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Bette and Tina… A Fairy Tale Ending To A Beginning…ch.30
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Jess: yeah mom… Im sorry for this weekend to almost come to an end… one more day… and what only 1:00 to 5:00
Tina: I know baby… but you’ll paint more and more… and will be sort out by Galleries all over the world
Jess: Well lets hope so
Cindy: She’s right Jess… your a star now in the Art world
Bette: Ok ready everyone…
Walking out to their cars…
Tina: Jess see you in the morning… Im going over to Bettes
Jess: Ok mom… goodnight
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Back at Helenas Hotel room
Sue: Wow its getting to hot in here
Helena: here let me help you out
Sue takes her hand in hers and both get out… Sue is just looking into Helenas eyes and just leans in to kiss her
Sue: Im sorry, but I just had to kiss you… your lips just
Helena: No problem anytime you need to do that
Sue: Would you kiss me again?
Helena pulls Sue into her arms and kisses her sliding her tongue over her bottom lip Sue opens her mouth for her… moaning into the kiss as arms encircled each other the kiss deepens finally Helena pulls back and just looks into Sues eyes
Helena: Tell me what you want
Sue: I dont know what I want I have never done anything like this before and right now
Helena: What tell me right now what?
Sue: All I can think about is the ***** I put my own daughter through and here I am standing naked with a woman with our arms around each other and I just kissed her
Helena: AND
Sue: And I liked it and I want to know what it feels like to
Helena: TO WHAT
Sue: Your not making this easy on me are you
Helena: No Im not AND
Sue: I want to know what it feels like having a woman make love to me I cant believe I said it out laud
Helena: Leaning in to kiss her again and walking her backwards to the bed but before laying her down You sure you want this?
Sue: Very much But I dont know if I could make love to you.
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Keno, we will go wherever you take us. We all love your story.
Wow your have a pool can I borrow it. I´m felling a little hot here… please continue..
Keno baby wow…and Helena could be meam but she is Hot as hell..lol..and about Sue you dont know what youre missing..lol..i hope Helena dont play with her she seem to be a good woman amazing chapter Keno post soon please
I like that fact that Helena is nice….it’s a shame everybody makes her evil, well done Keno
I want more of those two. It was really good actaully, I like nice Helena. But I also want more Bette and Tina!
most girls are straight til they’re not
okay…..i dont like helena…..but i think i may just give her a chance to have a heart in this fic….this was hot….hot……hot…..and helena being so loving……is very beautiful……i never thought i would say that….but you have given her a chance…..post again soon keno…… ~~wink wink~~……..
Hey Keno WHOA! that was so HOT again LOL! I’m still love it LOL! Okay I can’t wait again MORE Please and Thank you.
Wow Keno that was hot. I like this Helena also. You are a great story teller. Keep up the good work.
I agree with christy, we will follow you wherever you take us. Please post soon.
Good chapter. I agree with MOMO and please post soon, thanks!
I’m glad you gave Helena a heart. She’s too pretty to be a bitch. :oP
If you write it… they will come. Did I really say such a cornball thing?
Keno I will follow you anywhere…even to Hellsville, but please get back to Bette and Tina soon! Love your story!
Keno, I have to admit. . .I really hate helena, as I know you do. Bring on B&T!
Woo-hoo!! Keno, that was “really nice!” ;) I’m in total agreement with you on the whole Hell-y thing…and you’re right, your take on her (having a heart) is much better! I just wish her character would become more likeable on TLW otherwise I don’t see the point of keeping the biotch around too long…ugh! Anywho…I love your writing, it’s always a great read! Thanks!
AAAAAAAAAA! god now i will never sleep! really hot plus cliffhanger. amazing, it frustrates me but i love it, and i’m dying to read the next chapter. plz let the writer gods let all things work out for jess and cindy. i love them!
Whooooo. KENO baby. You are something else. When you bring it you really bring it. Sue just got turned out. And she loved every minute of it. I like that you portray Helena as being so giving and likable. And for the record, I must say that she really is evil…at least on the show. Thanks for taking the time to put out another great one. Please post soon. =)
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Great chapter, it’s nice seeing Helena being nice. Love it as always.
I actually enjoyed this one, even though I don’t like Hellena. I hope this means that Cindy’s mom will now begin to accept her. Anyway, dying to hear about my girls B & T.