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Carmine lips : caramel skin # 7 (not # 6 – thanks helene78 :))
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She closed her eyes again.
She loved my wetness, my silkiness, my warmness. I knew she loved to trip inside of me and when I begged…
…When I begged…I knew from that day on, that I ruined….I ruined all that alphaness she carried and sale with one plea.
I fooled with her inner control when I voice one wish. She couldn’t resist.
The moment I begged I was the one in control.
“Deeper….D…e..e..p p …errrr, Bette…please…please…babe…”
“Yeah…babe…So good…You’re so wet…”
I kissed her hard.
I felt I would pass out any second.
Everything overloaded my senses. Her body pressed me. Her deep strokes. Her heavy breathe. Her chest’s movements –up and down…Her sweat.Her eyes spoke, again, the unreleased sentence.
She kissed me deeply, curled her fingers and found my sensitive spot.
I, automatically, bit her bottom lip.
I felt the soft taste of blood. But she didn’t care. She kept kissing me with hunger. She was desperate for my love. She knew my love would feed her.
I broke the connection.
I sultry voiced, between my heavy breathes: “The pact is sealed, babe…”
“No it’s not.” She shot me and returned to crash my lips and bit my lower lip while her kiss devoured me.
Between her breathes came the conclusion, while I felt a sweet pain on my lip.
“Now…Now…it’s is…”
First she dived into my eyes.
Then she unchained her lips and tongue.
Finally she stroked me harder.
“Ahhhhhhhh”
She stroked.
“You’re mine… ….”
Again.
“I am…”
And again. And again. And again.
My body gave up on me. She pushed me against the edge. I pushed her against the edge.
“Oh, God, babe…Ohhhh…. I’m coming…”
“Tina…T…” She stroked senseless my pussy. I pumped hard my body. She pressed my clit and hit my g-spot.
“I´m commmmmmmmminnnngggggg, baaaabeeee… ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”
“Darling….God…Tina… I’m coming… I’m coming, babe…ohhhhhhhh”
I sensed her body trembling; quivering in mine…We came together.
And we came …
I couldn’t stop coming and she couldn’t stop fucking me.
We came together and we kept coming until a blackout took our bodies …until we collapsed completely.
When we finished it was still not finished. It began the sweet dance from the ones who love. I saw myself with four arms. That moments when nobody kne to whom belonged that elbow, that feet, that thigh. The heart, we share: one. We, lovers, fell sleep carrying the impression, the longing thought that, to the ones that woke up this way, nothing bad could happen. Soul’s embraced, immovable bodies lulled by a fullness tender sense that took place in our hearts.
A feeling of freedom and slavery consumed me.
Her weight… her heart… Her breathe.
She let her face rested on my chest. My arms embraced her. She kept herself between my legs.
I felt our hearts pounding together.
Together.
I thought that day…. I still think it today .I wanted…I want…I would redeem my world through her pleasure.
My last words came out louder:
“You’re unforgettable.”
The soundtrack of my dreams: her heartbeat.
When dawn came unnecessarily, I panicked for the second time.
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Braz going ot post for the first time in your story,,,I must say you have a way with words and I like it. You can feel what both women are feeling and how you have made both women want each other so much,,,love it!!
I never said it was the most terrible pain… (it certainly is one of the most enjoyable ones) just that walking could be very difficult, but I said nothing about floating inches above the floor ;-)) — And I certainly enjoyed very much this new ride, in fact, there are very few I would enjoy more ;-)) …. but the very last sentence “makes me panick for the second time”… well, now tell me that Tina and I are just panicking for nothing, hmm ?! – I really love your way with words, and also the way you use music (and lyrics) in your stories : you obviously have a vast culture, from your posts, and also your notes… what do you teach : litterature, philosophy, both ? apart from “love lessons” of course ;-)
and oh, just to correct the typo : this is chapter 7 already (chapter 6 was on sunday)…… but you can continue for seven more… or 17, or 77… well if you are not too tired : as for myself I don’t get tired by reading your posts, in fact I get so “awaked” by your stories that it’s difficult to go sleeping… but I must, since it’s midnight right here ;-)
Braz I had read this when I had gotten home from work, and um…..DAMMIT!!!!! You are getting the water bill woman. YES YOU ARE! ; – )))) You are the Queen of Lesbian Sex, whether it is tender or raw, it is you babe. Talk to you soon honey. xoxoxo
DAMN DAMN DAMN girl, Im not event cooling down yet from the last chapter and now you’re getting me more hot again, damn I need ice water or cold shower lol, so hot so hot in here lol. Damn B&T are so fucking hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Sorry for commenting so late, Braz, honey, my computer is broken. Oh no! Well, this was beautiful. Truly profound. Still think that something bad is going to happen though.. Which is sad. Hm.. I should get to sleep. I have to be up in 4 hours so thank you for this, I’m sure it’ll evoke plenty of wonderful dreams :) Post soon, babe xxx
Oh man, that was incredible. The pain, the joy, and the feeling of being inseperable. But alas, the ending is scaring me.
after reading this …….. When dawn came unnecessarily, I panicked for the second time. I now wonder what curve ball is coming.
Your thoughts, babe…your thoughts…what she would have to share? ;)
Well if Tina still has more to share with us then Bette must not have had to leave too early then. ;)
I love the way the story being told. Love the way the words flow. Thanks for posting this. Love your writting. PPS.
man I need a flame retardent computer for this story.. pms
God that was breathtaking!! I’m just amazed by your fic Braz!!!I have some problem with my laptop so I don’t know if i’ll be able to read and comment your next chapters :(!But i’m sure they’ll be amazing!!And I support you al the way!!Your fic is just AWESOME!!Thank for this my dear Braz!!