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Bisous; #21
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“You have no idea how much it kills me to see you like this,” Bette said as I felt her tears fall down her cheeks, “I wish I had never let you go, I wish I had never hurt you like this. Please forgive me.”
I found her face with my hands to wipe away her tears, “There is nothing to forgive, I know you needed time. There was just a lot of information to process and…I don’t blame you. I never have…”
“I have always loved you, my heart has never belonged to anyone else,” she whispered to me.
“As has mine, Bette,” I finally managed to bring myself to say out loud, all the feelings I had kept hidden for so many years, “I have loved you since the beginning, but I was so afraid that I might lose you…”
Bette held my face in her hands as she silenced my words with a passionate kiss.
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My heart swelled with all the unspoken feelings finally reciprocated. It was like a burst of a million supernovas, brilliantly lighting the darkness I had been trapped in for so long.
“Helena…” Bette breathed onto my skin as she traced my cheekbones, neck and ears with tender kisses. I felt her fingertips skate across the thin fabric of my cotton t-shirt as she slowly lifted it up, wrapping her arms around my bare waist. The touch of her skin on mine brought a shiver of pleasure down my spine. She gently bit my neck, pulling me closer to her.
“Gawd,” I heard her whisper into my ear, “I want you.”
I smiled, trying to find her face with my hands. My thumbs stroking her eyelids and moving down to her lips; in this infinite black abyss, Bette’s face still shone like a beacon on a stormy night. I could envision her features in my mind; every happy-wrinkle she had around her eyes, every laugh-line that formed around her mouth. Hers was the face that I had long memorized by heart.
Bette kissed my fingertips, “What are you doing,” she murmured as her hands moved down the contours of my back.
I replied, “I’m trying to see what your facial expression is now.”
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Awesome chapter i mean i felt like i was there…now that would have been something to see or join in lol.Words cannot express how beautiful that was hun…Hope your okay!Well Tash (Grin) not to cause trouble i hope.Words cannot express how i when i come home from work i love for a new chapter into a world away from my own.So i thank you personally from the bottom of my heart.Well…Bette wasnt expecting more, i think it was brave of Helena to delve into something sexual when she is unaware of how she feels and is getting used to her disability. But good on her for reciporcating Bette’s physical passion.And Bette loved every minute of it. Helena’s first orgasm wow and what a big one too…we always remember our first lol well i dunno if i do but hey Helena definetely wont forget.Dont forget to update asap ok make sure you do…by the way i had a feeling about your username and i was right.But i though E stood for the first name of your uni so how good am i.Here’s your round of a appalause from me here in lil my little bubble. Forever Loyal F@n.Caramel AKA Charly xx
:) Heheh! Eyes! Need eyes!!! o_o
Damn! I’m speechless and horny. :-)
Oh Euni don’t ever think you don’t put a smile on my face, even when I’m growling at you. Don’t you read your comments because I’m thinking your not feeling your worth in this writing world. If I could write one page that had collective thought, well I would write it about all the authors here that keep me entertained so beautifuly. P.S. your right on that list. Thank you so much. Md
P.S. I will send you the invoice for the oxygen.
That was awesome. Her never having a organism before. You know it was really a buisness with her and not about sex. bravo to you thanks
oh damn…I need another shower…this was beautiful…please tell me there is lots and lots more…oh my this was awesome…now that’s something to be thankful for!!!
REFRESH… LOL… love and hugs Cuz, JC
Let me just catch my breath here for a second…OK…Shoo…Eu, I am so proud of you…you have blown me away with your beautiful imagery “It was like a burst of a million supernovas, brilliantly lighting the darkness I had been trapped in.”…just reading that sentence sent me into her dark world…and left me reveling in her wonderful experience…I love being right…you can write the most sensual, amazing love scene…WOW again and BRAVO…so no more shyness…bring them on girl!!!Thanks for the post:)PPS
Whoa! I forgot to breathe. There. Better! You never fail to amaze me, E! That was so great. The writing, the words, THE everything! Thanks for the post. It’s awesome! :)
You know you have some happy readers with this chapter, don’t you? You should not only pat yourself on the back or head, but I giving you a standing ovation. That love scene was tender and hot. And when Bette said “There’s a first time for everthing” All I could think about was damn I need a smoke. Which is strange because I don’t smoke. And just like Helena, I do hope she get her sight back real soon. This was just an excellent chapter! You have done well my little chef. I guess it’s fair to say you were cooking?
That was a nice way to wake up…For me..Of to work and a full comment later…
Aw my feelings are hurt, I didn’t get a personal shout out, I feel so left out cry cry cry. just kidding :) This was one very hot chapter and I can only imagine how the sensations must feel when you can’t see. great chapter sweetie !
Oh, EU! That was so sweet! You couldn’t have been more tender if you tried! Your words paint such beautiful pictures. I loved this update so much that I went back and read it again! =) I seem to be doing that a lot with this story! I love immersing myself in your words and floating through your story, watching the characters and the scenes unfold. Bette was so loving and gentle and absolutely the most perfect person to give and experience Helena’s first orgasm! That was just breathtaking to read. I felt as if I was there hearing and seeing everything without interrupting the mood and flow. You really are a talented li’l soul. I’m glad that you are brave enough to share your creativity with us. Keep up the great work, girl! You know I’m loving it! Thanks updating. PPS! I know… I know… I always say, ” PPS” but you know what they say… You can never have too much a of a good thing!… So….ummmmm…. ahem… =)
That was wonderful. I just hope Helena will enjoy and don’t fight against their love. She isn’t a burden for Bette respectively a little one (if you can say so) that Bette is more than ready to shoulder.
Oh Cuzzie Cuz… that was just so very beautiful… and shush you… you cannot be thought to highly of… cause you are just completely inspiring… you have created such an amazing portrait of ‘love’ each side showing just how and how much they can love the other… Bette bring Helena to a place where she can trust and believe again… and then Helena without sight adapts… but more so comes full to life when she is able to show passion to the one person she has loved for all eternity… you my beautiful Cuz are just completely inspiring… and yes we shall catch up soon… chat with you later… love ya, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angel)
That was amazing!!! Great chapter! I really hope Helena will be able to see again soon! Keep up the great work!! I’m loving it!
i love ur writing. The way you weave words is amazing. You use the right words and phrases at just the right time to convey this beautiful image. Its sensual, its beautiful, its just great! And thanx for your support, I know u and JC have my back lol
i just got back to town and i couldn’t wait to get caught up with this story, but you surpassed all my expectations, great, great job!!!!!luved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!