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Actions Speak Louder than Words chpt.34(from Is Love Enough)
Tina: I love you too babe
They kiss. Tina breaks the kiss
Tina: I think that we should shower
Bette: Yeah me too. I feel so yucky
Tina: But you look so beautiful
Bette smiles
Bette: Thank you. I needed to hear that
Tina: Anytime. Now lets hit the shower
Bette: Good idea
Tina undoes her strap on leaving the harness on the bed…She takes the condom off of the *****…She places the items along with the condoms and the lubricant back into the drawer…She then goes over to Bette who is waiting for her at the door…Bette entends her hand and Tina takes it…The two walk to the bathroom and close the door behind themselves…Bette cuts the water on and they both get into the shower…
MEANWHILE AT CARMEN’S HOUSE
Located about 20 minutes from Shane’s in the Los Feliz area of L.A…Carmen is outside with Shane and her parents…They are Jose Morales, Jennifer Morales, and her younger sister Carlotta…Carmen’s father is working the grill while her mother is serving the food and drinks…Her younger sister is helping with setting up the back yard…Shane and Carmen are seated near one another…They are holding hands…Her father glances up at them every now and then and this makes Carmen at bit nervous…Jennifer looks at her father and then back to Carmen
Jennifer: Jose quit that look that you keep on giving Carmen
Jose lifts his hands in the air defining his innocense
Jose: What?
Jennifer: You know what. You are making her uncomfortable
Jennifer turns and looks at Carmen
Jennifer: Go ahead and hold your girlfriend’s hand
She then turns and gives Carmen’s father a look not a nice one either…Rather that one that states that she isn’t playing…He turns back to the grill and begins cooking the food again
Carmen: Thanks mom
Jennifer: Anything for you precious
She walks over and kisses Carmen on the forhead…She then takes Shane and Carmen’s hand and puts them together…She then looks at her clock
Jennifer: I wonder where your friends are?
Carmen: Mom they will be here about 5:00. Besides its early so until then lets enjoy ourselves please
Jennifer: Ok baby. Shane are you thirsty can I get you something?
Shane: A beer would be nice thank you
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(40 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
Only you could make a strap-on scene all about the love. Wow. HOTT. HOTT. HOTT. Tina is just so creative with the positioning and everything. I also like how Bette was sad but not angry that Alice knew before hand. She seems to really be growin up. And I also like how you tied in the incident with b&t showing up too early for the cruise. And Carmen’s family sure is open-minded. Can’t wait to see what you have in store for us next. Thanks for another great post and looking forward to the next one.
Oh damn that was so fucking hot and damn amazing, love it. Post soon, thanks!
That was unbelievable..incredible!!! One of the best iv’e ever read…great job :)
wow…vakkav that was HOT!! Wow…that’s all I can say!
oh my…that was fucking HOT!!! amazing chapter V post soon with more “play with toys”..lol..thanks
OMG! I need a cold shower. Thanks..that was an incredible chapter
K
Great chapter, very hot. Can’t wait to see what happens at the bbq.
Just cleaning my throat here. Holy cow that was a hot ride Vakkav. Well I´m speachless. Amazing – keep doing what ever it is because it´s working on you loyal fans.
well holy hell…jesus…that was unbelievably hot!! my mind is still like..DAMN!!
I love it and can’t wait to see what happens please post soon