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As I…….
As I look at you sleeping…my heart floods with emotion. I love you so much. There you are sleeping on your tummy with your face to me. I have to touch you…but what if I wake you up? But I have to touch you…you’re my baby…
I gently touch the tip of your nose with my finger…you wiggle your nose a little but you don’t wake up. My need to touch you overwhelms me…I stroke your hair and you stir. You look at me. You look so sleepy and adorable…you smile and say ‘hey’.
I whisper to you that I love you very much. I lean into you and kiss you gently. You taste so sweet baby. I rub my nose against yours and then kiss you again.
I gently roll you over onto your back. You’re wearing a t-shirt – and it looks so comfy – and you look adorable in it. Your hair is all messed up. You look so cute…I can’t possibly resist you. I notice that the t-shirt is all you’re wearing….i pull you up in bed and lift the shirt off over your head. I craddle you in my arms and slowly lower you back down onto the bed – your head sinking into your pillow. I lean into you and kiss you again…I whisper to you. ‘I need to look at you…all of you….’ I sit up and lift my t-shirt over my head and let it fall to the floor. Still sitting- my eyes study your body – every inch…every curve. ‘You’re so beautiful baby….’ Tears form in my eyes as I look at you…the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen. Through my tears…I whisper I need you….i want you….please…can I make love to you?’ You look into my eyes – into my soul – into my very being. You whisper back – one simple word. ‘Yes…’
I kiss you again…my god baby…your lips fit mine perfectly…so soft…so inviting. I could kiss you all day long…all night long…forever. I want you to feel me. I part your lips with my tongue and you let me in with no resistence. Our tongues dance…and it’s a wonderful feeling. When our kiss ends I look into your eyes. I see your soul baby…your soul is open for me…you’ve let me in…only me. A tear rolls down my cheek…my love for you overwhelming me again. I smile at you…you smile back and reach up and wipe the tear from my cheek. I kiss you again – longer – harder…more passionately……
I kiss your forehead…your cheeks….my hands craddling your face – like precious china….you are precious. I kiss you again and tell you i love you….you give me that look – the one only you and I share. The look that tells me you know and tells me how much you love me.
I kiss you again…and through tears again…I tell you…’I’m so in love with you…thank you for letting me love you…for letting me know you…for letting me in.’ I kiss you again…gently…our tongues dancing again…slowly but deliberately….our lips part….I kiss your chin..and then slowly lick my way down your neck…i pause to pepper you with kisses all over your neck – and after each kiss I moan and whisper ‘ I love you.’ I move down to your *****…god baby…gorgeous. I touch your nipple gently with my eyelashes…you arch your back and moan – I move quickly back up your body so we are facing each other. I have to kiss you…I have to feel your lips – have you breathe your life into me….’I’ll always be here…always….’ your body relaxes and i move back down to your *****. My fingers tease the nipple of your left breast while my tongue…and my lips savor your right nipple…my god baby….your nipples are so hard…I suck your right nipple into my mouth and you arch your back again and moan. I’m becoming lost in you….I move my mouth to your left nipple and suck it gently….I graze it with my teeth. I would never do anything to hurt you….
I move my body between your legs – which you’ve opened up for me – a wonderful invitation. an invitation to love you…to make love to you…to be inside you…to move inside you…to physically fill you with my fingers and my tongue… as emotionally…my feelings reach out to find and fill your soul…your heart….
I pause for a moment and place my head on your chest….I hear your heart beating…i hear you breathing….tears roll down my cheeks again….
my hands are on your hips now…gently holding you….I kiss my way down your tummy…and you react to every kiss….I love you…i continue to move down you..and my nipple brushes against your warm and inviting wetness – your very core – we moan together and you gently place your hands on top of my head. you push me slowly – further down. I need to taste you…and I need to be inside you….
Oh God Baby…my tears flow easily now…tears of love…longing….adoration…all meant for the beautiful woman who is urging me to touch her with my mouth…to taste her….to make love to her – tenderly. I breathe my warm breath over you and your hips rise. I have to have you…now…as my tongue extends to taste you – I slide two fingers into you. you’re so wet baby…my god…so wet….as my fingers move in you…my mouth kisses you…licks you…sucks you gently. you’re hips move to a rhythm…it’s our song baby…our rhythm. I keep moving in you – on you…and now my tears mix with your wetness…and…it’s just you and me…it’s us…
as I feel you contracting around my fingers – I continue to move them slowly – slower – and slower. but I leave them inside you as my mouth takes as much of you in as possible. you press yourself into my mouth. Oh God Baby…this is love…this is pure…this is us.
I move up your body – my fingers still inside you. I kiss you … ‘do you taste yourself on my lips?’ My tears have not stopped and now they mix with yours…I look down at you…into you…and I whisper to you. ‘I am so very much in love with you….I love you….please tell me you feel loved…please….’
I roll over onto my back and pull you on top of me….
Baby…I love US……..
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(65 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
Lovely kiwi!
Beautiful Thanks so much
great narrative! I was questioning all the crying until the last paragraph or so, but it all came together. excuse the pun…nicely done!
If you’ve ever felt that kind of love, I’m happy for you. I can so relate to your story. Great job!
As a matter of fact – yes I have felt this and I do feel it – and this was written for the one who makes me feel this way….always…
HOT AND SWEET !
You and Skipton are gonna kill me with the residual finger thing.
Art imitates life in this case, and the imtimate details that you describe ring so true.
Thank you for contributing.
I am the lucky one!
Your inspiration is a lucky woman…and so are we for being allowed to share this beautiful vision of passion and devotion.
I’d be crying too if I was with Bette Porter. And pinching myself. And doing cartwheels…
When I first read this I forgot it was a Bette and Tina story……I fell right into the love of two women…..two random women. The simple beauty of being loved or in love and expressing those intimate moments. And I have since re-read this and seeing Bette and Tina it just made it hotter. You have such a way with expressing your emotions. This is simply divine. Welcome to fan-fiction nad I look forward to more of your writing.
love it! This was a great perspective story, I really liked the crying, all emotional and stuff. great job!