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BETTE AND TINA… THE REST OF THEIR LIFE… MARRIED…ch.239
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Walking into “The Planet”…
Alice: Hey where is the car…
Tina: Home in the garage… Lisa is driving… in case you haven’t noticed the price of gas these days… we drive together when ever we can…
Alice: So what are you going to do with your old car…
Tina: We are giving it to Lisa… Why…
Alice: Well I was going to offer to take it off your hands… I need a new car…
Tina: Alice why don’t you just bite the bullet and go out and buy yourself a new car…
Alice: In case you haven’t noticed I don’t have a “Bette” at home with me…
Bette: Excuse me Alice… but Tina is a very successful business woman in her own right… Either one of us has to ask permission of the other if we want to buy something… if it’s something we both need we talk about it and go and get it together… I would never and I know Tina would never say “NO” if we wanted something…
Alice: I didn’t mean it that way…
Tina: I’m late… goodbye everyone…
Bette walks Tina out…
Shane: Man what is your problem…
Dana: If I wasn’t here I wouldn’t believe it… they are our friends…
Alice: I didn’t mean it the way it sounded…
Lisa pulled up and Tina got in and they left… Bette just looked at Alice and got into her car…
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Bette arrived at work… she was really upset with Alice… she has said a few things in the past… but this takes the cake… what the hell is wrong with her…
James: Excuse me Bette but you have a visitor and she says she is not going away…
Bette: Who is it…
James: She also said not to tell you… what can I say… we have an easy morning or else I would of told her she is shit out of luck…
Bette: Well now you have my curiosity… send her in…
Alice walks in carrying a beautiful bouquet of flowers…
Bette: You’re at the wrong office…
Alice: Well I am also on my way over to her office… I thought I would say I was sorry to the easy one first…
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Hey MG, I’m with packer for letting your fans vote if they want you to continue with the story. You’re one of the first writers in my list of favorite authors! Ok ok so you’re not the only one there,but after a year long of continuos reading (all from the very first story they ever posted) i’ve got 68 other writers on that list EKKK! So….you’ve got my vote to continue, please please continue with your awsome story MG! I can always click on your story everytime I’m coming in to check for new chapters:))…..LOL
Ohh….I almost forgot to wish you good luck with your job. I know the feeling after hearing something similar in may of this year…..but’we’ll know no sooner than november what is going to happen as of the first of february 2008. Bye bye
Rnjoy talking to you so much,an on your birthday, Gkad you got the package that day. You can go to sleep on your Mets pillow case and drean of the Met winning the World Series. Hey Lady, You can stop writing this. So people has no tasteand because of you and the writer that started this site we have been entertain for almost 5 yrs. It their lost but don’t make us be the losers. we will read because we enjoy your stories. Praying and thinking of you and George today and your jobs thanks
I really MENT to say YOU CAN;T STO pWRITING THIS STORY. THANK
You are NOT allowed to end this! Good luck with your job. *crosses fingers*
LMAO @ Frank! What a funny Dad to have. I feel for Tina, she’s had a rough week. I hope this is not the beginning of a low self esteem issue. She is a career woman and a fox at that. Alice definitely knows how to put her feet in her mouth but I know she loves B&T.
Hey Mary, got home and received your message, I will be sure to email that wonderful woman!!! ;- ) As for the chatper brilliant…as for you stopping ARE YOU F*CKING CRAZY???? Don’t you ever stop what YOU love doing girl. Who gives a shit about numbers?? This isn’t the Nielsen Ratings! You still have all those hundreds of people that DO read, and DO keep coming back. Don’t get so hung up on that sweetie. Numbers mean nothing. I have always said, that if I can reach ONE person…JUST ONE person to bring them a smile, a chuckle, promote them to think, to make them feel that someone identifies with their struggles, then I am blessed. Let me tell you something, long after Fan Fic has been put to rest, will it matter how many numbers you had? OR, will it matter if you touched someones life because of that “writte” word, that power of the pen? Don’t ever let yourself get caught up in the trivial parts of writing babe. I LOVE writing, and if I get 50 or 5000 hits, it all means the same to me. I hope you can embrace this concept honey. We’ll be sure to talk offline more. xoxoxo
PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!Do NOT stop. I love this story. When I first ran across an current post about 6 or 8 months ago, I went back and read all chapters beginning with the first year of the rest of their life. I believe that I read every chapter in about 2 weeks flat. Your writing is wonderful! Good luck with the job.
7 pages i am sooooooooooo happy!!!!!!!!! end the story what!!!!!!!!! nooooooooooo and u know that was hot al get u foot out of ur mouth
Hey Mary Grace. It’s a shitty place to be with a job & those of us who have been in the same or similar situations can sympathize. As for your story, only you can decide to continue or not. But I have to tell you, there are hundreds of us who will always eagerly await the next chapter……
I love this story. I know I pretty much missed the very beginning but I would love for you to continue it. Maybe change the name and start from chapter 1. I could deal with that. Besides can’t let the hot tub go not being used. And then there is the baby, so I am begging you please do not stop writing this story.
Hey, MG, thanks for the message and good luck with the job, been there and know how stressful that can be. I guess I didn’t get the tone, but I was surprised that everybody jumped down Alice’s throat. Maybe cause I’m single I interpreted it as meaning it’s harder to buy things like new cars when it’s just one income and not two. And if folks don’t know foot in mouth is part of the Alice experience by now, I guess they never will. And MG, what’s to become of those of us who DO read?
I like the story very much. Some people have no taste
It’s been awhile, but I can see why. I wish you luck on your job. I have been missing this story and you did not disappoint it was a great chapter. Can’t wait to see what comes next. You are right not many people will read that many chapters to catch up (I wouldmit’s great), but even if they start at this point they will be nothing more than pleased ;) please continue.
i love this story so mutch and i’ll be sad to see it come to an end… but if you love writing this story so mutch (and it shows!!) you shouldn’t stop !!! there are still alot of us that love reading it and can’t wait untill you update again! i hope you got some good news about your job ! i’ll keep my fingers crossed! pps
Please don’t stop the story. I love reading it. I haven’t been commenting because my mama passed away 3 weeks ago. I am really depressed so don’t make it worse. Good luck with your job. You are in my thoughts.
MG,wow it seems like for ever since we have talked and that needs to change.good luck with your job babe.and i think you should let ur fans voted for you to continue or not too.we are the ones it’s going to hurt the most.(WERE SPOILED)im glad frank finally pulled his head out and did right by his daughters,and alice she doesnt know better just BEAT HER oops she will like that too much*wink*.love this update looking forward for more to come when your back from Vegas baby. GO METS!!!! love you!
Funnyone… i know… and its because of the ones who READ… that makes this very hard on me… i love this story… i love writing this story… so believe me it pains me to even think about ending it…
MG, Another great CHapter!!! Thanks PPS
Hey AMG, Just loving all of this fabulous fan fiction. It is brilliant. Thank you for sharing it woth me. Your Loyal Fan.
Awsome chapter MG, I love this story and always happy to see you post, please don’t stop writting it and please continue with the story, you are an amazing writer and we all love you. Good luck with the job my friend and happy news will come to you!