Fan Fiction
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Chapter31.
I want to show you how much I love you.
Millie’s words found their way into my ears; floating and caressing the currents of sound waves to slither into my brain and infuse my nerve endings with aphrodisia and desire. I was writhing and my breathing laboured as the flirting fingers within my trousers began to delve into my most secret and sensitive sectors.
The soft and palpable bundle of nerves that seemed to throb for Millies touch was rewarded with exactly that.
Millie. I gasped as she held my erect ***** between two talented fingers and began moving slowly, up and down.
Millies head pressed against mine for a moment as she caught her breath, I watched her lips move wordlessly as she held her eyes shut. It was pretty astounding to watch someone make love to you, observe the array of expressions which could enter their features. Millie had never looked so beautiful; her coffee-coloured ringlets hanging round her flushed face, the odd curl stuck to her moist temple. The rosy cheeks pushing through her make up and showing a scattering of freckles along her nose, the perfect lips full and open, mouthing an occasional personal prose of passion that would never leave her lips.
I reached my hand up to caress her cheek and she opened her eyes, smiling down at me with her dulcet dimple joining in with the smile. I nearly came right there and then, the simplicity of looking into Millies eyes almost sending me over the edge. Instead I let out a laugh, relaxing my body as I continued to lose myself in the chocolate brown depths above me.
Noticing the inner battle I was having to control my body, Millie removed her fingers and brought them to her mouth, licking them clean for me to see. I really had to put an x-rated certificate on this woman, everything she did was the most sensual, sensory and sexiest I had ever seen or experienced. Seeing the look on my face after witnessing her feast on my juices pleased Millie and she leant down to capture my lips with her own. I kissed her back, only too happy to comply when I felt her tongue ask for entry. I could taste myself on her tongue, it was new and different. Millie noticed my sudden fragility and sunk her tongue even deeper into my mouth, then pulled it out; running the tip down mine as she did so. I couldn’t help put moan at this intimate display of oral foreplay, the combination of the juices in our mouths actually added to our ever heightening arousal.
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(49 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
Seahurst has the best comment so I’m with her all the way. This is a five Loohing forward to boyh in LA together. thanks so much
aka ?. I was looking 4 a cont. of the shane and tab story.
this is worth more than 5 bloody stars! i’ve fallen in love with this story and your writing! please continue and post soon!
Hey Kat, I’m just catching up….Another superbly written chapter….You never cease to amaze me with your writing…..5 stars all the way:)
Diddo to what Seahurst said. And I know I have said it before, but I am going to say it so much more clearly now. The idea of the rating system seems not accurate to me in the least, because you always bring your reads such well written prose, and interesting, full characters. If this a four, then anything I’ve ever written is like a two or three. Sorry for the rant, but your story is so 20 stars.
This line….. “It wasn’t a perfect world and neither Millie nor I was perfect, so we would have to rely on the perfection of our love to over rule the imperfection of our mediocre minds…” was wonderful. This is a five all the way!! Thank you.
OMG u posted this really quickly, thank you!!!! im with Seahurst, that line was like…wow! Not looking fwd to Millie leaving… but looking fwd to Trixie going to LA *wink wink*