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BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR… part 2
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Bette: oh FUCK… this blows… ok baby… don’t you move… I’ll be back…
Grabbing a robe and answering the door…
Bette: Alice if that’s you… I’m going to kick you mother fucking ass all over this fucking street… opening the door… Tina was standing there with a sleeping Angelica in her arms…
Tina: Bette… if it was just me… I would never ask you this… but this baby… our baby deserves a warm bed to sleep in… not my car…
Bette: you’re right Tina… if you didn’t have the baby… I would have slammed the door in your fucking face… as she moves over so she could come in…
Tina: I also know I don’t deserve this… but please no questions till the morning… I’m so tired…
Just then Joanie walked out of the bedroom… naked… in all of her glory…
Joanie: Bette… I’m waiting… I never had so many orgasms in one night…
Tina: I’m sorry Bette… we will wait on the deck… I’m sorry… I guess I should have known…
Bette: no go and put Angel in her crib…
Tina: but you’re in your bedroom…
Bette: Janie… go back to the bed… and I’ll be in when I get there…
Joanie: its Joanie…
Bette: whatever… just go back…
She returns to the bedroom
Bette: Tina I never let anyone in my bed the first time I fuck them… because it never leads to a second time… my bed is my bed… go and put the baby down…
Tina walks to Bette’s room… thinking to herself… the first time Bette made love to her was in her bed… not the guest room… she puts Angelica down and as if the child knows… she was home… she smiled and snuggled up and fell back to sleep…
Bette: Joanie… I’m sorry but we’re done … my daughter is home… and when my daughter is home… well she is my first priory… so please get dressed…
Joanie: but what about my REP. no one is ever going to want to go out with me… if they find out you sent me home
Bette: no one will ever know… and tomorrow you will be on top… literary…
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Hey Girl! glad you are starting to feel better we missed you…BUT come on please don’t make our Bette a slut…. Post soon.
I liked this chapter. Yesterday, you were really pissed at Tina and Henry. Unfortunately, the Henry on the show is not quite as big an asshole as the one in your story.
Great chapter. I like that things are so different. Can’t wait for your post tomorrow!
Tina needs to suirm a little and demonstrate she truly deserves “The Bette”!
HEY! sooo glad to see you back and doing well! Been worrying about u! hehe i thought u’d have been appauled by that in sundays episode… hope u continue wi this story :) makes for great reading when i just got home from uni (its 00:35 :( ) sucky!:( glad ur doin well.. :)
Well, if I were Bette, I’d wonder the reason Tina came back. It’s because she and Angie had nowhere to go? It’s because the guy is a jerk? I can’t see Tina’s coming back is out of love. She still needs to figure it out and comes back to Bette due to her love to Bette other than anything else.
OOOOHHHH another great chapter. OK, please don’t let Bette take her little tarts home with Angelica there. Remember you said B&T would have a little loving, I am waiting “Pogo tapping her foot patiently”
Amanda, don’t wear yourself out-as long as you get our girls back together, we’ll wait for you to get healthy…
I completely understand the anger but I hope you don’t let bette be too much of a whore…and please let them have the fight and move on to the love. hope you are feeling well today!
I am likin this fic……I am glad that you are doin better….i had no idea of what was goin on……please……take care of yourself…..we cant live without your fics……
Bette: Janie… go back to the bed… and I’ll be in when I get there… Joanie: its Joanie… Bette: whatever… just go back…LMAO That was too funny. I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter!
Well better for you and for Bette she has Angelica back. As Mother we know how she feels. Tina came back because she had nowhere else to go. Let her cool her ass in the quest room for a lomg time. I can see Bette letting her stay but can”t see her letting her crawl in her bed anytime soon/ Hell, let Bette have her fun for awhile/ Love L Holloman blame IC for Tina. thanks
Be careful what you wish for???? We were all wishing AmandaMG would come back….and now, finally, here she is…thank goodness!!!!
oh am eternally grateful that you are still writing even though you’re hurting..thank you very much. pls don’t make Bette revert to her old ways, that is not ‘living’.
Glad you are back and in fine form. Can you go ahead and get B & T back together now?
Amanda,Great to see you bad with this mixed up tale. Although it is pleasing to see Tina get her comeuppance, I am not sure that Bette should be leading her life as a singleton. Take just seems like she is paying Tina back in the most primal way. Great story though I wanting see some loving between Bette and Tina. Not Bette and some random gal or worse Tina and Henry… Thank you for this vent. Your Loyal Fan.
Amanda,Great to see you bad with this mixed up tale. Although it is pleasing to see Tina get her comeuppance, I am not sure that Bette should be leading her life as a singleton. Take just seems like she is paying Tina back in the most primal way. Great story though I wanting see some loving between Bette and Tina. Not Bette and some random gal or worse Tina and Henry… Thank you for this vent. Your Loyal Fan.
Hey Amanda! Reading and writing on the run for awhile-I just went back to school. Surprise! Gee, what’s Henry going to do with out Tina to do his laundry, just when he needs it most?
Loved it! The Bette, Pete, putting Tina in her place, everything! Great Amanda, really, can’t wait for more. ANd you know what? I think you’re absolutely right Tina doesn’t know how to handle a non-controling Bette. She only understands Alpha Bette and that what she craves….
that what tina dumb ass gets!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bette maker her earn your trust back i need 40 pages next post!!!!!!!!!! lol
Welcome back – I’m glad you’re feeling better. I will still send my thoughts your way :o))
i really liked this chapter and i hope bette will help tina though this post soon
Well it’s good to see the real Bette is back! Just hope everything works out for them! Well hope you can get another chapter soon, take care girl!
It seems like TiBette is down the drain… for good? Even fan fiction is like a Chaiken-land for chaos, anger, destruction and unhappiness. Sigh… I remember those happy days not so long ago…
Hey Amanda, happy that you are feeling better. One day at a time. Keep the laughter up it releases the good endorphins that helps you fight the bug and keeps you healthy. It really does work. The story is great. Keep it up as you can. Don’t tire yourself out. We can wait for you. Thanks for the posts.
I think I like this story, you are putting emotions and words to the out of character actions, of the characters. You said, what I have been thinking, that the Social Worker planted a seed in Tina’s head about the need for a man in Angelica’s life. Continue to heal
So glad that you are back. Take care of yourself. Hope you are feeling a bit better with the incision. So “The Bette”…Alpha-Bette’s return to the world of the living. I guess Tina can squirm for a while;at least, it gives her time to think what she really wants – men or Bette. I’m hoping the later, since a TiBetter. ;-) Thanks for the update and please get plenty of rest. Missed you a LOT…
i love your story but i have to agree with kabby.. please don’t make bette a slut.. she deserves more than that..
Damn this is so good and awesome. Bette is so cool and kind to let Tina stay with her and she have Angelica back to her and she have her Pete taking care henry and hope he gone forever. OK now let see whats next, thanks!
I can’t believe where B&T are ending up:( I hope they will eventually find their way back together… here and on shotime.
Welcome back, I can tell by your tyrate that you are feeling better. i read the first chapter and thought that the part with Henry was a bit “over kill”. I think that Tina could’ve realized her moisstake without him being such an ass (so much for her judgement of people). THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, for tha comment about Helena geting what she deserves ie payback. This HAS to be stated in the Series. I an totally not with everyone being friendly with Helena after how she treated Bette in S2. Iam on this journey with you to get the girls back toghther :o)
Welcome back Amanda. Like this story, need more.