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    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 22: THE CULPRIT

    Story written on March 30, 2021 by proteonomics.
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    Henry can’t allow that; first of all, he has to rid of Peggy, then it will be Bette and finally, Melvin; and her partner, William, would reinstate him in the Bronx branch and perhaps he’d be rewarded with a position in the main building; all he has to do is shoot that rifle.   Lincoln

    Henry can’t allow that; first of all, he has to rid of Peggy, then it will be Bette and finally, Melvin; and her partner, William, would reinstate him in the Bronx branch and perhaps he’d be rewarded with a position in the main building; all he has to do is shoot that rifle.

     

    Lincoln Square, West Side – Friday – noon – the parking garage.

     

    According to Bette’s instructions James has kept Peggy’s chauffeur busy; only when he received the phone call that Peggy was gone, James told the man that he could go; however, Joyce Wischnia accompanied by Sharon arrived at the H.R. office looking for any transportation, to go to the Lower Manhattan branch, to which James suggested to use Peggy’s limousine.

    Arriving at the building garage there was a dispute and finally, the luxurious car left the building, but after a few feet it stopped; a burst of bullets immobilized the traffic, the police sirens were heard in the distance and a layer of broken glass on the floor at the side of the limousine spoke of the tragedy that had just happened.

     

    Long Beach, Nassau county – New York – Bette’s beach house Friday noon.

     

    When they arrived at Bette’s house, Peggy was astonished to find Bette waiting for her.

    Bette: “hello, Peggy”

    Peggy: (looking at Helena) “I thought we were going to have lunch”

    Bette: “and we’ll have lunch, please come to the dining room”

    The dining room was nicely decorated, plates, drinks, and wine were on a big table and the food was already in carts, warm and ready to be served.

    Tina and Shane moved the carts from one person to the other. They talked about the espionage on Melvin and his accomplices, Peggy mentioned that Henry was on the run.

    During lunch, Peggy asked Bette why she was taken for dinner there.

    Bette: “we have many questions for you, but the main thing is that we want to know why you’re occulting things from us”

    Peggy: “what are you talking about?”

    Bette: “okay, let’s talk about Miranda Kennard, we know that she was powerful and rich and she was Tina’s surrogate mother”

    Peggy was astonished, how they could know that.

    Peggy: (conceding) “okay, what else you know”

    Bette: “Miranda was in love with Mabel, but Faye Buckley had a crush on her; when Buckley saw the object of her affection pregnant with Tina and being rejected by her, she took revenge by helping my father to steal the money of the nonprofit organization you had in South America, Buckley, and my father flew here and he became a member of the board of the company”

    Peggy’s eyes were dark and sad, with a huge weight of guilt on her shoulders; these girls know everything, she can’t deny the truth anymore. At that moment the ringtone in Alice’s phone made her leave the dining room to answer.

    Peggy: “okay, you did your job very well”

    Before Peggy could finish Alice came from the kitchen almost crying.

    Alice: “oh my God, a tragedy has happened in the company…”

     

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      • Hola Escorpion:

        Que bien que te gusto el capitulo.

        Voy a subir el otro esta semana que viene.

        Gracias por seguir esta historia, espero que te guste la siguiente que voy a subir tan pronto esta historia se termine.

        Cuidate.

        P

    2. So are Sharon and Joyce Wishnia dead? Attacked by whom? Melvin’s thugs? With the intent of getting Peggy?

      Looks like things are being revealed to almost everyone…. Melvin is close to guessing that Tina is alive. Peggy says the girls know everything, but do they really? Something tell me Peggy still has a lot more to reveal. Where’s Miranda? How did Melvin get on the board of B.I.T.C.H. Why is Melvin still looking to make more money?

      And it looks like Henry and William Halsey are now co-conspirators against Melvin.

      Bette needs to mature a little more….. jealousy is not a very good trait to have. It shows a huge lack of trust for Tina. How can she believe that Tina would flirt with anyone in a public place and knowing her friends would be watching and would report to Bette in an blink of an eye? She wouldn’t…. that’s just not who she is. She would not flirt in private much less public. To be protective is one thing, but to be jealous is a whole different emotion and can be detrimental to their future relationship.

      This is a great chapter….. the revelations of what is going on is intriguing…. hope to see more soon….

      Thank you.

      • Hi Martha.

        Thanks for reading this chapter.

        About Sharon and Joyce, let’s not jump to conclusions, maybe they aren’t dead, maybe they are just injured or who knows.

        It wasn’t Melvin neither any of his thugs; you should go back to page 21 in “Someplace near Central Park” where you could read that a dangerous man, a fugitive, is looking for revenge and on the next page related to the same man it says “all he has to do is shoot that rifle”

        Yes, Melvin needs to make more money before her ex-wife comes back to New York, Why? you’ll read it in the next chapter.

        You’re right, it looks like Henry and William are working together.

        Yes, Peggy is hiding more things; but Bette and Tina will find out about those (or most of those) things, through another person.

        Yes, Bette needs to mature a little more, but I couldn’t blame her for her jealousy after the ten years he thought Tina left her for a man. fortunately, Tina was able to soothe her.

        I would post the next week, hopefully, if nothing wrong happens to me,

        Thank you for your valuable comments.

        P

    3. Hi proteonomics,

      I am so happy you posted this chapter and without problems?!

      Beautiful picture of our ladies, could clearly picture one jealous Bette. I can understand her reaction, all though a little extreme. But Tina was able to calm her down.

      My god, i hope Joyce and Sharon survided the shooting, it was clearly a attemp on Peggy’s life. And if i am not mistaken, it was that bastard Henry who did it?

      What an incredible web of stories and events, there is so much going on in this story that it is at times difficult to remember or not to confuse.

      It’s a battle between the old bad guys and the young ladies who do everything they can to expose them, but also try to get the truth from Peggy, for example.

      A great story and I enjoy it!

      I hope you are doing ok, take care my friend ♥️

      • Hello, my friend.

        I’m glad you liked the picture, it isn’t bad.

        I share your concern and hopes about Sharon and Joyce, perhaps it wasn’t that bad, or perhaps other people were the victims.

        I agree with you, Bette’s reaction was understandable, not because of Tina, but because of all that she has gone through in the 10 years, she didn’t see Tina.

        Of course, it was Henry, it’s written in the last part of the chapter, and as we see his next targets would be Bette and Melvin.

        I’m sorry, the story has many twists and questions and it is my fault that I couldn’t post more frequently, unfortunately, so many things happened in my life the last year, I’ll try to post more regularly.

        Yes, there is a generational battle and I hope the girls could learn the truth soon.

        Thank you very much, Bibi, for following this story

        P

    4. Thanks for the update.
      This is quite a story and you really need your wit’s about you to keep up. So, here am I full concentration and how am I rewarded? A Cliffhanger !!!

      Seriously though thanks for this intriguing story, I look forward to getting away from hanging off the Cliff soon.

      • Hi SG.

        Thanks for reading the chapter.

        I am so sorry about the cliffhanger, I almost didn’t notice, it wasn’t about Bette and Tina, but it was a cliffhanger.

        For me, cliffhangers are a kind of marker in my stories, they make me stop at a certain point in the story; otherwise, I would keep writing and perhaps never posting.

        I plan to post next week, and hopefully more mysteries will be solved.

        Thanks for your comments and for following this story.

        P

      • Hi LeighS.

        I’m sorry for the cliffhangers, as I said most of the time is my way to determine when to stop the chapter.

        The main problem is that I’m not posting as frequently as I planned, sorry again.

        Hope the story will be interesting.

        P

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