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Boundary of Fear and Love 4
Do you get it yet? I dont want anything else. I want you.
I want to get it. Really I do. Im just not buying it. Not her sincerity, because Dana doesnt have an insincere bone in here, but if shes thought about it enough to really know that answer.
I know you believe that. But how do you know? I mean Ive had a bunch of relationships. Good and bad. You havent had a lot. Arent you afraid that one day youre going to look at me and think why did I jump into this so fast?
She actually laughed at that. Im not sure whats so funny. Fast? Alice, weve known each other for years. Ive been attracted to you from the first time I saw you. Fast? No, I look at you and wonder how I got lucky enough that the person who knows me best, who knows the best and worst there is to me, loves me.
I almost believe her. She makes it seem so easy. I want to believe you Dana. Im just scared that this is going to blow up at us.
Then lean on me and when you have doubts, use my faith. Alice, youre right, Ive never had another real relationship. Lara doesnt count, I mean not really, I didnt let it last long enough to see what would happen. No matter what I felt. But maybe I got lucky my first time around. Isnt that a good thing?
She can be so nave. But I lover her for it. Im telling you, this Lara thing is going to come back and bite us in the *****. Notice that she didnt answer me about her. She didnt tell me what she feels about her. But Im done trying to talk about this. I want to remember those words she just said, with nothing bad attached to them. I dont know if I will ever have that much pure, unadulterated love spoken about me again in my life. Its never happened before, so Im not going to hold my breath on the future. People tend to get over the novelty of me pretty easily.
I leaned in and kissed her, softly, but full of passion, Yes it is good. As I deepened the kiss she moans. The vibrations in my mouth from her moan make my body weak. Im thankful that we were on the couch, otherwise I would of hit the floor. What that woman could do to my body. Didnt you have an ache you needed fixed?
(tbc?)
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(51 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
What great insight to what Alice is really thinking! I love the story but ya stopped it right what it was getting good…! Post soon!
Yay you continued! Good thing cause I really didnt wanna follow through with my threat…;) “Lara thing is going to come back and bite us in the ass.” Not before I bite her!
I agree with Atenea, Dana doesnt need to see Lara to know that she wants Alice. I love reading Alice’s POV in this story, post soon!!!!
Hell, yah! You’ve got to keep going with this, girl! You handled Alice and Dana’s thinking really well. This is how I hoped season 3 would be like. Dana being firm on how she feels about Alice? Great! And the “chutzpah”? …loved it!
are you kidding? of course tbc :P I don’t know why all the people has to have a lot of relationships, life and the way we wanna live it, is so different for everybody
I love your story, and happy to have a spoiler-free one. Alice made me cringe in this, but loved how you wrote her thinking. And Dana was great. Can’t wait to see where you take them next . .
You did a wonderful job of expressing Alice’s insecurity. I was happy that Dana came across as strong in this story, rather than wishy-washy.
YES tbc!!! :D and since you’re writing a spoiler-free story, you know you cant make them break up right? yay!
How can I miss this? I didn’t notice you posted. There’s no question here, you must continue! So damn good!
How you are writing this story is how i envisioned my ideal season 3 playing out–and then i had to go and be a spoiler whore! Anyway, i think you should continue on with this story–it was nice to see Dana be so decisive. I think it would be great if Lara isn’t the problem for them in the long run, you know, maybe all their drama could come from them just being an everyday couple. that would be nice to see. however you choose to portray this, I’m sure it will be brilliant. You always seem to do an amazing job. Keep up the good work!
please continue. i love how this story is coming along so far.