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Bette and the Business Woman [Part 2]
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Harmony: “Yeah but she makes domestic sooo sexy. So after I realize who she is and she realizes who I am, we get to talking. Then. I invite her to the Brady bash.”
Roxanne: “Isn’t she like married with a kid now. That’s what I heard anyway. You just said yourself she’s domestic.”
Harmony: “Nowell she does have a kids but she said her relationship situation was ‘complicated’. She still accepted though.”
Roxanne: “Whoa you got off the market Bette ‘hot stuff’ Porter to go out with you?”
Harmony: “Don’t sound so surprised.”
Roxanne: “Sorry it’s just this is big.”
Harmony: “I know.”
Roxanne: “Complicated sounds just that though.”
Harmony: “I know. This could get a little sticky. But she’s so beautiful. I’m not looking to further complicate things for her. What she wants tot do is totally up to her. I’m just trying to spend time with her and maybe put a little smile on her face.”
Roxanna: “that’s all you want?”
Harmony: “Well I can think of a few other things. But I’m leaving this up to her. No pressure. It’ll just feel good to have her on my arm at the party. Jackie’s gonna shit when she sees me with her.”
Roxanne: “Jackie is a shit”
Just then Harmony’s intercom rings.
Stacy: “Red alert.”
That meant Jackie was coming.
Harmony: “Speak of the devil.”
Roxanna: “I’m gone.”
She got up.
Roxanne: “Congratulations sweetie. I’m happy for you.”
Harmony: “Thanks. Now get out of here before she sees you.”
Roxanne: “Bye”
She exits and Jackie comes in soon after.
Jackie: “Scott:
Harmony: “Jackie, hi.”
Jackie: “Long lunch?”
Harmony: “Working lunch actually.”
Jackie: “Mmm hhm. Well I take it Stacy gave you the revised Brady file.”
Harmony sighed.
Harmony: “Yes I have it right here. And let me just say that what he is requesting is ridiculous on such short notice.”
Jackie: “Well the clients always right. I really need you to get on this. If you’d like I can assign you a few more Jr. Reps to help you out.”
Harmony: “No. That’s not necessary. There’s nothing to worry about.”
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I hope you are bringing Bette and Tina to a close. I’m so over Tina. Lets see Bette back in the dating world.Love the story thus far. Keep writing and Ill keep reading.
just read both chapters….I am hooked.Tina, Tina…..what do you think now?
Hey Vibes can we convince you to write a few stories in which Bette dates every colour in the rainbow. You already gave us MK(African American) now we have HS(Native American) next I hope you give us( Chinese American or I don’t know what’s exotic maybe (Brazillian American). Just so you know j’adore your writing and mad skills at getting Bette to hook up with some fine women while she gets over the hell that is Tina.
YOU GO BETTE!!!!! SO R WE GONNA GET ANOTHER POST TODAY??????
OH and is Tina gonna be waiting up for Bette to start a bitchfest…..that ought to be good….jealousy, signs of deeper feelings.
Who dat…my baby mommma…oh that was good! Hmmm, Harmony is treating Bette as Bette used to treat Tina. Bette Tina never thought about treating Bette like that, huh?
OMG. you have to post again and soon. Please. I need to know how Tina reacts. I can’t wait to the next one. It like its gets better and better each time.
WOW that was great…loving this already…so dont keep us waiting too long for more..i actualy felt alittle sorry for Tina its one thing to move on its another to see you ex doing it….. i konw i know she kinda deserves it….. Hey maybe she”ll see some sense after seeing “The Hot One” looking so sexy in that dress…either way thanks for the update!!!
They say people fall in love with utterly opposite people, but stay with alike. Bette and HS are similar in a lot of ways. So hope they could bring each other real happiness. But of course by now, HS is more like thrilled by the idea of dating the ‘famous’ Bette Potter instead of knowing her and loving her. But we’ll see. On the other hand, I still hold a faint hope in Tina.
This is what i have been waiting for Bette going forward and not backward, and Tina seeing two beautiful ladies going out, and one was at one time her woman. Hope she is looking out the window at them. Like the way Bette said this is angelic Mother Tina thanks
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. Never thought I would want to see Tina get her comeuppance. But damn that was over the top. Bette looking like a million dollars and with a beautiful woman to boot. Yea, go Bette, with your bad self. Bette needs this and Tina does too. Now she sees how it feels. Happy for Bette. Although I still want to see them work things out. Gret story. Thanks for the post.
Great update. Loved Tina being there for the pick-up.
Fan’bloody’tastic!!! absolutely loved, u hav such a great way with words! especially loved the part where bette gav the flowers to tina to put in water, priceless!! u go bette!
It’s terrific seeing something good happen to Bette for a change. I hope Tina was standing there with her mouth hanging open! Thanks!
Awww how sweet is that!? It’s good to see Bette smiling. I’m liking this story. Please, post more of it soon. You are doing very well. It seems that Bette might like to be with another alppha female. Hmmmmmmm. And I just gotta love the images running through my head of mocha on mocha. Mmmmmmm. Nice. Move over Tina, there’s a new light in Bette’s life. Hahahaha. I can just see Tina’s mouth hit the floor when Bette told her to put those flowers in water. ROTFL!
Love it! “oh Tina Could you out these water for me” LOL..Go Bette! Time to move on , even if this is a fling with Harmony so be it, time for Bette to have some fun! Can’t wait to hear Tina’s reaction!
I am so loving this!!! Tina is getting some of her own back. GO Bette GO and don’t look back!!!! PLEASE POST SOON
You gotta get the next chapter ups ASAP, gotta hear Tina’s reaction. Now she has a visual of Bette moving on, is she sure this is what she wants?
next please.what will be Tina reaction??????she needs to wake up very soon before losing Bette.great chapter
What a fun story to read…like the new characters and especially how bette is dealing with the whole pick me up at the door deal…and take that TINA!!!!! more soon pls!!!!
LOL I had to laugh when Bette handed Tina flowers given to her by another woman, and asked her to put them in water!! What a great in your face move!! Looking forward to the party, and to Tina’s reaction as she looks down at the flowers that are now in her hands!! Thanks!
You GO Bette! Squirm Tina!
I am loving this story. 5 stars from me!
Oh this is nice for Bette and you go Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!