am no expert, but do all lesbians mimic oral sex with mouths?”
Bette let out a soft, almost embarrassed laugh, and rolled her head into the nearby pillow to hide her blush. When she rolled back, Tina was chuckling and smiling widely as she simply said, “OK Porter, let’s go back to the living room for a glass of port before I see you to the door.”
As Tina left the room to go pour them a small drink, Bette remained on her back, feet on the floor, head in the clouds. “She called me Porter,” she smiled aloud….
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Great story. Looking forward to more.
Steamy and erotic, if that’s what you’re going for. LOL.
Very hot…Thanks for the update.
Wow! That was hot. But also cute. I loved the whole “painting” bit. From the beginning, with Bette’s reasoning on why she has to paint Tina, to the finger painting part. So cute. And then… well, you hit us with the hotness. I tend to skim over NC-17s, there’s really only so many ways in which you can describe these things, but I’m glad I didn’t skip over a word of yours. Maybe because of the R rating :) PPS!
can i just say wow erotic and they haven’t even gotten to the “soft tissue vein” yet LOL…this truly is a slow burn…i just have this feeling that when it finally happens it will render me commentless. LOL LOL
Alrighty then.That went well. Reallyreallyreally well.
Love IT!!! Very HOT!!! Thanks PPS
Erotic and sweet.
I have, like M. Poirot, “a little idea” re: the identity of your ghostie, Luv… but I’m keeping schtum. Anyway, the chapter… That painting scene… Gosh. Loved it, loving the story. Thanks, Luv (and the ghost)! :)
So sensual, erotic, amazingly sweet and darn that is just the foreplay. What would happen to the reader when they do finally engage in a full night of passion and pleasure?
That was great, they are hot!
I think that was an incredible chapter! I love the imagery of Bette painting Tina’s face. And the kissing … I don’t even know what to say about that. :) I loved this chapter. And I’m still loving the pace. It adds so much depth. Thank you for posting!
i so love tina’s comment that made bette blush so bad…erotic, sweet, romantic…rolled into one wonderful update…now, has the third date really begun??? :)
waooooooo that was. some more please lol. they are getting there…. PPVS
this chapter made my heart flutter for the things that are to come for Bette and Tina.. Great update!!!
What can I say??? Soooo hot!!!!
That was awesome! I actually had a hot flash reading that chapter, it was so well written :) You know how much I love a slow burn, tension, teasing…and this is a perfect example of how to do it right. It’s those glow stars I tell you, real chick magnet :P Loved it.
HAWT HAWT…….those two know how to drive it home…..that painting scene was great….
I’m in the same state! My feet on the floor, head in the clouds. Umm… Clouds? I hope so will not fall the rain. :o) I would melt than because of your story. Hahaha!
omg this is such sweet torture! I love the way you describe the things so detailed. Bette should defenitly try to paint tina! With her knowledge of art, and tina’s beauty, it will become gorgeous! Thanx, i love it. Pps!
You did it again! Amazing chapter. You really know how to describe a great kiss! Thanks for being my escape from my own story-I promise I will make it right in the end!! PPS!!
I like the slowdown in pace, the energetic giddiness (and mini-heart attacks?) of previous chappies is definitely toned down here, but it’s fantastic to see them take their relationship one level up and the burner turned up two notches hotter…:p It is romantic, sensual, expressive. Wonderful, BRAVO! mz dear Luv ( and to your ghostie whoever she is). — greetings from London this time. LOS
Ok Roomie – I almost passed out as well – talk about eroticism, sensuality – oh man! That was extremely hot!…now not only can you write, you cook fabulous meals for me and now you can massage … oh man! Now how did i get so lucky to get a roomie like you. Thanks Roomie – love this story! Thank you to your “ghost” writer as well. Lovely!
WOW! This chapter was AMAZING. A chin-on-the-floor kind of chapter. Sooooo beautiful. I loved the painting part and the oral sex mimic part. So romantic, erotic and sensual. So Bette and Tina! You should be writing as a living, you are really talented. That’s why I wait a whole week to read you. I have to admit that reading it was such a pleasure that I did it twice! I guess I got much more than I whished… thank you very much. By the way, I didn’t buy any glow-in-the-dark stars yet… but I asked my mom if she knows where I can buy it. =] She doesn’t… =[ (I’m not gonna say “please post soon” this time because after a chapter like that you deserve a whole week to rest and think about another one!)