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Bed of Lies – Chapter 4
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I know that it’s weak
But God help me I need this
Chapter 4
Friday night.
She stumbled in the door to her apartment, failing in her attempts to be quiet. She reached the bedroom and began to strip, slipping under the sheets naked, not bothering with PJ’s, instantly being reminded of the dull ache in between her legs. She rolled over towards her sleeping boyfriend, pleased to find him hard. She was dripping wet; foreplay was an unnecessary and time wasting venture. She pulled his boxers down and climbed on top, surprising herself with how easily she slid onto him. She glanced down at his face as he moaned in his sleep and then squeezed her eyes shut.
His was not the face she wanted to be looking at.
Eric woke almost immediately as she started to ride him, he tried to lift himself up to kiss her, but she put her hands on his shoulders and pushed him back down onto the bed, leaning forward to pin his upper body down as her hips continued to buck.
His were not the lips she wanted to kiss.
His arms reached up and she felt the slightly rough skin of his hands grasp her ass, guiding her movements firmly on top of him; but she grabbed his hands and leaned further forward as she pinned them above his head, grinding herself down onto him, increasing the pressure against her clit.
His were not the hands she wanted on her body.
She rode him wild and hard, longing to find release, she could feel they were both close.
“Aw… fuck Tina…” Eric groaned. She slipped her fingers into his mouth, allowing him to suck them in an effort to keep him quiet.
His was not the voice she wanted to hear.
She felt it building, a warmth and a tightness starting to spread through her body. From her mouth an involuntary, breathless whisper.
“Bette…”
Eric had not heard. He too was on the brink and not concentrating on her incoherent sounds. She did not want to risk doing it again though, she knew she should be calling his name, she bit her lip.
His was not the name she wanted to scream.
She came in a tidal wave, feeling the pleasure in every cell in her body; hearing herself moan and feeling her body go limp from exhaustion. But she did not feel release. She lifted herself off Eric as his orgasm erupted, throwing him a towel to clean himself up as she mumbled something about a shower, knowing he would be asleep by the time she came back.
She stood under the cascading water, leaning her forehead against the wall. She felt the ache pulse in her core. Pictures, sounds and sensations floated through her mind like a movie.
The mocha face she had memorised, the full, sensuous lips she was longing to kiss, the soft, slender fingers she wanted stroking her body, the low, husky voice she longed to hear whispering in her ear, the name she wanted to scream when she came: Bette.
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WOW!!!
WOW, indeed. PPS. So powerful and realistic.
Great Update!
Wow…. Amazing.
Hateyou/it, how could that be unless you mean for not writing a longer chapter, and I certinly hope you don’t feel badly about yourself, folks just gotta do what they gotta do. Thank you, Md
Time for Tina to face some home truths. Can’t wait to see where things go after this.
I just discovered your story this morning (well… Europe’s morning ! ^_^) and immediately add you to my to-follow-authors ! Excellent, really, I mean it. And don’t be afraid about this particular chapter : it was very powerful, highly realistic and truly essential to fully understand Tina’s growning realization about the life-altering effects our irresitible Bette made on her. Oh, by the way, I’m also a huge admirer of JB : for me, the epithome of true beauty, inside and outside, with such amazing charm, class and intelligence. What a lady… *** Thank you for this story ! I’m hooked ! ^_^
you were sooo wrong… i loved this chapter… besides it being well written it was… well it was a great chapter…
Wow, you capture the moment and how Tina is feelings. PPS
That was incredibly well done…so realistic. I think a lot of us have done something very similar. Wow! Great story by the way..I am hooked! Thanks!
For all of us that have been there, struggling to come out…the chapter was written perfectly. It has been about 10 years but I was there thinking and doing the same things. Thank you.
Wow!!!..Nothing to be mad fo, the chapter was so realistic, as many have experienced the same feelings. It showed what a tremendous effect Bette has on Tina and what feelings she awakened in Tina. Now the questions begin and moves toward a life altering realization and decisions to be made. Next what I would like to read is what effect did Tina have on Bette, as if we don’t know but, I would like to see her feelings and description of the resulting evening. Please, pretty please. Great chapter. PPS
Great chapter – all too true – we run from our feelings and use others until we are ready to be truthful to ourselves and others too.
Brilliantly written, tibetteporter. PS.
TP that was indeed magnificent writing! It didn’t make me mad, I thought it was very telling and particularly important in understanding what Tina was feeling toward Bette. Great stuff!