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Choose Your Own Dana and Alice Adventure: And Interactive Story (Part 4)
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Tina nodded at Alice, “You know where I will be if you need me.”
“Right back at you, T. I’m sorry my drama had to cross paths with your drama, but I am glad we have each other to commiserate with.”
Tina knowing this wasn’t the right time to voice her concerns about Dana and Alice’s situation simply nodded and went out to the living room to settle in for the night.
Shane watched Tina go and then turned back to Alice, “Call if you need anything. Doesn’t matter when… just call, ok?”
“Ok… I might take you up on that.”
Shane smiled, “Good. Now get some rest and I will see you later.” She waved and walked toward the door.
“Later, Shane.”
Shane walked into the living room and said her goodbyes to Tina. She shook her head in amazement as she walked to her truck. This was why she didn’t let things complicate her life. Even if she did sometimes think it was a copout that was how she liked it. It was who she was.
Alice settled under the covers. At least she had a reason to skip her nightly hygiene ritual. Tired out from crying she was soon asleep and dreaming. The song was back and this time she could see the words flying in front of hertaunting her as they dipped and spun around her head.
“The one where I surprise you by showing up at your front door. saying ‘let’s not ask what’s next, or how, or why’” *********
When Dana and Tonya arrived home there was a veiled hostility weighing down the air. They went upstairs to the bedroom and when Dana started to pull down the covers on the bed Tonya stopped her.
“What do you think you’re doing,” Tonya asked?
The tone in Tonyas voice surprised Dana, so all she could do was to stare back at her dumbly.
“You are not sleeping in this bed with me, and just to make sure we’re on the same page you know you are not going to see Alice unless I am there with you,” Tonya stated.
Dana opened her mouth and shut it. She went to stand at the closet to find something to sleep in, but quickly closed the door. She wanted to sleep in Alice’s clothes. She wanted to be able to smell Alice on her. Grabbing a blanket off the foot of the bed she went downstairs and fell onto her couch. She curled up as tight as she could and pulled the blanket over her head. The collar of Alice’s plaid button down shirt was lying on her cheek and it was soon wet as Dana’s tears hit it in a steady flow. She pulled the shirt as far up on her face as she could get it so she could breath in the scents of Alice. She let herself sink into sleep where she dreamed the last time that she had seen Alice wear the shirt. It was that day they were arrested at the CAC during the Provocations protest. Dana sighed in her sleep as she now had a new appreciation of how incredibly ***** Alice looked in that shirt.
A) Should Dana take Alice’s clothes back to her the next day?
B) Should Dana keep Alice’s clothes for a little while and not see her? C) I am intorducing a new feature here. You guys get to tell me what you think choice C should be. If you just want to pick A or B that is fine, but if you want to submit your own C go for it.
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C) Tonya and Dana go to the Planet. When they get there Dana has to go pee, but when she gets in there she runs into Alice…Dana keeps the clothes. I love that plaid shirt of hers! I was so excited when I heard you describing what it looked like lol.
I’m with Nix, get Tonya and Dana to bump into Alice at the Planet. Maybe Dana sneak away for a little apology and kiss at the washroom? I can’t get enough of Danish kisses
She should take the pants back but “forget” the shirt. This gives her another chance to see alice. When she is there they should talk about everthing. Then Dana SO needs to get rid of the psycho bitch that is Tonya!! I love this story its fun to be involved, this was a great idea!
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Good story.
Im not sure about this one. i guess i will go with nix’s idea of C.
i’m with nix and layla_gray.. and maybe dana gives the jeans back but keeps the shirt.. btw that shirt looked hot on alice in ‘locked up’ :P
Got to be C for me too, Danish in a bathroom, at the Planet or the lap dance club. Like the way you’re writing this.
I’m going to go with C. I liked the idea that they take Tina out. Dana and Alice get to see each other again but they are under Tonya’s watch and tension heats up. I don’t want Dana giving back the clothes, in fact I want her wearing Alice’s jeans to the evening out. She’s not gutsy enough to defy Tonya to her face but she can send Alice a message that only they will get.
You’re reading my mind zephyr… STOP IT… no really thanks for the comment. In fact thanks to everyone for their comments I am working on 5 right now.
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C) Alice, Dana, Tonya, and Shane take Tina out (like the episode “Lap Dance”) but this time they actually get to the hot kiss in the bathroom and Tonya walks in on them. Love the story!
i agree with jodeye33 they should take tina to see a lap dance and dana and alice should get it on and tonya to see and split with dana coz the soon dana gets rid of her the better!
I have to agree with nix iv for the next part this is a great story and I love it please post soon
I am with nix, sorry jodeye i dont think tonya would agree to go out with them all, but the idea of bathroom is excellente gimme more soon
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so i like the idea of them meeting up in the bathroom again, it’s sexy, but maybe we can see Tonya walk in on them this time. A little bit of karma for putting Dana through the bullshit. (sound mean….bitter party of one right here)