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Because of Angelica..chpt. 9
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Previously
“why are you being so cold?”, Tina asked.
“me cold?”, Bette chuckled. “I’m hot actually…and horny, but I’m not cold”, Bette chuckled.
“your fucking insane”, Tina replied.
“no your insane. I wish you could see that stupid look you have on your face. That’s the look I had when you had me snap a fucking family photo of you and your happy family”, Bette said.
“but Mikey asked”, Tina replied.
“but you could of said no. I see when the shoe’s on the other foot it doesn’t feel go does it?”, Bette asked.
“no, about last night-”, Bette cuts Tina off.
“save it. You said enough last night”. pause. “Well I don’t see you laughing and smiling now. This is what it feels like to have everything taken from you”. Bette walks inside and grabs Tina’s things. She hands them to her.
“but what about my shower?”, Tina asked.
“go home and shower with your lover of four years. You got what you want and I got what I want”, Bette replied.
“but this isn’t what I want”, Tina said.
“well that’s too bad, because this is what I want. Goodbye Tina”, Bette closed the door in her face
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(Bette’s in the kitchen talking to Michelle)
“so do you think it worked?”, Michelle asked.
“for now atleast”, Bette wiped the string of salt tears from her sad face. She hated to throw Tina out like that, but enough was enough. She couldn’t take anymore of Tina’s games. She had been the fool long enough, and she felt as though it was time to stop crying and do something different for a change-she needed to take care of Bette Porter.
“are you okay?”, Michelle asked. She too began to cry. She was one emotional person.
“yeah. I’m fine. Thanks for asking”, Bette replied.
“sure no problem. So what the hell happened?”, Michelle asked. She was curious as to what broke the couple up. She never imagined something so lethal like this.
“I don’t wanna talk about. It’s one sad saxed story”, Bette replied. She walked over to the fridge and retrieved two bottled waters. She hands one to Michelle.
“thanks”, Michelle said.
“your welcome”, Bette replied.
“so, where’s Angie? I’ve been dying to meet her”, Michelle asked.
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Yes! Go Tina, good choice
Tina made the right choice in leaving with Bette; however dont’ let Bette just take Tina back and everything be ok. If I remember correctly Bette was Tina’s second choice. Please post soon, I love this story.
bette should let her stew for a while… like ask so where do you want me to drop you off… and then ask her WTF… how come she didn’t pick up the baby or at least call her so bette would have been there… and i can’t believe the teachers left a 4 year old kid all by her self… love your story… so rest and please continue
wooohooooo………yup…..this is goooooooddddd……
I hope Bette doesn’t take Tina ack right away.Just let her give her shelter and sort out her life. I’ll wait for your next one.
Excellant chapter. I’m with draemi. I think you should make Tina suffer. I don’t think that she should get Bette’s respect because Bette helped her find out the truth with Henry. Tina should have known. A man’s only going to allow wha yo let him, and I think personally Tina had it coming. It was a matter of time. What goes around comes right back around. You would think that she would know that by now. Say with me “CRASH DUMMY”. I so love this story. Please continue and soon.
Great chapter, yes Tina should hve known that she was cheating because most men who are use to having sex will get it else where once you cut them off. Yes Bette should make Tina crawl (like make her stay in the guest room), but firtst things first. They both should go down to that daycare center the next morning and curse them out from to teacher to the director. I agree with Amamda, theris NO excuse for leaving any child no matter what the ago alone after you close up your facility. Please continue :o)
I with Amanada you dont leave a four year old by themself. Let Tina know you are not just going to take her back,and let her walk all over her again. thanks
About time Tina! Too bad this is what it took.
great development…and i agree, bette should make tina suffer a little…play around with her but at least she can stay in the house together
yay! Now move to NY?
Way to go Tina, Now you have to really win Bette back. Baby A just might get both of her moms back. They still need a lot of work but love can win out.
Isn’t Baby A hungry for dinner? I don’t think the girl has had a thing to eat since the late afternoon peanutbutter and cracker snack at the daycare. …I think Baby A is the baby on The Family Guy. Thanks!
BG ur a freakin god!! its a damn shame fuckin henry!! actually scratch that its bout fuckin time!!
i think bette and tina still have lots to sort out. but woohooo..henry is outta the way!
WOW!!! This story is getting so good. Bette and Tina need to sit down and talk. Please Post Soon
btw is Tina bi-polar?..is she on drugz?..she seriousli is in need of sum therapy or medication..Thnx4writing!!!
yay!
Good story. Keep going please. I know you won’t let Bette take Tina back so easily and as smart as you have made Angie, she won’t let Bette take Tina back so easily either. I hope Henry does turn out to be a cheater or something horrible on S4, causing Tina to mourn her lost relationship with Bette and fighting for Bette. Can’t wait for more of your story though.
hehehe..that was funny..Post soon!
Ok what a twist! Hope Henry’s out of the picture for good! Post soon please!
Even though Im happy, tina left with Bette, DO NOT! let bette take her back so easily, make her suffer.
MUST HAVE MORE!!
Oh, oh, I just rememberedenry told Tina that he was going to ask her to marry him at her surprise party. The same party that he invited Bette to. So he had intended to trough it in Bette’s face —- UGLY and scandalous, I say. SCANDALOUS, you jerk.
YES……… but after t Tina told Bette about the ass wipe, what kind of future do they have???
finally Tina left Henry but she need to learn that Bette is worth! continue post
I have to agree with what some others have said. Who the hell leaves a little kid alone at school? What happened to calling the parents to make sure all the kids were picked up at the end of the day? Tina was smart to get her stuff and leave right then, but Bette and Tina definitely don’t need to be back together just yet. They have lots of ground to cover.
This is good and yeah go Bette and Tina. They will talk more and work thing out soon. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Well, now I have a lot of questions, actually too many for this space. One being, why in the heck did someone leave a 4 yr old alone to fend for herself? Anything could have happened. Lawsuit time and license denied for the daycare. Thanks for the post and post again soon please.