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Apogee 8
Okay so no driveby’s people I wanna tally who’s reading so if you read it just comment, ‘I read it’ if you would please.
Thanks,
ClosetDana
Tina sat up slowly keeping her eyes locked on Bette, something unreadable in the brown depths. The widow came within inches of Bette’s face studying every curve and dimple in her caramel skin. Bette sat still, dying to attack the blonde but sure that it had to be Tina’s decision. The widow placed her cheek against Bette’s, sliding her lips slowly across Bette’s cheek to full and accepting lips. So slowly Tina pressed her lips against Bette’s, the brunette had to catch the small gasp that rose in her throat and threatened to shatter their moment. Tina pulled away slowly, looking into Bette’s eyes that reflected her own passion.
She didn’t understand why she felt the way she did, the widow barely knew Bette but tonight they enjoyed each other’s company like old friends. The brunette still sat frozen, the only movement Bette made was her chest heaving. Uncontrolled breathing from a kiss that was so light it could barely be called that. They stared for what seemed like an eternity before Tina moved in again much faster on the second pass. The widow pulled Bette into her, moving her hands through the brunette’s thick locks. Tina placed aggressive pecks on Bette’s mouth, the brunette slowly opening her mouth and thrusting her tongue against Tina’s.
The widow moved her body closer wishing to feel more contact, Bette ran her hands along Tina’s back. Her fingers pushing under the light fabric that separated them, she trailed her hands up the widows smooth back, unlatching the bar to set the breasts that she craved to taste free. Tina froze pulling back and staring at Bette in horror,
“I’m…I am so sorry, I’m sorry I should go…I’m gonna go.” Tina was up in a flash making her way toward the front door that she was sure she wasn’t going to find easily. Tina turned random corners Bette close on her heels,
“Tina wait a second, hold on.” The widow stumbled upon a familiar hallway and found her way to the front considerably faster than Bette would have guessed. Once she’d reached the front door, the widow turned to Bette quickly extending her hand.
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(47 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
read it loved it rated it and commented tht was sum hot stuff
I read it
Read it! Loved it! Well, except for the Yankees part! Look forward to the next chapter.
read it and please post again…soon!
read it
After wrestling my cat off of my computer, I READ THE STORY. So much for getting to know someone before sex. How about getting to know someone during sex. I guess Tina got a little scared. Now, how long before Tina returns to Bette? When will Tina find out that it was Bette who ordered her husbands death? Great post.
read it
read it
Not only read it, but first went back and read all the other installments, sucked into following yet another story!
read and enjoyed
read it, post soon pls
I think I went crazy in my comments about Tino Martinez, who I adore – even more than Danish! (Don’t kill me.) I’m positive I commented, but they seem to be gone.
*raises hand* I read every single chapter of this fic that you toss our way!
Read it loved it, really want more shane and carmen
psh, as if Dana and Alice could NOT have sex! Love the story so far!
This is great!
read it
Not only read it, but loved it! :)
I loved this chapter, Damn where is The Kitty Klub? F*ck I want to go to place. =)Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Aquaman! I love Aquaman… muahaha… I love Hawkgirl more, but that is besides the point. the point is, I love your story. And am checking in here religiously to see if you have updated. You please give us a longer chapter next time, yes? Please!!!
read it, loved it
read it dude…and it wa awesome!!! ;)
Love Love Loved it!
read it, loved it. i think ive been to that club, its in amsterdam isnt it lol
Read it. and I really liked it x
Great update. Post soon. Alice & Dana, very HOT!
Read it and as usual, loved it. Please post soon. I hope Tina isn’t freaked out for too long….
I read it and love it please post soon
Read and enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!
Skimmed over it. ;) I saw the NC-17 rating and had to see what was going on. Methinks I’ll have to start reading this one for real.
Nice work closetdana, very, very nice.
Very nice. I love it. Keep it up. Danish is my favorite!
I read this story. I really enjoy it.
I read it, I loved it, I want some more of it . . . please, oh and more Sharmen . . . gotta love thos two LYLAS
Read it, like it more
Great chapter. The whole resistance thing is pretty hot…it makes build up and tension that much better. Can’t wait till the next chapter!
Read it, loved and will be back. Sorry for not being constant in the feedback comments. You’re probably wondering if you’re getting to me!! Well you are so keep up the very good work with all your stories. I’ll try to be more constant in ginving comments after I read them! PS I like that you post often with smaller chapters than one larger post every two weeks! (of course no one can compete with brteyes on that level)
simply great! post soon
Read it, really liked it.
Still loving this story, the interaction between my 2 fav danish girls is brilliant, please post again soon -x-
not only read all, but luved all….would luv more of b&t though…..great job!!!!!!!!!
Oi mate, read it last night, didn’t get a chance to comment (would’ve been first) he, heh,heh…love it. Dane is dark with ‘er dannies, eh? Luv it when they shag, it’s rare (excellent). Aye, get paid to stop dancing to Country, but otherwise I’m magic! Loving it…gotta do a bunk. Ta mate!
Read it and completely loved it!!!! Ciao
I always seem to keep on rambling when it comes to commenting on your stories (or brteyes’ story for that matter…good to see you two are helping each other out!). :D Who’s seducing who, either way Bette and Tina are both falling hard. :) Mark and Gomey will be back. Taking a shower is not a good idea…but I have a feelingyou are gonna us the fact that one of them will be naked wisely. :P Alice forgave Dana in a sec, didn’t she?. :) They are really bad in following their on rules…no sex indeed! ;) They were freaking hot!!! :D Watch your PM.
i stumbled upon this by accident as i am not a Dana/Alice fan, but I have read all the chapters and I love it. Totally new approach..I so can see Shane as a hitwoman and Bette as an brilliant, beautiful, powerful criminal type! I am in for every chapter! I know you don’t like skimmers too much but the separate segments for the characters is okay!!! Write more more more soon!!!
I love Alice and Dana, and now I can go to bed content. So thank you!
Read it. Great story.
Read it loved it more. thanks