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Six years ago I walked out on Bette Porter, the most beautiful woman in the world, to find myself. Somehow through our relationship I lost myself in her. It wasn’t hard to do, I mean her presence is incredible. I have never seen anything like her.
We have continued to run our business together, so we see each other quite often. And she is still the most wonderful person that I have ever met. I long for her. My love for her has only grown in the time that we have spent apart.
After I left, I went through some intensive therapy to try to get to the bottom of my issues and learn how to manage them better. Let me say that it was the best thing that I have ever done for myself and the worst thing that I could have done to my relationship with Bette.
Don’t get me wrong, we are great friends, but she wasn’t there when I was ready. She had moved on to be with another. It absolutely broke my heart. My love for her has not diminished one bit, since our split. I mean six years is a long time to ask someone to wait. Especially, a woman like Bette. Although I am sad about my missed opportunity, I am glad because Bette seems truly happy with her new partner. They have even adopted a set of twin girls who are simply gorgeous. Bette is a great mother, but I always knew that she would be. But don’t get me wrong, I won’t lie it is very hard to see Bette with another woman.
As for me, I have never been able to connect with anyone else in quite the same way. I haven’t even had sex since the last time that I cheated on Bette. Ironic, isn’t it? I am dating someone currently, but it’s hard to date when you know that you are in love with someone else.
Today is a very sad day. I will be seeing Bette later today, but seeing her like this is incredibly hard. I wish that I could take all of the pain away. She is simply inconsolable. I have never seen her like this before, ever. I struggle to keep myself from taking her into my arms and protecting her from any and everything. I dream of holding her, running my hands through those curls, kissing those lips and with a sigh I suddenly remember and I am reminded that alas, that is not longer my role in her life. Losing her has been so hard. Should her new partner falter, even slightly, I will be there to try and rekindle my relationship with Bette. She will have to keep Bette close because I am watching her and waiting for her to slip-up. If she gives me even a slight opening, I will make the most of the opportunity to get Bette back. All is fair in love and what I have for Bette is definition of love.
I digress; let me tell you about today. Today, I will be seeing Bette and her family under tragic circumstances. We will all be attending the funeral services for her best friend and my confidant Kit Porter.
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This really is the last bit of this story for now. Tina says that she has changed but I am not sure she’s changed a whole lot if she is watching this woman hoping she will mess up in her relationship with Bette. I think that is counter productive. Tine should try and find her own partner so that she doesn’t mess with Bette’s life, especially if Bette is happy.Oh well, those were my final thoughts on Tina.
wow… not what i was expecting
Yes, Tina’s… well. Six years to figure herself out, and she didn’t try to get Bette back at all? I think Bette’s better off without her, to be honest, and her definition of love. At least Tina’s secret is safe, I suppose. It’s time for Tina to move on, totally.
Wow…I am speechless over that ending.
Wow! Kit, huh? I do hope you come back and dazzle me again.
Tina hasn’t had sex for at least 6 years??? Wow and I thought I had it rough. Such a painful parting. Hopefully you won’t stay away for too long.
WOW!!!! That’s what Tina gets for waiting. Thank you
Oh the rage I feel, the depth of the betrayal of tina and Bette’s best friend..and still tina wants Bette’s new lover to screw up, and that Bette should have waited for her cheating ass for years and years…errggh!!
best friend and sister, I mean
Ouch… ok, I left a comment on the last one RIGHT as this was posted, but I really don’t know what to say now… Just… wow…
okay, i didn’t expect that ending and i can’t say i liked it…not the writing but the idea…i don’t even know what to say…
Wrong again Tina….the definition of love would be you leaving Bette alone to finally be happy without you and your drama!
I’m sorry but I can’t see Kit doing this to Bette. Maybe if you would have given Kit a chapter to explain the reasons why she wouldn’t tell Bette that Tina was cheating on her.
wig, I knew that people would struggle with the fact that it was Kit, which is why I started not to reveal it at all. The thing is that in the 10 years that Bette and Tina were together; Tina and Kit formed their own close bond. And Kit in this case was an honorable woman and when Tina told her this in confidence what could she do? She tried to give Bette a hint, but how can she tell her without going back on her word to Tina. A woman without her word is not much. I am sure that she struggled having this terrible secret and keeping it from her sister. I guess that’s all the explanation that I can offer. Kit’s role in this wasn’t big enough to warrant her own chapter. The focus was on Bette and Tina’s journey.
Moho, I’ve read you capturing chapters…it amazes me how each author can put their own B&T twist. AS for Kit knowing about the affair…well…I can actually see it. Kit, along with Alice were the first two to find out TIna was pregnant and Kit had planned not to let Bette know that the two women had been there with Tina. So I can see this happening..of course when i first read it..I thought it meant Tina had her affair with KIT! hahahahaha oh well. laters Thanks for sharing this with us!
Ahhh…for a minute I thought her confidant was Kit…but then I was like Kit wouldn’t do that to her baby sis…guess I was wrong. It’s hard when someone tells you something in confidence and you promise to keep it…but dag she saw the agony they were going thru in their relationship. Surely she saw the changes Bette had made and she couldn’t give her sister a heads up? Well can’t say what you would do unless faced with the situation so I digress. It was indeed a good story and thank you so much for sharing it. I hope you post more stories soon.
OMG,like pands, I thought tina had the affair with Kit, I thought she was talking to the one she cheated with..still a betrayal though on both parts
I knew it!! I wrote my last comment before I read this. Keep it up, you are a great writer!!!
The thing is, that Tina said she had two affairs right?? So either she had one and told Kit and had another and told Kit or she told Kit about both, after the fact. Anyone can make one mistake, but she had more than one plus told Kit she didn’t know if she would have any more..this was Bette’s sister and best friend. Word be damned, who was Kit’s allegiance to in this ongoing betrayal of Bette?
In my opinion Tina represents the more stronger character, having said this maybe you have a more insight into the story you have written, I have to be honest I don’t quite get why Tina thought that it would have been best to leave the person she loves to find herself. I would think the love we have for someone is a part of ones self. Maybe, and this is just a maybe, they were never meant to be together. Which is ultimately the story you told and the story most fitting for these two characters. I found it interesting that you equated finding ones self with the burden of doing it alone away from love.
Wow..painfully unexpected. What a secret for Kit to live with, maybe the guilt and emotional stress contribute to her untimely demise. I’m with slippery in my view of this Tina. Thanks!