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City Of Angels Chapter 4: What goes around, comes around.
Dana was amazed at her new given abilities. She couldn’t believe how much faster she was. Not only was she able to keep up with the crow that was flying above her like a guided missile, she was able to run at blinding speed across the roofs of the large buildings. She found her self jumping the long gaps between each building. Almost as if she was flying.
Her legs carried her all the way out to an abandoned factory on the outskirts of town. The crow was parched on top of a telephone pole outside of the large factory.
Dana gently closed her eyes. AS soon as she shut her eyes, she discovered another new found ability. Her vision became one with the Crow’s. She was seeing Officer Bryce Johnson inside of the large factory preparing more drugs that were to be taken onto the streets. She could see that he was laughing at something but she didn’t know what it was.
As she opened her eyes, the burning rage inside began to boil like hot water. She clenched her fist as she walked towards the graffiti covered factory.
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The walls of the interior the lab was a mixture of the red brick that the walls were made of along with the yellow stains from the chemicals that were made to use the drugs. There numerous heating mantles rigged along side the walls with flasks, and condensers. Trays of chemicals with the drug imprudence where placed neatly on tables that were connected to the large machinery that pumped out the drugs. Across from those machines are 50 drums of the finished drug product known as Bliss.
Dana dropped from the hole in the ceiling and swooped down silently like a panther onto one of the tables.
She was astonished at how much this factory was able to produce so much life ruining poison a day. She knew she had to put a stop to this once and for all. Bryce’s loud and obnoxious laughing echoed through out the entire facility.
Bryce was working away in protective gloves and a respirator mask. He began to fill up the small paper bags with the newly manufactured Bliss. Occasionally he glanced up at the television monitor and laughed at the brutal snuff film that he was watching.
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(11 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
great job! dana’s ass kicking completely blew me away. damn. i can’t imagine what dana has in store for the rest of those people responsible for her’s and alice’s murders. the carmen scene was so sad but sweet at the same time. looking forward to more!!
You rock Eleck thank u so much for writting through without making me want to cry lol Dana really did kick some ass. I just hope she doesnt loose herself in the revenge. I watched C 2 and 3 but it wasnt the same without B.Lee. Youre doing a fantastic job here Eleck and i cant wait to read the next chap so dont keep me waiting for 2 long plz! :P
great update! there is something sexy about dana getting her revenge. and i loved the moment between her and carmen.
that was great what will carman do now I can’t wait to find out please post soon I love it great update
Gruelsome kill..didn’t watch 2 or 3 since death of B. Lee..still has some catching up to do here.
Wow this chapter was totally awsome!!!! I was bouncing in my chair while reading!Please post soon,your doing a wonderful job!!!!
i’m in love with this story!! this was a really great chapter that you do, i feel like that i’m watching this on tv or something!! just keep it coming and good job!!!