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Blisters in the Sun: Part 2
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“Nuuu uh.” Helena said quietly. “We are not doing this.” Her eyes turned almost grey then, and the desire written in them gave her away.
“Why not?” Bette asked. Tina looked back and forth between them, at first confused, but then knowing, as Bette’s palms squeezed her hips. Helena, being more the exhibitionist than voyeur, was only mildly impressed—though still impressed. She leaned back and watched as Bette kissed Tina’s neck, her tongue darting out to taste, briefly, her teeth scraping lightly against the blonde’s skin.
“ohhhh my…” Helena’s whispered. But Tina’s eyes were so tender on her, desire smoldering just beneath the surface, that Helena reconsidered.
“Ok, Bette…” Tina drew her partner away, kissing her quickly. “Let’s take this a bit slow…I’m not sure I can just…”
Her words were interrupted when two hungry mouths descended upon her, Helena’s lips at her neck, taking up where Bette had left off, Bette’s on her mouth, chin, cheeks, almost comical in their over-exuberance as they led her over to the couch. When they lay together, awkwardly because of the size of the furniture, their movements gentled, grew reverent rather than merely lustful. Tina kissed Helena for long minutes, exploring the softness of her tongue tangled with her own, her lips and teeth, the corner of her mouth. Tina turned to Bette next while Helena moved to kiss the back of Bette’s neck.
“Now I want to watch you both…” Tina said hoarsely, pulling away from Bette and nudging her gently toward Helena. She was well aware that their bond was different than her bond with either woman, and she wanted to ensure that this would not become about pleasing her, or even coddling her as they were both prone to doing.
Hours passed, and the simple and nuanced act of kissing was more than enough. They communicated silently when it was time to stop, to let the evening speak for itself.
So for the second time in less than a fortnight, they fell asleep as a trio, with appropriate sleep wear this time. Though they did not want to treat their intimacies as forgone conclusion—lest they find themselves taking things for granted which never should be—they took new and exciting liberties. Hands wandered more than they might ever have before, bodies cuddled closer, and by morning, they were a tangle of warm limbs and steady heartbeats. Tina, the first to awake, noted that Bette slept almost completely on top of them, rather than on the bed. She giggled when she realized it, then shifted so that she could look at the two sleeping beauties.
TBC
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That TBC (with no question mark) makes me very happy. So does the fact that Ninny managed to snag themselves a sperm donor; if they screw up parenting as badly as they screwed up “Lez Girls,” it’s comforting to know the framily is there to serve as a safety net. I love the Bette/Helena/Tina triangle and this story’s non-angsty celebration of free love. One worry: if Tina continues to write bad poetry, will Jenny feel threatened by the competition?
Hmmmm HB I love your stories but the threesome of Bette/Helena and Tina just don’t do it for me….not sexy at all. I prefer couples. Why does Helena have to hang with boring Bette/Tina why not Shane/Alice? When I say Alice and Shane I mean friendship not sex.
i had to laugh when tasha and alice got caught in france,lol…tina needs to do something to get out of this funk she is in…. needs to see dr. dan.lol oddly i can’t get into bette and helena stories, to me an odd pairing but this one of the three i find so well written and amazingly funny in its own way. jenny and nikki are so funny together…. please… tina needs to give up writing bad stories and what not… jenny is bound to go wacko on her sooner or later…lol… rofl at shane and puppies.. great update :)
The trio seems to be growing together despite any hesitations Helena has. I am glad to see there has been a thaw from the iciness of the girls. I look forward to seeing where you take us next.
I’ll admit I haven’t read it yet but I’m happy to see it. I’ll read it over the weekend. I see from the comments there is lots to think about.
So “Lez Girls” was a flop. Given Jenny’s creative *abilities* (don’t tell Sofa I stole her asteriks) that’s no surprise. Given same, I truly hope Ninny doesn’t attempt procreation, either. Isn’t the world a fucked up enough place without Jenny’s offspring roaming about? The thought along makes me want to retch. And since it was France, why didn’t they simply put the security video featuring Alice and Tasha on as a objet and offer cocktails and hors d’oevres for the debut instead of giving them the sort of warning more typical of American morality? (It’s that goddamn Puritan streak, I tell ya) And what’s a well muscled guy doing wearing a Ramones shirt? It’s not like Joey was any paragon of physical beuaty-in fact he was one of the ugliest guys I’ve ever layed eyes on-God rest his soul. Well, it’s good to be back. It’s good to see you back. I’ll be in touch when there’s slightly less shit hitting the fan-may I make it through the last 2 weeks of school. I don’t think this particular story needs any werewolves. And I’m so glad you canned the ?
And you’re right about Shane’s reaction to the “puppies”. Any self-respecting butchish street urchin would have stood her ground and not got all girly-squealy about some nice, clean, wellgroomed stunt rats. And Angelica was wrong about the “puppies”, too. When I saw a tourist couple walking on W. 52 St. react to the rat scurrying away from the heap of garbage bags late one night, I smiled at them as I passed and said “nice kitties”.
I love your sense of humour. Jenny and the knife.lol. Tina drinking red wine and writing bad poetry lol. And I think Alice In France. lol I love your threesome. I am going to read again. I love it you did amazing..
Hey there, you do know you are only a 4 hr drive away… and if I have to walk I will make it in 4 hours or die trying to make sure you never give up on the writing… yep… you will be writing as long as me and well I think that might be forever :wink:… hehe… as for this story… lets see… when these three actually find there barings and well just start acting like more of adults then little Angel well then hehe… they might be deserving of their fates… but right know… let the healing come and love and passion are certainly ingredients for healing :wink: :wink:… you rock and roll my beautiful friend. Hugs, JC
I love the little snippets about the other couples–public sex for Talice, sperm choosing for Ninny :).
Ok Finally read it. Cracking up as I thought I would. Hmmmm would love to hear more about Talice’s adventure…I wonder about Shane and Helena’s little tryst and if this story of free love might we expect a foursome or some other threesome combo’s….Great story Co-captain…(One comment on the comments…Beachlife I thought you liked my Bette and Helena story…Hmmmm Things that make you go hmmmm)
Oh God. Ninny (HA! xD) creating a child together? *shudder* Dammit now I’ll have that Ramones song stuck in my head AGAIN. lol Sounds like Tina really had it rough growing up. I’m not sure what’s worse: depression and anxiety that rear their ugly heads at an early age, or stay dormant until then come crashing down unexpectedly.
Helebette, this was so good! I think there is more room for another Shane/Helena one night stand. Can’t wait to read more!