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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 3: THE JOB
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Tina: “hmm… thank you.”
Kit: (handing a tablet to Alice) “this is her documentation.”
Alice started reading while drinking her coffee nodding at each page she was analyzing and after a few minutes, she smiled and nodded to Kit, who smiled back and nodded too.
Alice: “what were you doing in the navy, Tina?”
Tina: “helping with some project of survival underwater.”
Alice: “what kind of projects?”
Tina: (looking at Kit and a little uneasy) “well, those are classified projects, but they are related to survival underwater for hours without oxygen from a tank or a hose.”
Alice: “and what did you do at Northwestern University?”
Tina: “more designs and some teaching.”
Alice: “those were very good; but tell me why you wasted your time in Inventions and Patents INC, those are losers.”
Tina: “I wanted to explore the private sector.”
Alice: “you should have come to the bureau directly.”
Kit: “Alice, I just contacted her.”
Alice: “hmm, okay, she will stay with us, I think; she’ll be an excellent acquisition.”
Kit: “well, we finish here, then when are going to be the interviews?”
Alice took from her purse a tablet and filled a form, she pressed a button and from the top of it, a white printed page appeared, she handed it to Tina.
Alice: “may I have your cell phone?”
Tina: “you want my cell phone or my tablet?”
Alice: (smiling) “okay, give me your tablet.”
Alice proceeded to connect both using the USB ports and after a few seconds she gave back the tablet to Tina.
Alice: “I put in your tablet the instructions, address, and schedule which is also in the white paper.”
Kit: “well, Tina you are all set; Alice can you stay longer.”
Alice: “sure, Kit.”
Tina left Kit’s house, she walked toward the closest subway station to take the train to her apartment. At the same time, coming from her house, Bette was driving toward Kit’s home, she was thinking about what she was going to tell her sister when something or rather someone on the street caught her attention. Was she dreaming? No, she saw her, a blonde girl with a familiar way of walking; indeed the girl was walking fast, perhaps because of the cold weather. Bette stopped and got out of the car; the blonde was around 30 feet in front of her; the brunette tried to run after her, but they were close to the subway station, and the crowded street delayed her pace. The blonde entered the station and went down using the stairs, Bette did the same, but because of the multitude she couldn’t go faster; on the lower floor she couldn’t find the girl, she looked everywhere and couldn’t see her. Suddenly she saw her, using an electronic pass from her phone to enter the L- line stop. There was nothing she could do; Bette doesn’t use the subway, but her car, so she didn’t have a way to go to the subway stop; soon the blonde was gone. In her desperation, she wanted to jump over the machines but a security guard held her arm, Bette apologized and turning around left the station, toward her car. In the meanwhile in the subway L a troubled blonde was feeling queasy, she felt someone was following her, it could be a thief or worse…, who knows…, but she also felt that presence, that protective presence of ten years ago, when she tried to escape from the living dead and the vampire at the carnival party… ‘she’s dead, how could I feel like she’s close…, perhaps I’m gonna die, maybe it’ll be the best… oh, Alex, I miss you, baby’ an involuntarily tear fell on her cheek.
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OMG…..another cliffhanger. Will Bette arrive in time? Great chapter. More intrigue and complexity. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Do you have to wait a month to post next chapter?
Hi Martha:
I’m very glad that you liked this chapter, believe me, I’m not going to wait one month to post the next one, it will be just 2 weeks, I should post around October 11 (one or two days before or after).
I also hope the Tina and Bette will face each other soon, they almost met in the subway.
But as you have read, I’m building the scene of what will happen in the next chapters.
I hope to keep you guys entertained in the rest of the story.
Thanks again for your comments, those are always very important for us, the writers.
P
P.
Length of chapter is fine…..length to me is not a factor. Write the story as you see appropriate and do not worry about length of the chapters. A long chapter helps when you are waiting for the next installment.
Hi! Thanks for the chater!
But i must say – i first time see authore, who apologizing for the long (not the short) chapter:)
Hi Zhenya:
I know, barely you find a writer that wants to post a shorter chapter; but, what happens is that I made myself a vow, for this story, of posting chapters no longer of 20 pages, and so far I have failed, all my chapters are a bit longer.
But I will have to adapt.
Thank you for following this story, I hope not to disappoint.
Thanks again.
P
Hola me encantó este capítulo esperando el otro cada vez se pone mejor y no pidas disculpas porque más largo es mejor y pueden pasar muchas cosas gracias
Hola Escorpion:
Me alegra que te siga gustando la historia, a mi tambien me gustan los capitulos largos, ojala que tengas paciencia para esperar el encuentro the Tina y Bette y para gozar de su romance y sus aventuras.
Muchas gracias por leer y comentar.
P
Hi proteonomics,
Never apologize for the lenght of this chapter!!!!
It was a really intersting chapter, there is always a lot going on in your stories, and i am trying to find and absord all the clues. But i think i am over looking some of the clues or are not able to put them together. Damn my age 😁
I love the flashbacks both Tina and Bette have, they answer slowly little by little what happened ten years ago.
So much mysterie that you will slowly reveal to us. Look forward to that!
So they will finally meet again! They were so close at the subway!
I look forward to the next chapter!!!
Hi, my friend.
Thanks for your encouraging words.
Well here is also some clues, but perhaps some of them are evident and you already know what is coming.
Yes, the flashbacks are enlightening about what happened 10 years ago; it’s hard to understand how a meeting, friendship and falling in love of only one day, may change our lives; when sometimes you know people for a while and they barely influence our life.
And they were so close in the subway as you pointed, but sometimes, things take a little longer than we expect.
But don’t be disappointed, just one thing, next chapter you will see a picture for the first meeting (well I hope I’ll make a nice picture).
Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.
P
Hey P. I dont mind of the long stories. In fact i luv em.
“and when Louise and Mabel find out about her, please don’t force the encounters, let them find each other slowly” Are Tina n Louise related? And the fact that Tina n Louise have the same looks. So i assume that they r related.
Hi AReader:
Great, very smart, you found a very important clue; I thought nobody noticed.
Yes, they are related but why Louise didn’t recognize Tina in the clinic? (chapter 1 and 2) and why Kit has to keep Tina hidden? (and Why M is asking her that?) and Bette tried to be with Louise because she resembles Randy (for God sake, Louise was smart enough to avoid that catastrophe)
Of course, there is an answer, you may discover that by my clues or perhaps in a few chapters.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
P
I guess I have to re-read those chapters back to find all those missing pieces, :P
Well in chapter 1 Louise saw Tina in the clinic and she had a weird feeling and in chapter 2 she talked to Bette about that. But just read and you’ll soon find out what’s going on
P
proteonomics:
It’s a very attempted chapter, also very good! The interaction between Alex and Randy was pure love, they seemed so at ease with each other, you do have a great choice of words, please don’t hesitate to write more pages for them.
As for Bette and Tina in the present, I really do hope that these two people meet soon, it was clear that they are still loving each other but they didn’t know the other are still alive. These must be lots of readers waiting to see them meet in this chapter but well, another cliffhanger and another chapter to wait.
But I’ll be patient, for me, I think the pace is slow but very focus and full of details, by the talk between Bette and her friends and sisters, we could know how the person she turns into. And how she tries to prove herself. As for Tina, she’s a worrier, she really do fight a lots by herself. I just hope that when they meet, they would not be so shock about the news.
Will Bette be on time? Hmm…I hope so, but for the chapter and the picture to look like, I don’t think she’ll make it, you always give out surprises and it’s make the story so good and so different than others.
Please post soon and long chapter is always the best! Thanks for the great story!
CJ
Hi CJ:
Yes, cliffhangers are my skill (????????????).
We’ll see more of Randy and Alex in the next chapters, but at a certain point, I have to focus more on the new drama, anyway, the romance will continue in current days.
Yes, you’re right in your second paragraph, but, I’ll make them meet in the next chapter (whatever it takes).
You descrived Bette and Tina in this story very well, Bette the negotiator (mediation committee) and Tina as you already found, is like a warrior.
Yes, indeed it will be many surprises in the next chapter (stay tune ????????????).
Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.
P