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As Sure As The Sun PT 3
As Sure As The Sun PT 3
CH 6
No more fear, no more fear I’m in love,
Losing sensation for you my love I fear,
Losing sensation for you my love I fear,
No more fear, no more fear I’m in love…..
Carmen is sleeping lightly….I tired her out. I pull the thin hospital sheet over us. I trace circles on her back and whisper things to her, thoughts, fears, and wishes. This woman is my life. She is all I know. The fear of losing her a third time…..I didn’t want to think about it. I hear the door click open and I figured Jimmie was on his way. I wait and I wait but no one comes in. I kiss her lightly on her shoulder….her neck. She stirs ever so slightly. She meets my mouth with hers.
“I should go get dressed…take a shower…Jimmie probably wants to talk some more…”
“Yes…I should be getting out of this room soon….”
“Carmen are you ok? You know with what we did?”
“Yes…..it’s the first time I felt alive in a while…..”
“Weird….we had a conversation almost exactly like this a long time ago….”
“Wow…”
“Look Carmen I’ll be back when I can…I love you. so much….’ I kiss her goodbye…and if she didn’t want me to not leave before we made love…it was worse for her now.
I walk out of her room and the handler from last night is still there. He has no reaction to me at all. If he heard us, he isn’t saying. We walk in silence back to my room and I shower. I stay in the water for a while just staring at the tiles. Carmen is so afraid of not being herself….not knowing herself….and I was afraid too….all the things that were her are gone….except for the way we respond to each other…I see her point…I don’t care….she is still Carmen….and I know she loves me. I can feel it in her. if she doesn’t remember all the fucked up shit that happened to us…then so be it.
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(20 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
I love both this story and “la mer”…you really are a good writer.post soon.bye
Shane and Carmen said it best: That was…intense. Excellent as usual!
They’re awesome together, even though ‘new’ Carmen is a ticking time bomb. Love their interactions. Great update.
It must be frustrating for Carmen to only remember bits and pieces, at least she has the most intense memories. Can’t wait to see what else you have in store for these two!
frickin AWSOME!!!!!!…. very intense